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30th Mar 2009, 06:24 AM
My second Sims story. I don't want the other one to end to fast, so I decided to start another one. A story that has been going on for a while in my game but 1st time I decide to post it. Tittle says it all, It is about Veronaville. Hope you like it. Thanks to bP for permission to post it! Both stories will be regularly updated.
Tybalt was laying in his room on the bed and listening to music. His room smelled like fresh paint since the make over( which was 2 days ago) and it was giving him a headache.
He opened a window. He layed back on the bed and stared at the celling. He could hear Juliet in her room. Tybalt sighed and walked to his sisters room. He knocked on the door," Come in!" Juliet giggled out. Tybalt opened the door and hissed through his teeth," Julie, I'm keeping your secret but don't make me tell grandpa to come up here!"
" Sorry..." Juliet looked down. Tybalt looked behind her shoulder and saw Romeo sitting on the sofa," I'm surprised Hermia doesn't complain about you being loud. I can hear you two from my room..."
" I was about to but I heard you come in!" Hermia screamed from the bathroom making Tybalt jump up," Oh s**t! Hermia!"
" Sorry Tyb, I'm taking a bath!"
" I don't care, seriously!" Tybalt waved at the door," Look, Julie all I'm asking is to keep it down. I know grandpa sleeps like dead, but just try and be quiet..."
" Okey, sorry..." She whispered.
" How the hell did you get here?" he asked Romeo, who looked like he was about to fall asleep. Romeo looked up," Window..."
" Ah, old fashioned way...Do anything to her, I'll kill you!"
" I know the drill, Tybalt, I love her and I'm careful..." Tybalt left the room. He went outside. He heard his grandpa snoring. He He sat on the bench and looked at the sleeping Veronaville.
He closed his eyes and breathed in the fresh air. Veronaville was quiet, unlike Pleasantview. He has been there once. Small but loud little town. Veronaville will change alot in few days. Summer is over. New people are coming in hopes of starting new business, old people coming back from summer vacations and citizens that didn't go anywhere, are preparing for new school and working season. Tybalt sighed. He was single. He will go to university and he has not experienced anything. No first kiss, no first sex no love at all. He has been busy at his stydies and keeping his enemy clan away from his. He failed there with Juliet. He didn't wan her ending up like him. Lonely and grumpy. He let her be with Romeo, knowing that if grandpa finds out he is dead. He did because he cares. Like very bother does for his little sister. New school year starts in few days. He hated the fact he has to go back. It was his last year and he hated it. He hated the fights that girl had over him. They were pretty, but not pretty enough to interest him. Plus he didn't want their herpes. Eew. He sighed.
He saw Romeo walking back to his house,"Bye dude!" Rome waved at him. Tybalt gave him a cold look. If Juliet loves him, doesn't mean he has to as well.Juliet light went off. Few minutes later Hermia's went of too. He Went back upstairs. He turned of the radio in his room.
He changed into his pj and climbed in the bed. He stared at the celling thinking about the new school day. It did not excite him. It did not excite him at all.
Hope you like it :D Please leave comments they motivate me :D
30th Mar 2009, 07:09 AM
ooh yea! I like it...ill be looking forward for an update ! :]
30th Mar 2009, 07:35 AM
You do have a little bit of repetition, especially the beginning with using He to start several of your sentences. However you are doing well. I like your idea of doing the main character as Tybalt.
30th Mar 2009, 08:46 PM
good start so far. lookin forward to readin more :) keep it up
30th Mar 2009, 09:11 PM
great beginning. not very many people write about veronaville! i cant wait for more!
31st Mar 2009, 09:27 PM
I'm gonna write few more chapter for this story then I will go back to my other story. A little introdustion to Michaels, a family that I play with when I'm in Veronaville( other then Capp of course) I tried to portray Jordan as a family boy and very loving brother. Hope it turned out well. Forgive little speech bubbles tails and the plus signs :D Crap! I just realised the house doesn't have roof in the 1st picture. It does, but i forgot to turn it on >_< sorry for that...But still enjoy!
Chapter 1 - The Michaels
" I don't understand why did we have to move from Belladona Cove!" Lucy frowned.
" Sweetie, it was important for your dad's career!" Marina, her mom told her youngest child. Lucy still sat frowning, " Look at the positives honey, you get to make new friends..."
" Do not want!..." Lucy frowned even more and cover her face with a teddy bear. She then cuddled up on her brothers lap and started crying.
" Hey there, don't cry. I had to leave some friends behind, but am I crying?" Jordan, the oldest kid, stroked his sisters side," Now come on or boogieman will eat you!"
" Nooo..." Lucy cried even more.
" Jordan Michaels! Stop scaring your sister!" Dean, the father told in a sharp tone.
" Diana? Sweetie? Wake up we are almost here!" Marina sweetly said to her middle child who was sleeping leaning against the car window. Dian opened her eyes and looked outside the window," Say hello to your new home kids!" Marina smiled.
" Nice boxes are already here!" Dean parked the car. Michaels family got out and stretched. Diana squinted from the bright sun. Lucy ran up to her.
" Jordie said I'll get eaten by a boogie man!"
" There is no boogie man, Jordan is just being an idiot like always is...." Diana hugged her sister.
" Idiot would not get A+ in all the subjects...I'll race you up stairs!"
" Jordie it's unfair!" Lucy run after her oldest brother.
" Be careful!"Marina screamed, but kids were already upstairs," At least you are the sane one..." She smiled at Diana," Wanna help me with dinner after you pick your room?"
" Of course!" Diana went upstairs.
She heard Jordan and Lucy laughing their heads off in one of the rooms," I slay you evil dragon!" Lucy shouted on top of her lungs," Oh no please, I have wife and kids!" She heard Jordan reply in low dragon voice," Gotcha! Now I will tickle you to death!" she heard Lucy laughing.
She walked past the room her sibling were playing in and looked in the next one. This room had light orange, close to peach color walls and it had her sofa bed in the corner. There was also a book case," I assume this is mine, since it has my stuff here..." Diana settled her suitcase and looked out the window," Wow! Beautiful!" She exclaimed as she saw the town.
There were a lot of cars. People were moving back in and out. A lot of beautiful trees and houses. Two giant mansions opposite each other. they were on different river banks. She heard some one walk in her room. It was her dad with few boxes that said 'DIANA' on them," I guess that's your room?" Diana nodded and kept looking out the window," Wonderful isn't it? Mom said she needs your help with cooking, so when you are done just come down stairs."
He left he room. Diana followed him few minutes later.
Diana was cutting up the salad when she heard her brother and little sister roll down the stairs.
" You picked your rooms?" Marina asked steering pasta in her pot.
" Yeah, Diana, I'm in purple room next to you okey?"
" Whatever..." Diana nodded," I got the pink room!" Lucy shouted.
" Sweetie don't shout..." Dean told her. Marina served pasta. Diana put salad on the table and sat down," Guys, I enrolled you in private school, staring tomorrow."
" Great, bunch of snobs yet again..." Jordan rolled his eyes.
" Yay! I can't wait!" Lucy clapped her hands.
" At least some one is excited!" Marina smiled," Diana sweetie, is everything okey, you are being awfully quiet..."
" Just tired ma...Moving exhausted me.." Diana sighed," How come you two are so energetic I don't see it.." She addressed to Jordan and Lucy, who had a contest who will finish their meal faster.
Jordan seemed to be wining unlike Lucy was just making a mess of herself. They were to busy to reply to her, so Diana just rolled her eyes. After everyone was done with dinner Marina asked Diana to help her with dishes.
" Talk to me sweetie...I know that is not just moving that tired you out..." Diana smiled. Her mom knew her well," It's Dylan isn't it?"
" Yeah...We kinda started getting along and I had to move..."
" Belladonna Cove isn't that far. You can visit him anytime you want by train, you know that?"
" Yeah, but I don't know...I wanna see if there is any one here that would interest me...If it as bad as Jordan says..."
" What does he say?Sorry, I interrupted." Marina apologized.
" It is bunch of freaks here who have Shakespeare ancestors..." Marina chuckled. Diana continued," If it is as bad as Jordan says, I'll consider traveling everyday to visit him..."
" Not every day sweetie, I will allow it once in a while...Now go upstairs make sure Jordan and Lucy aren't still playing..." She hugged her daughter and continued with the dishes. Diana went upstairs and saw Lucy sleeping in the bed and Jordan sitting on the chair next to her and reading a story," So the fierce dragon attacked the prince, but prince dodged his fire breath. From the tower princess was watching the scene and was silently cheering for her prince charming. Prince..." He turned around and saw Diana," Hey." he whispered.
" Hi, she is sleeping?"
" Like a baby she is. Let's go." He turned of the lights and left the room," It is that guy on your mind right?"
" Dylan..." Diana corrected her brother.
" Fishy sort if you ask me...Maybe I'm being over protective..."
" You are, I'll be 16 soon, I can stand for myself..."
" Last time you said that, I had to beat up the guy who gave you a broken knee and a black eye..."
" I was 10 back then! Anyways, maybe I will meet some one here, I wanna see how things go..."
" Smart girl..." Jordan yawned. I will go to bed. We have school tomorrow, you should go to bed too Dinie..."
" I will, good night Jordie.."
" Mhm, Jordan walked into his room and closed the door. Diana went into her room and took out her diary. It was habit she had. She couldn't fall asleep if she didn't write anything in it. She sat on the floor.
It's Diana yet again. My day was very stressful. I had to leave Dylan, he seemed a bit upset. So am I. I hope everything goes well between me and him. I personally don't see him as a boyfriend, just a friend. I actually want some one strong and tough as my boyfriend. He is a bit on a romantic side. Well it is late, and I have nothing else to tell you. Good night Diary. I will see you tomorrow.
Diana J. Michaels
Hope you like the little introduction to the Michaels :D
31st Mar 2009, 09:45 PM
Wow, I really enjoy your stories. With Diana I can alrady see a romance between her and a certain redheadead heir ((Poor Dylan!)). Keep up the good work.
P.S. May I reccommend that you add the Tricou's to Veronaville? In my game they add another layer to the feud- plus Gvaordian and Tybalt make a cute three bolt couple.
31st Mar 2009, 09:47 PM
Wow, I really enjoy your stories. With Diana I can alrady see a romance between her and a certain redheadead heir ((Poor Dylan!)). Keep up the good work.
P.S. May I reccommend that you add the Tricou's to Veronaville? In my game they add another layer to the feud- plus Gvaordian and Tybalt make a cute three bolt couple.
You will see what's gonna happen :D Thanks for suggestion I'll keep that in mind, I need to add more families to Veronaville anyways..
1st Apr 2009, 02:55 AM
great update and i can see a potential tough boyfriend for Diana!
1st Apr 2009, 06:53 AM
awesome and i totally see a "potential" bf for miss dinnie hehe
great work! cant wait 4 more!
1st Apr 2009, 09:41 PM
It is fun to see what conclusions did people make :D just sit back and see what happens :D But is always nice to see what you think the outcome will be. sorry it's a bit short, I will maybe post 2nd part tonight! Enjoy!
Chapter 2 part 1 - 1st Day At School
Jordan was running through the school followed by Diana.
" Who went to bed late? Damn how nice! We missed the bus on the first day of school! Where is your class?"
" I went as soon as we said good night to each other...It's Lucy and her DO NOT WANT! to wake up..." Diana breathed out.
" Where is your class?" Jordan asked yet again.
" Oh if I knew!...WAIT! Here!" She pointed at the door that said "Grade 10: Mrs. Capp".
Jordan walked her up to the door," Will you manage by yourself? I'll meet you at the brake." He kissed her and run off. Diana knocked on the door. A blond hair teacher opened the door and smiled at Diana," Why hello there! What's your name?"
" Diana Jane Michaels...." Diana felt herself blushing.
" Ah, That's right! Don't worry, I will forgive the lateness, it is your first day after all! Come in sweetheart, come in!" Diana came in and felt 20 pairs of eyes staring at her,"' Class, meet your new classmate, Diana Jane Michaels. Her family recently moved to Veronaville, So please treat her well. Diana take a seat next to Juliet." Diana looked and saw a redhead wave at her. She sat next to her," Hi, I'm Juliet Capp, but you can call me Julie."
" I'm Diana, my brother calls me Dinee. He just does.." Diana squeezed out a smile," Nice to meet you Julie!"
" Like wise! By the way teacher is my aunt. Capp family is one of the richest families in Veronaville..." ' Here we go...A snobby spoiled rich girl!.." Diana thought to herself and rolled her eyes.
" Since every one here, I will introduce myself. My name is Regan Capp, but call me Mrs. Capp. I will be your English teacher. I also teach geography in grade 11 and up. Let's begin our class. English is about communication, so if you have anything to say, please speak up! I would love to hear what you have to say! Let's open our books at page 3, and read the introduction..."Diana realized she doesn't have any books yet. Juliet pushed her book towards her," You can read from mine with me." She smiled," Thanks." Diana smiled back at her. " Maybe is not that bad after all!" Diana thought as she read through the book introduction with Juliet.
After English, it was math followed by art. Juliet and Diana were walking to the cafeteria while Diana was taking notes in her book.
" So i need mathematics Grade 10 and set of paints..."
" And brushes..."Juliet added.
" Oh yeah, thanks!"
" What do you want to eat? My treat so pick anything you want," Juliet took out her purse," Damn...I only have 50...Hmm..Oh! come one, I gotta ask Tybalt for change.."
" Who?" Diana followed Juliet.
" My older brother, He is a senior..." They came up to Tybalt's table. He was eating his food in silence," Hey Tybie!"
" Hi Julie, what do you want?"
" Do you have any change? I only have a 50..."
" Let me check..."Tybalt reached in his pocket for a wallet. He then noticed Diana and looked at her coldly. Diana felt that she is blushing," Here that's all I have." He gave Juliet the money, and took a 50 from her.
" Thank you...Oh by the way this is Diana. Diana, Tybalt. Tybalt, Diana." Juliet introduced her new friend to her brother. Tybalt gave Diana a blank stare," Hi..." he said coldly and continued to eat.
" HI!" Diana waved and smiled like an idiot.
" We won't annoy you longer Tyb." Juliet walked to the counter with Diana. "So what do you want? I want pasta...No wait pizza! Want pizza?"
" Sure," Diana nodded," Your brother is cute..."
" Oooh, you like him?"
" Well, no...yes...I mean...he looks cute, I dunno, we just met..."
" He is on a grumpy side, but if you get to know him he is nice. I wonder where is Hermia? probably outside. Let's eat then go outside, I'll introduce you to her.."
Hope you like it! :D By the way the people that have no uniforms are seniors :D
1st Apr 2009, 10:27 PM
Yay! I like the goth looking people in the backround. Well cant wait for more!
2nd Apr 2009, 01:38 AM
Yes, yes, yes! I love the Veronaville families, but I hate how every story tends to circle around R and J. Thanks so much for making this story! BTW, good job on the plotline.
2nd Apr 2009, 03:39 AM
Haha it's cute! i like it =] and funny ^^
2nd Apr 2009, 06:40 AM
Ooo i'm lovin' this! Cant wait for more!
2nd Apr 2009, 09:28 PM
Kinda weird tittle I know >_> and sorry for sudden uniform change. I found a good version that is available for both genders! :D Enjoy and forgive the language.
Chapter 2 part 2 - The B**ches of Verona
After lunch Diana and Juliet went outside where they saw Hermia playing football with a goth guy.
" Come on Kaee!You trow like a girl!"
" I hear that form a girl!"Kaee laughed," Hey it's your sister." He pointed behind Hermia. She turned around and smiled as she saw Juliet," Hey sis! Who is your friend?" She asked as her and Kaee came up to them.
" Hermia, Kaee meet Diana!" Diana waved at them.
" Kaee is known here as Emo. But trust me he is a complete oposite of that. Seriously...Where have you seen an emo that crack up jokes?" Hermia nudged Kaee. Kaee made a grim face.
" I do not joke, I only think of killing myself because everyone hates me!" He said in a grim tone, but it just sounded funny. Hermia hugged her friend,"God, you are awesome!" Diana laughed," Oh, by the way let us tell you about the school people.
See those 2 whore's over there? The Japanese girl and the blond California girl? They are best friends, don't bother with names. They have slept with every guy in school that was willing to do so.
That goth girl over there, she is Melly. She is....can I say it?" Hermia asked Kaee, who nodded," She is Kaee's crush. She is an amazing girl! She writes such grim stories, I swear she is Edgar Alan Poe's ofspring! When she reads them, like oh my god! you are in there! Who else?...
Oh the devil looking elf with red eyes....Mysterious individual. No one knows about him. Boring sort. I think that is all! So tell us about yourself! hermia sat on the ground others followed.
"Well..I'm 15, I lived in Belladona Cove with my parents, they moved here cuz my dad was offered a job in the local hospital. I miss Dylan...He is a guy I kinda like...."
" What about Tybalt?" Juliet asked.
" She like the grumpy brother of mine?" Hermia laughed," Good luck making him smile!"
" He isn't that bad, don't scare her!" Juliet nudged her sister.
" I'm confused. I like Dylan. I just met Tybalt. He has nice appearance but i don't know him to say that I love him. I like him appearance wise, but it is the character that matters to me..."
" Well if it is how you want it, sure..." Juliet muttered. Diana looked up and noticed Tybalt, come out the school and sit on the bench. She got up and went up to him.
Juliet, Kaee and Hermia watched her and laughed," Let her be...So Kaee! How you willing to open up to Melly?"
" Hi..." Diana stood next to Tybalt and smiled. Tybalt looked up at her. He didn't say anything," Mind if i sit next to you?" Tybalt shook his head and pointed at the empty space on the bench next to him.
Diana sat down. There was a silence for a moment. Tybalt blankly stared in front of him. Diana was thinking of topics for the conversation," Soooo....How is school?" That wasn't as easy as she thought. Tybalt looked at her with 'Are you retarded?' look, but answered," Decent...Trying to raise up my grades for university..."
" Ooooh! Where are you gonna go?"
" Acadmie Le Tour, where else?"
" I don't know just asking...." Silence yet again," How old are you? Just curious, really..."
" 18..." Tybalt wondered to himself why does it matter,"You?"
" 15..." Diana whispered," I will be 16 soon though!" She said loudly making Tybalt jump up.
" Gee, don't scream!" Diana giggled," Sorry didn't wanna scare you..."
" I wasn't scared..."
" Sure you weren't!" Diana smiled while Tybalt was looking at her coldly," Do you like cheesecake?"
" I do! I love pineapple one!"
" You are random..."Tybalt chuckled.
" Like excuse me?! Who the hell you think you like are, talking to my guy?!" The blond whore came up to her followed by the japanese girl. Tybalt raised his eye as he saw them approach.
" How many times, I'm not your guy...I don't even know how you came up with that!" Tybalt hissed through his teeth.
" You are like hottest guy in like whole school! So yeah! And I'm like hottest girl so we are like perfect match!"
" Do you understand what she is saying? I don't too many likes..." Tybalt asked Diana and laughed.
" Who the hell are you anyways?" She asked Diana," Do you even know who I am?"
" No, I was told names are not important since you two are the biggest whores in school..." After a moment of silence, Tybalt broke in laughter. The girls stood with shocked look on their faces.
" Uhm, Like excuse me?!" The blond went to Diana.
" You sure act like one!" Diana got up and came up to her.
" Please you are killing me! It's too much!" Tybalt squeezed out through laughter.
" Fuck you bitch! Like...like..."
" Learn english..." Diana told her," Instead of sexual positions techniques..." Blond looked at her in fury. Tybalt kept laughing," oh my god...Sexual techniques, too funny!"Whores turned around on their heels and left. Tybalt turned to Diana," it takes a lot to make me smile..."
" I could tell..."
" Look, uhm...You want me to drive you home after school? I...have a car?"
" Sure that'd be nice of you!.." School bell rang," I have to go, I see you after school?"
" Sure. Oh don't let Britney and Suki, bother you. You are right about biggest whore, so you know they wanna seem superior. So don't worry! I see you later." He went inside. Diana stood there for a moment. 'Juliet was right,' she thought,' he is nice if you get to know him...'
Hope you like it! :D The reason chapter was called that is because of the girl that pretty much ruined the nice moment. Plus they are b**ches in my opinion >_>
3rd Apr 2009, 05:58 AM
Yay Diana! haha good update/chapter! They seem pretty mean!
3rd Apr 2009, 06:48 AM
Wow. If she had said that to the 'whores' at my old school she would've been seriously hurt.
4th Apr 2009, 05:56 AM
Another chapter. I have mental block with this story, so I will update the other one tomorrow. Hope you like it. :D
Chapter 3 - No More Than A Friend
Juliet knocked on Tybalts door," Come in!" She heard and came in. She liked hanging out in her brothers room. She always felt safe here. Plus he helped her with her homework.
" Hi," Juliet layed on Tybalt's bed,"Whatcha doin'?"
" Homework..." Tybalt mumbled staring at the screen.
" Why don't you go out or something? With Kaee or maybe Diana?"
" Diana?" I only met her 2 days ago..."
" I don't know..."
" Would you ever consider dating her?" Tybalt raised his eyebrow.
" Is this some kind of testing? What's up with you?"
" Just asking. Come one you have to admit you like her!"
" I only consider her a s a friend...Nothing more nothing less..."
" But she likes you!"
" I only see her as a friend..." Tybalt repeated as he turned around in his chair towards his sister.
" Fine, be a virgin for the rest of your life!"
" Juliet! not so loud! I have enough of grand pa thinking I'm gay because I don't date yet..."
" Then why don't you date Diana?"
" I just met her! She is a nice, funny girl, but I don't think me and her will go further then best friends! End of discussion!" Juliet looked down as Tybalt said that.
" He really said that?" Juliet told Diana about Tybalt's words next day at school. Juliet nodded," I'm sorry..."
" It's...It's...Fine, at least I'm friends with him..."
" What are you gonna do?..."
" I don't know...Defiantly no dating with any one for now...I have birthday in winter..."
" Oh sweet! You gonna have big party? Sweet sixteen and all..."
" Maybe. I will have to discus it with my parents...How was yours?"
" Mine? Grand, made my grand pa waste billions on it! I joke, but really!" Diana saw Tybalt pass by them," One minute Julie!" she run up to him," Hi!"
" Hey, how are you?"
" I...wanna ask something...Is it true what you said yesterday?"
" Oh...Juliet can't keep her mouth shut?" Tybalt said loud enough so Juliet hears. He then turned to Diana," I'm sorry...I just met you, I really like you. You are nice to talk to and you are not like other girls. I just really don't see myself going anywhere further then best friends..."
" It's alright, I understand..."
" I will help you with guys and such...you know I'm a guy after all..." he laughed. Diana smiled. She came up to him and hugged him. Tybalt stood not knowing what to do, he was never hugged before other then his sisters," I'm glad I'm friends with you, you are great guy!" Diana whispered. Tybalt hugged her back," Thanks, so are you...Look, wanna go to the movies tonight? You can take Jordan if you want to!"
" Sure! I'm sure he'd love to! Take Juliet and Hermia!"
" Deal then! I'll pick you guys at about...6-7pm?"
" Need a drive home later?"
" No me and Jordie have to go food shopping, thanks for the offer though! See you tonight!" she ran back to Juliet.
" So what do you want to see tonight?" Diana asked Jordan when they were in the grocery store.
" Don't change the subject Diniee..." Jordan looked at her. Diana bit her lower lip," what did Tybalt say to you?"
" He said he doesn't see me beyond best friend..."Diana sighed.
" Go for that Dylan guy then...I mean Tybalt is a tough guy, and since he is a friend of your now, he would be like another brother to you.,,As long as he doesn't take my place, I'm fine with that...."
" You sure about Dylan? I mean you said he is a fishy sort..."
" Who cares what I said...As long as you are happy when you are with him that's all that matters to me." he hugged his sister," Now let's get done, so we can go and get ready for the movies."
Later in the evening Diana and Jordan got picked p by Tybalt and his sisters. What movie they saw, Diana couldn't remember because she fell asleep on her brothers shoulder. It was apparently boring, to her anyways. When they got home, Jordan collapsed on the bed without changing, and Diana went in her room. She took her diary out and sat on her bed:
I had a great day today. I kinda hoped that I will end up with Tybalt...I really did. But at least I managed to stay friends with him. He is a nice guy...Like I said before, to bad not completely mine. Maybe I should go for Dylan...I'll call him tomorrow and see how he is. I just hope he didn't forget me or even worse got a new girlfriend...it's been 2 weeks after all...Jordan approved Dylan and that's a good sign. It is getting late, diary, I'm gonna go. Good Night, maybe tomorrow will turn out better...
Diana J. Michaels
Ugh, took me forever to decorate the bed...Enjoy!
4th Apr 2009, 07:05 AM
The bed looks awesome! Great update!
4th Apr 2009, 07:39 AM
Oooh, I love this story! It's excellent and it's quite addictive! The bed loooks excellent!
6th Apr 2009, 06:18 AM
awesome!! hopefully it will turn out better
6th Apr 2009, 08:38 AM
Gah! I'm begging you please update! It's driving me nuts! :lol:
6th Apr 2009, 12:44 PM
Gah! I'm begging you please update! It's driving me nuts! :lol:
I will try later tonight :D
6th Apr 2009, 06:36 PM
Since I haven't commented since chapter one this comment will be a jumble on the other three chapters. I'm sorry if it's incoherent:
For some reason Juliet makes me laugh- it's probably beacuase of her matchmaking and perky personality :anime: . Eitherway I approve of her and her friendship with Diana. Britney and Suki deserved the lashing they received but I can't help but worry that they might try to retaliate :eviltongu . The school uniforms are very cute and I like that you incorperated Regan into the story (even if she's just a teacher). Even if Tybalt doesn't want to be Diana's guy I'm glad they can be friends. You can never have too many friends, right? Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
P.S.I was wondering if Miranda is going to appear in the story. Also is Hermia going out with Puck or Mercutio?
7th Apr 2009, 11:11 PM
I introduce Dylan here. Enjoy, next chapter will be posted later tonight.
Chapter 4 - Dylan
Diana woke up at 10am. Sun was shining through the window and she stretched on her bed.
She check her cell phone. Tybalt sent a message saying 'Good Morning!' at 9 am. She chuckled," Some one's up early,"she said to herself as she browsed through the phone. she skipped Dylan's number few times," Come one, just dial it and talk he won't bite you..." She set her phone aside and looked out the window. Autumn was beautiful. She went downstairs and saw Jordan in front of the plate with a french toast with a dead look and Marina doing dishes.
" Morning sleepy!" Marina cheerfully told her daughter.
" Hey mom! Where is Lucy?"
" Outside playing with leaves..." Diana sat at the table next to Jordan," Why so dead?" She asked him. Jordan looked at her.
" I hafta go to univ...hrrrrr" he snored. Diana nidged him," Huh what?"
" I said why you dead?"
" I have to go to University and apply...I couldn't sleep all night..."He rubbed his eyes.
" Aren't you supposed to that closer to summer?"
" You know Jordan!" Marina said from the kitchen
" True that...Jordie I need your help.." she whispered.
" Hm?" Jordan closed his eyes and got another nudge.
" I wanna call Dylan but I'm nervous..."
" Just call him, he isn't going to bite..."He yawned. Diana sighed.
" I know, just...I'm nervious..."
" Just call already..."he got up. He was grumpy when he was tired," Mom I will go okey?"
" Okey just be carefull..."She turned around and heard snoring. Marina went in the living room and saw Jordan passed out on the couch. She rolled her eyes and continued with the dishes. Diana went upstairs and took a shower. She then went into her room and looked out the window. She saw Lucy plain in the pile of leaves and smiled. Diana dialed a number. After few rings low voice replied," Hello?"
" Hey Tybalt...How you doing?"
" Oh hey, using computer and such. Yourself?"
" Just came outta shower. I have to ask you for advise...Jord is too tired to help me even breathe..." She laughed.
" Sure ask ahead..."
" I like this one guy back in Belladona Cove. I wanna call him but I'm nervous..."
" You aren't nervous to call me...and you kinda like me..."Diana paused. He had a point," So why you can't call him?"
" I....I just can't..."
" What is so hard? Dial a number," he then went into squeaky voice" hi it's Diana long time no see!"
" I do not sound like that!" Diana was offended.
" Sorry, I just gave you an example..."
" It's fine. It is easy to say but hard to do, you realize that?"
" Nope." Tybalt was honest. he has not been in love to realize how it feels.
" You are helpful..."
" I am trying my best. Just call him he shouldn't be pissed or eat you..."
" okey okey, I will try...Thanks for help."
" Anytime, I told you can come to me and talk to me!"
" I feel better now, I'll go and call him..."
" Okey see ya!" He hung up. Diana sighed, and dialed Dylans number. After few beeps she heard his voice," Yeah?"
" Hey Dylan, it's Diana!" she felt herself blushing.
"Aaaah...HI! Oh my I though you for got me!"
" I didn't listen, do you wanna meet up?"
" I don't know, sure. Can you come over my place?"
" Sure! Text me your address!" She felt her heart racing.
" Okey sure! See ya in a bit!" he hung up. Diana squeeked in joy.
She texted Tybalt and told him how everything is great. She got a message with Dylan's address. She jumped in her little summer dress and run out the house.
Dylan's house wasn't that far away from Veronaville. Aparently he moved. He lived in the same building as Kaee did. She was here the other day with Hermia.
She came up to the door of Dylan's apartment and rang the door bell. She sighed. Few moments later Dylan opened the door. He gave her a hug.
"Diana! how nice to see you!"
" Yeah likewise!" she looked at him and realized why she liked him. Blond hair, blue eyes. Cover boy in other words. He invited her for cup of tea and sandwiches.
They talked and laughed about the summer they spent together back in Belladona Cove, how Diana misses school back there and how she already got few friends in Veronaville. When it was time to go, Dylan hugged her and walked her to the door.
He watched her leave. he then came back in and grinned," She left, you can come out!"
" Like finally, I thought that brainless blond will never leave!" a blond girl dressed in high class fashion came out of Dylans bedroom.
" Anything you won't sweetie!" Dylan came up to her and kissed her. Girl answered his passionate kiss," I love you Britney!"
" I love you too, Danny..."
" That's what I said..." Britney took a pocket mirror out and fixed her hair," that will teach that Diana how to steal my guy..." She rubbed her hands smiling evilly.
Hope you like it :D
8th Apr 2009, 12:53 AM
Oooh what a cheater!
8th Apr 2009, 06:10 AM
I had fun with this chapter. I was originally meant to make Tybalt grump fart, but then I actually made him a caring friend. But you still not better get on his bad side! :D Enjoy! Thanks to xzkiskazx2 for proof reading half of it.. I guess that how you wold call it >_>Forgive the language. I tried to make Britney look like a complete beeyotch, hope I managed.
Chapter 5 - Reverse Psychology
Diana and Tybalt were sitting outside during lunch break. It's been two weeks since Diana got in contact with Dylan and they were seeing each other constantly. Diana but her cheese sub aside," So he took to the cinema yesterday! It was fun..."
" Chew then, talk please..." Tybalt layed on the ground. Diana sat close to him," Talk to me..."
Tybalt looked at her," About what?"
" I know something I bothering you, I know you well!"
" It's been a month,"Tybalt laughed. Diana layed next to him," It's Britney. She has been more annoying then usual..."
" How so?"
" She keeps insisting, I stopped calling her...I don't even have her phone number. She is paranoid I swear. I think I'm the only guy she has not slept with that's why....In my class that is..."
" Jordan slept with her?!" Diana said in shock.
" Oh hell no! She tried to seduce him, but he said 'Come close and I will pop your silicon with my pencil'. How he managed to get rid of her, I do not know. She keeps terrorizing me though..." Diana closed her eyes. She could hear his heart beat. Tybalt put his hand around her," Comfy?"
" Mhm...You don't mind do you?"
" You wouldn't be laying like this if I did. What should I do?"
" Threaten to...call a dragon to rape her?" Tybalt laughed.
" I do not want poor dragon getting her STDs...She is staring to scare me..."
" I really don't kno..."
"Like ahem!" They heard an annoying voice. They raised their eyes and saw Britney," What are you like doing with my guy?!"
" See what I'm talking about?!" Tybalt slapped his forehead. Him and Diana got up. Britney came up to Diana and looked right in her eyes. Diana covered her nose," EEEW! Get your STDs away from me!" Britney slapped her.
Tybalt gasped. Diana looked at Britney," Oh so tough and don't wanna accept the truth?"
" I am like on pills and they like protect from those!"
" Pills protect from getting you pregnant, not from STDs. Maybe you should've payed attention in sex ed class..." Tybalt went in monotone voice. Diana chuckled. Britney slapped her again.
" Now what the hell?! What is you problem!"
" I just like hate you bitch!"
" How about like stop like using like like and like talk like a normal like person?....like" Diana went rubbing her cheek. Tybalt looked at her confused and Britney just went," Huh?"
" Exactly, I never get a word you say because you talk like this..." Britney pushed her, making Diana fall on the ground.
Tybalt stood up for her," Okey Brat! It is enough!"
" It's Britney, bitch!" Diana was about to laugh, but she covered her mouth she did not want to get another hit. Her face felt sore. Tybalt grunted.
" What the hell went into your stupid blond head?! I never dated you, never will, never plan to and the only way I will end up with you if I completely lose my mind..."
"I'm the hottest girl, I don't like get why doesn't yours get up when you see me!" Tybalt widen his eyes. This idot had sex on her mind 24/7.
" I can't even talk to you slut! all you have is sex on your mi..." Diana tapped on his shoulder and whispered something in his ear. Tybalt smiled,"All you have is sex on your mind and this is why we break up!" Britney gasped.
Every one else looked at them in shock. Juliet mumbled," Tybalt lost it if he dated that whore..." Diana laughed and crossed her fingers," Oooh...it's a scam..." She whispered to Kaee, who started laughing out loud.
" WHAT?! Tybalt! But how can you..."
" Get out of my face! I do not want to see you!" Tybalt was a good actor.
" Tybalt...." Britney proved her dumbness.
She run away crying and Suki followed her. When they were gone, Tybalt started laughing," Thanks for the reversed psychology idea! I would never guess that!" he addressed Diana. She smiled and said," I figured if she pretends that two of you are dating then If you told her to leave she would leave...hopefully it worked..."
" Diana what happened?" Marina exclaimed when she saw bruises on her daughter face.
" Got in a fight..."Diana turned away.
" You have visitor, and you are all beaten up..." Marina sighed.
" A blond cover looking boy. He is cute. The one you like..." Marina winked as she saw Diana's smile," He is a living room..." Diana rushed in to the living room. Dylan got off the couch as he saw her," Hey!" he waved. Diana's heart raced.
" Why are you here?" She smiled.
" I came to ask you something...Will you go out with me?"
"You mean boyfriend/girlfriend?"
"Ah huh!" Dylan nodded as he held her hand.
" Yes! YES I will!" Diana smiled and leaped into his arms.
Oh no Dinee!Please don't go there!I feel so bad I had to do this to her...I had to though...Hope you like it...
8th Apr 2009, 06:44 AM
Good update! Tybalt should be with Diana!
8th Apr 2009, 07:52 AM
Nice work, keep it up!
8th Apr 2009, 09:34 AM
8th Apr 2009, 07:14 PM
Lol your welcome hun! great updates I would say something about tybalt and diana but i don't wanna u know.. spoil ;) ! I wanna read more ^^ im posting another new chapter tell me what ya think
10th Apr 2009, 07:19 AM
Thank you guys for the comments :D My laptop is being slow on me >_> I will post chapter 6 tomorrow morning. Thanks for your support! :D
10th Apr 2009, 08:54 AM
I've just read all this and I love it :)
I love your goth/alternative sims. They are all so nice and unique without being depressed/suicidal the way that stupid people think that all goths are.
10th Apr 2009, 07:48 PM
My laptop went berserk on me yesterday. So Instead of yesterday, I post it today. Chapter 7 will be posted later on tonight. Forgive the language. THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS WOOHOO REFERENCE...or maybe woohoo itself...
Chapter 6 - Not So Friendly Outgoing
Diana and Tybalt were standing in the mall waiting for Dylan to arrive," Why exactly am I here?" Tybalt asked looking around the mall. Diana rolled her eyes," I asked you to come along with me, so you can check Dylan out. I wanna know you opinion since you are my close friend..."
" What exactly supposed to check out in him?" Tybalt said coldly," I'm rather straight guy..."
" I want guys opinion from you..." she turned around and saw Dylan coming towards them. Diana run towards him," DYLAN! Great to see you!" He hugged her. Dylan noticed Tybalt and gave him angry look," Who's he?"
" Oh that's my friend Tybalt..." Diana started.
" A friend?...Nice to meet you 'friend'...." Tybalt got the hint.
" I wanted to steal her from you don't you think I would have done it by now?!" Dylan came up to him and both guys looked like they were ready to attack each other. Diana stood between them," Waaaai don't we go to the cinema or something, hm?" She looked at the guys. Dylan has this proud,'I'm better then you sort of look', while Tybalt was showing pure hatred.
" Fine sweets, if it's what you want!" Dylan took her arm and went towards the cinema. Tybalt already knew he hates him.
" Look, how about this movie?" Diana pointed at the poster," it has a rising star, Sehra Bradley in it!"
" Yeah, she is hot let's see it!" Dylan rushed to the counter to get tickets. Tybalt rolled his eyes and sighed," What's wrong Tybie?" Diana held his hand. Tybalt looked at her. What is he supposed to say? That her boyfriend is a boobs and butt caring monkey and that all he want from Diana is sex? Also that he is rude and thinks Tybalt is an opponent, when Tybalt has nothing for Diana but sisterly love? Tybalt just kept quiet as he held Diana's hand. Next thing he knew it was ripped out and Dylan was staring in his face," get away from her! She is mine!"
" Dylan calm down!" Diana put her hand on his shoulder. Dylan looke at her," Fine, but stay away from her!" She put his hand around Diana waist as they walked in the cinema.
Tybalt blankly stared at the screen. He was sitting next to Dylan, who was sitting next to Diana. Not only he ate like a pig, with popcorn flying all over the place, but he also made horrible comments about the movie," Gawd she is hawt! I'd so date her if I was a bit older! Daeeem!What's her name again...Sarah something....Wow look at those melons..."
" Have some sense, when you girlfriend is sitting next to you..." Tybalt told Dylan. Dylan furiously turned around," Do not tell me how to live my life idiot!"
" Dylan stop it and watch the movie!"Diana whispered. Tybalt felt sick to his stomach. Was Diana blind?! He yet again stared blankly at the screen, trying to get what the movie was about. It was hard since Dylan's comments were so loud.
After the movie guys went to a restaurant to grab something to eat. Tybalt felt very out of place. Dylan tried to kiss Diana few times. She pushes him away saying it's too soon. She better not waste her first times on that bastard. He sighed," So what do you wanna eat guys?"Diana was browsing through the menu," I want something that keeps me in shape. Gotta keep up with that gorgeous body I have," Tybalt wanted to throw up as Dylan said it," I'm gonna have a cheeseburger with double cheese and lots of fries. oh and diet soda..." he put his menu on the table.' Yup, that will surely keep you in shape..."Tybalt thought to himself," I will get a salad I guess..."Diana set her menu aside and looked at Tybalt. He didn't wanna eat.
" I'll have salad as well..." He mumbled. Dylan chuckled, " What a wuss..." Diana gave him a look," I gotta go use the bathroom, I'll be right back sweets..." He got up and left. Diana smiled at Tybalt.
" Talk to me. You have been grumpy all day..."
" Can't you see why?..."
" No..." she was so gullible. He felt sorry for her.
" The comments he was cracking up in the movie? The way he treats you and me?"
" Doesn't every guy act like that?" Diana asked with an unsure note in her voice.
" Ask yourself a question: Do I act like that? Does Jordan act like that? Does Kaee act like that? Think about it...I'm gonna go use a bathroom.." he got up and went to the bathroom. As he came in he heard giggles and mumbling coming from one of the cabins. He rolled his eyes thinking it's another couple messing around. He came to the sink and washed his hands. He heard a cabin door squeak and saw Britney come out.
He wasn't surprised. She looked down as she saw him and run away. Tybalt turned around and was about to leave, but the same cabin door opened and Dylan came out. Tybalt was about to kill him right there," You are a disgusting bastard! Your girlfriend is right there!"
" Who?" Dylan was shocked and confused.
" DIANA, YOU MORON!!!" Tybalt screamed out.
" Oh I thought you meant Britney..."
" Her too?!"
" And Suki...What? You never did that?!" Dylan said it in a way like it was a common thing to do.
" No I never dated! You are such a pig! Ugh!" Tybalt was about to leave but got pulled back in by Dylan," If you tell any one of them about this, you are so dead dude!"
" I'd gladly kill you myself right now! I won't tell because unlike you I care for Diana and I don't even talk to the whores!"
" Who?" Dylan asked confused.
" Britney and Suki! Maybe you should have considered that before sleeping with them. They have STDs. If you even touch Diana... YOU ARE DEAD!" He walked out the bathroom and slammed the door in Dylan's face. He sat at the table. Dylan shortly after joined them. They ate in silence. Diana tried to start a conversation few times but failed. After dinner, Dylan said good bye and left. Diana sat at the table. She looked like she was about to cry," Let's go I will take you home.."Tybalt put his hand on her shoulder as he walked her to the car.
They didn't talk all the way till Diana's house. Tybalt sighed," Look I'm sorry if I sounded harsh. I just...I...Ugh..."He looked away. Diana looked at him," You kind of opened my eyes...I thought about your words...He is such a pig...Maybe he will change?"she looked at Tybalt. Her eyes were filled with hope.
Tybalt squeezed out a smile," Suuuuure..." Now how retarded did that sound?...Diana smiled and hugged him," Thank you for support. I will see you tomorrow okey?"
" All right," He opened a door for her and waved as he drove off. Diana waved back and went in the house. She saw her mom, Jordan and Lucy watching cartoons. Lucy and Jordan both looked zombified. Diana smiled and waved her mom.
Marina waved back at her," Wanna join us?Dad should be home soon, he said he will bring pizza!"
" I want chicken supreme..." Jordan mumbled as he stared at the screen. Lucy nodded in agreement," What about you?"Marina asked Diana.
" Sure...I will be right back I just need to change..." She went upstairs to her room. It was dark. She closed the door behind her and slid on the floor.
She threw her hand bag in front of her and broke in tears. She tried to cry as quiet as she could, she didn't want Jordan worrying.
Thanks to danirawr for letting me mention her Sehra in my story :D thanks to xzkiskazx2 for help with the chapter :D Aslo little something to laugh about. The second Tybalt left Dylan in the bathroom, he got harassed by this individual (http://forums.sims-community.com/showpost.php?p=1340855&postcount=376) :D hope you like it :D enjoy!
11th Apr 2009, 02:47 AM
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookay Dylan is a pig.
And Diana is finally realising it!
Great chapter :)
11th Apr 2009, 03:23 AM
I was all excited when I saw Sehra mentioned. (btw, I'm a girl though so you didn't use 'his' Sehra ;) )
11th Apr 2009, 03:59 AM
I was all excited when I saw Sehra mentioned. (btw, I'm a girl though so you didn't use 'his' Sehra ;) )
Fixed :D sorry about that I feel bad now :banghead:
(btw I'm a girl too xD)
11th Apr 2009, 06:14 AM
For some reason i really love this chapter and it makes me cry :D In a happy way. Hope you like it.
Chapter 7-Diana's Sweet 16
It has been two months since that group date Diana had with Dylan and Tybalt. Dylan tried to do things with Diana few times, but she refused saying it's too early. Also winter came to Veronaville. Thick layer of snow was all over the place and schools were closed.
Diana's sweet 16 was approaching. She was obviously excited and some what terrified.
" How come you are scared?" Juliet asked Diana as they were sitting in her room.
" I'm getting old!" Diana laughed," I just kid...I don't know what to do. Dad said I can have anything I want. I will probably just have party at my house. It always been like this, So I don't think it should be any different..."
" What ever floats your boat...Oh, what would be the greatest present for your 16th birthday?"
" Well...promise not to laugh..."
" I won't you know me..."
"Come, I'll whisper in your ear..."
" You serious?...."
" Kind of...But that'd be wrong and cheating...So it is not happening..."She changed the subject.
Both didn't realize that Tybalt heard everything.
Diana was running around the house. It was her birthday, she was very nervous and yet happy.
" Jee, I thought I was freaking up about my upcoming 18..."Jordan laughed," You look wonderful sis don't worry!"
" It is easy for you to say..." Diana looked at herself in the mirror trying to fix that messy blond mop that she has. She sighed. There weren't that many guests. Only few classmates and friends. Door bell rang. Diana opened the door. It was Kaee and Melly.
" Happy Birthday!" they both hugged her," I hope you like the presents. It tooka while to pick out, we went all over the mall..."
" We?" Diana interrupted and smiled.
" Yeah..." Kaee blushed. Melly kissed his cheek," he asked me out 2 weeks ago," She smiled," he is a sweet guy!"
" He really is, Come in guys, food is on the table over there!" Diana put the presents on the table along with others. She was about to close the door but it got blocked. She raised her eyes and saw a familiar face," Am I late?" Romeo asked holding the box in front of Diana.
" No you aren't!" She hugged him," Come in!" She let him in and closed the door behind him.
" Is Julie here?"
" No, not yet...Food is over there..." Diana blopped herself on the sofa in the front hall. The excitement was gone all of a sudden.
She was waiting for Dylan. She knew he would be late again. Like he always is. Either horribly late, or doesn't even show up...Door bell rang and interrupted her thoughts. She run to the door and opened it with a smile hoping it was Dylan. Her smile shrank a bit when she saw the Capp siblings.
" HAPPY BIRTHDAY!" Hermia and Juliet shouted giving her boxes. Tybalt kept quiet as usual. She hugged the girls. Diana came up to Tybalt and hugged him. Tybalt's heart dropped as he felt how tense she was," Is everything okey?"
" Yeah..." She sighed," Food is on the table over there..." She waved at the table and went upstairs. Tybalt watched her leave.
Diana didn't come down for a good hour or so. Marina yelled up the stairs," Diana! Come down, it's cake time!" silence followed. Tybalt came up to her," I can go and get her, Mam..."
" That'd be nice of you Tybalt, thank you..." Tybalt walked up the stairs. Diana's room door wasn't closed. He heard sobs Tybalt came in and saw Diana in the armchair with her cell phone in front of her and crying her eyes out," Diana, what's wrong?" he asked as he entered the room and closed the door behind him.
Diana silently pointed at the cell phone. Tybalt picked it up and read the text message.
"hey babe, I cnt make it, Im jst busy...hv fun luv!"
"It from Dylan?" he asked and few seconds later realized how stupid his question was. Diana got up and pressed against him as she cried, " Yes...He promised to come...And he sent me this...What can he busy with? It's my sweet sixteen..." Tybalt knew well enough what Dylan was busy with. Diana felt bad enough with out it for him to tell her the truth. He held her close," everything is okey..." He pulled her away for a moment. Diana looked in his eyes. Tybalt sighed," I have something for you..."
" What?..." Diana asked confused.
" Let's put it this way...I'd rather you not waste this for Dylan..." He came close to her. Why did this feel so weird? He closed his eyes. Here it goes. He leaned forward at pressed his lips against hers.
Diana stood paralyzed. She closed her eyes and put her arms around him. 'So thats how first kiss feels...' this thought went through their minds. Tybalt knew he had to pull away but he just couldn't. He didn't want to either. Diana's heart raced. When they eventually parted, Diana looked at him in shock," Happy Birthday..." Tybalt laughed nervously.
" How did...you...know?" Diana mumbled.
" I...I listened on you and Juliet...I wanted to know what would be the greatest present for you because I was stunned and had no clue what to get you...I heard what you said...Like I said I didn't want you waste such a great memory in your life on Dylan..." he looked at Diana. She had tears running from her eyes," I'm sorry I didn't wanna make you cry..." Diana laughed and jumped in his arms. She leaned forward and kissed him again.
This time it was more passionate. Tybalt almost fell on the floor. She moved away from him," That was a best birthday present ever!" Tybalt laughed," What about Dylan?..."
" That will be our secret, okey?" He held her close. For some reason she didn't feel like a sister to him any more.
Forgive the red box in one picture, I forgot to put it in the different room....I'm so happy for those two now! xD Comments greatly appreciated!
11th Apr 2009, 07:24 AM
Awww cute update! I'm glad they're together.
11th Apr 2009, 07:32 AM
Awww cute update! I'm glad they're together.
Not really...Sadly. D:
11th Apr 2009, 07:38 AM
Maybe not officially, but emotionally I'd say they were.
But I haven't read the next chapters so I don't know how it'll all turn out ;)
11th Apr 2009, 08:03 AM
Really nice update! Finally they kiss! :lol:
11th Apr 2009, 08:07 AM
Really nice update! Finally they kiss! :lol:
I know right?:lol: I find ironic for some reason...
13th Apr 2009, 06:57 AM
Are they gonna sneak around? ;) That always makes for a good storyline
13th Apr 2009, 06:58 AM
This is a last chapter for now, because I have a mental block yet again. Will update LLC tomorrow. Enjoy and please comment, they motivate me :D
Chapter 8 - Weird Dreams
The next few months flew by fast. Dylan and Diana seemed to go further and further while her and Tybalt kept getting closer and closer.It was hard for her and Dylan since they went to different schools, so that was an automatic disadvantage. Diana also started realizing how much of a pig he is, since all he wanted to do when they met up is kiss her or grab her butt. The only reason she stayed with him was because she knew him since elementary, and she still hoped he will change even though Tybalt kept saying he isn't such an angel as she thinks. No matter what he said, she still had hopes for the best.
" Well let's think logically..." Tybalt started. Him and Diana were at his grandfather mansion. Every one was away so it was just two of them," Why every time you call him to go out, he is always busy?..."
" He is doing home work, he has after school classes, he is simply not in the mood to go out..." Diana said.
" True. But why EVERY time you call? Haven't you noticed that?"
" Not every time..." Diana lied. She was a bad liar too, because Tybalt smiled.
" You can't lie buddy..."
" I like Dylan! I know since elementary and I expect best from him!" She exclaimed as she looked at Tybalt. Tybalt just raised his eye brow.
" I am scared that those hope of your will hurt you..."
" What do you mean?" Diana lost her courage.
" You hope for the best...and it will turn out bad, this is what I mean by hurt you..." He held her hand," I care for you and I do not want you hurt. You must understand that..."
"Yeah, yeah..." Diana looked down.
" Hm...wanna go and play a game? It usually cheers you up..."
" Sure, I will watch though.." she followed him upstairs and the stretched out on his bed. She watched him play his game when she fell asleep.
She had weird dreams. She saw Lucy in scratches and bruises. her mom was crying her dad was screaming. She then fell out of that, and she was running in the long white corridor. Her eye were in tears and her clothes were ripped up. She had bruises as well and she was hurt deep inside. She kept calling for Tybalt and Jordan, no one replied. tears kept running down her cheeks. Diana...Diana...Diana...
" DIANA! Wake up!" Diana jumped and fell of the bed.
Tybalt run up to her," You okey? You were moaning and crying. You were calling my name too..." Diana looked at him then looked at her self. Everything was fine," I don't know..." she mumbled. Tybalt helped her get up and hugged her," how long did I sleep for?" Diana held her head. It felt sore.
" About 2 hours...Let me get you something to eat, come on..." he helped her to get to the kitchen.
She sat at the table as she heard Tybalt messing around in the kitchen. It was not the first time she had this dream.
She didn't know if she should tell Tybalt about it. She closed her eyes. Diana jumped up as Tybalt put a plate with sandwich in front of her," I didn't mean to scare you there...Penny for your thoughts?" He sat in front of her. Diana stared at the sandwich like it was about to eat her in stead of visa versa. Not that it didn't look appetizing, just she had weird thoughts in her head," Huh?" She looked in Tybalt's gray eyes.
" Penny for your thoughts?" Tybalt repeated himself. Diana blankly stared at him. She didn't know what to say. She took a bite from a sandwich. It felt like rock as it fell in her stomach.
" I...don't know..."She mumbled.
" You are scaring me...."
" Sorry..." Diana felt very weird," I don't want you to leave for university in few months..."
" Is that's what bothering you?" Tybalt raised his eyebrow.
" I guess..."
" You realize I won't just abandon you? I will keep in contact with you and I will give you the address for my dorm or wherever I will live, so you can visit me whenever you want!"
" I don't want Jordan to leave either..." tears came out of her eyes.
" Come on now...He is your brother! He will be calling you everyday...knowing him, he probably will..."He chuckled. Diana smiled and looked at Tybalt.
" It will feel do different without you here..." Tybalt just now realized how much he will miss her. In two months school will be over. In two more months he will leave for university. It seemed far away yet it was very close. He tilted his head back trying to hold the tears back. But he couldn't. Diana got up.
" You okey?" She asked. Tybalt got up and run up to her. Diana leaped into his arms. Tybalt held her close," Just hold me back..." he whispered.
Hope you like it!
13th Apr 2009, 07:48 AM
Aww sweet update!!! Die, Dylan. DIE!!! :lol:
14th Apr 2009, 07:55 AM
I lied....Because my Pleasantview kept freezing i had nothing to do. I had a sudden inspiration so here you go. All the teen are same hight, but Tybalt is supposed to be about half head taller the Diana, so pretend he is xD
Chapter 9 - She Is Not Over Him
" Are you sure you want to go with me?...."Tybalt mumbeled as him and Diana were in the mall.
" Mhm...If not me who will go tot he prom with you?" Tybalt shrugged.
" I was gonna ask my sister to go...but they both are going with their guys...Hermia is going with Puck at his school and Juliet goes with Romeo...Thankfully grandpa will be at work to make it to graduation..." Diana laughed. She knew about the rivalry. She was looking through the suits trying to imagine which one would look decent on Tybalt.
It was hard to imagine rebellious guy in something formal," Eeeh...How about you go in jeans and a shirt with a tie?..." Diana scratched her head while she looked at one suit.," You think that would look good?"
" Yeah...it is hard to imagine you in a suit..."
" Let's get you a dress then," he walked up to the rack with dresses," Uhm...."
" Just spit it out," Diana laughed.
" What about Dylan?"
" You had to bring it up didn't you?" Diana huffed.
" Yeah...Isn't he graduating too? Should you go to graduation with your boyfriend..."
" He failed and he is going to repeat grade 12...he is grounded anyways, so it would be good to go out somewhere. He has been awfully quiet and it scares me..."
" How so?"
" He isn't talking to me...When I try to talk to him, he brings up sex. How can I have sex with a guy who is always busy and who is always away from me? I am not Britney..." Tybalt laughed," Plus he had a weird swelling on his lip so I didn't want to kiss him that day either...."
" Did you ever?..."
" No..." Diana blushed.
" You have been with a guy for six months and have not kissed him? I do not believe you..."Tybalt laughed harder.
" No I seriously didn't! How can I kiss him when we don't see each other 'cuz he is always busy, and when we do see each other he almost attacks me for sex..." Diana looked down.
" Do me a favor...don't." Tybalt said in a cold tone," Even better. Break up with him."
" No," Diana said in harsh tone.
" Diana, If you stay with him, I have a bad feeling you will end up hurt. And badly."
" It won't! Why you keep telling me to leave him and such?"
" Because..." Tybalt was about to say that he is a cheating whore and you will be deeply hurt when one day you will catch him with Britney or Suki in the bed," ...I don't want you hurt..." and this is why he didn't tell her.
" Oh come on everything will be fine..." She hugged him," Let's go to the other store this one has nothing of interest for me..." they walked out the store. Few moments later Britney came out of the changing room.
She smiled evilly," Don't worry Dylan...Diana will be yours very soon..."
Tybalt was standing standing in front of his school with Juliet," It is so unusual to see you with your hair down..." She mumbled as she tried to help her brother fix it.
" I know right?...That is why it is always tied..." Tybalt took out a hair band and fixed his hair back. It was last time he ever listens to Juliet's hair style advises.
Meanwhile Diana came up to them," Hi!" Tybalt turned around and his jaw dropped. Diana had blue dress on," Why hey..." he mumbled. Juliet smiled.
" Nice dress Dinee!" Juliet complemented Diana's dress.
Diana smiled back and turned to Tybalt." Want to go inside?" Tybalt nodded. She looked at him, and realized that this is one of last moments they spend together. Next time she will see him he will be in university. it is hard for them to meet up often, so she will be lucky if she gets to say good bye before he leaves to university. She put her head on his shoulder as they danced. She looked in his gray eyes," let's go outside..."
" Sure," he held her hand," What are you thinking about?"
" You..." she didn't lie," I will miss you. I will have no close after you and Jordan leave."
" I told you we won't abandon you!" He held her close. Diana looked at him and whispered," Kiss me..."
" What?" Tybalt looked at her in shock.
" Kiss me, you fool..." Diana jumped up and pressed her lips against his. Tybalt held her close as he kissed her. The moment seemed to last forever.
Dun Dun Dun! D:
Hope you like it. I hope my Pleasantview works tomorrow.
14th Apr 2009, 08:18 AM
Loved it! I really hope Diana listens to Tybalt and dump that jerk Dylan! :)
14th Apr 2009, 02:49 PM
Wow your updates have been coming out fast! I agree with the consensus that Dylan is a major loser (come on getting left behind in the 12th grade) and terrible boyfriend (misssing your gf's sweet 16 to hang out with a skank- not cool). I'm glad that Diana has not kissed him and I hope she realizes that Tybalt is right and soon. I wonder what Britney has planned- I hope it isn't too devious. Something tells me that Dylan might be th one to go psycho and make her nightmare come true. Keep the good work!
14th Apr 2009, 03:07 PM
OK, Dylan sucks. Tybalt is hawt stuff. I'm jealous of Diana.
And that nightmare's creepy. Like lunaselene says I hope Dylan doesn't go psycho (like Fred in LLC)
14th Apr 2009, 06:18 PM
Wow! Nice to see how many people already hate Dylan xD I will update chapter 10 maybe tonight, most likely tomorrow. My Pleasantview seems to be working, so LLC update should be up today :D
Also I'm building a dorm for Tybalt, I will probably post it for downloads if any one is interested.
15th Apr 2009, 12:34 AM
OK, Dylan is just...A pig. Seriously. I hope Britney doesn't do anything to poor Tybalt or Diana.
15th Apr 2009, 03:47 AM
Great update! I agree with everyone else, Dylan is a total asshat.
15th Apr 2009, 06:44 AM
My Pleasantview hates me >_< I only have 3 pictures to make and it keeps freezing I don't know what is going on. I played around in Tybalt's dorm before, so I decided to make this a little chapter since he will probably not appear for few chapters after this. This chapter is meant to look like an email, so yeah, smileys are meant to be there :D Enjoy! Who ever guesses the reference to Tybalt's room mate's name, wins a cookie :P Original character belongs to Thrior, and his name is Ross. Many thanks for letting me use him!*hugs*
Chapter 10 - Email From University
Diana was sitting in her room. It has been 3 weeks since Her brother and Tybalt left to university. House has been awfully quiet. Lucy spent most of her time in the room and if she wanted Diana to play barbie dolls with her she would call her. Diana sat up on her bed and slammed her fist in the wall.
" I won't abandon you, he said!" She repeated Tybalt's words. She was furious with him. He has not sent anything for 3 weeks. Diana got up form the bed and went to the laptop. She saw a message on the screen that said, " 1 new email!". Diana clicked it and her heart almost flew out of her rib cage as she read who it was from:
Sent: 15th September
To: Diana<[email protected]
Hey there, sorry I haven't contacted you in anyway. We were unpacking and phone and internet were connected around the campus yesterday. How are you doing? Hope you aren't mad at me...Anyways, I wanna tell what happened in past 3 weeks. I have some photos to share too.
Guess who I was assigned in the dorm with? Yup, Jordan and Romeo. They say hello by the way. Also there is a new guy, his name is Joey Tribbiani. He is smiley-happy-I'm-every-one's-friend type, but he is fun to hang around with. Dorm we live in consists of 4 houses and a swiming pool in the middle. My roommate happened to be Joey. Jordan and Romeo live in the house next to us. Speaking of Joey. He is talkative type too. He likes to goof around. I asked him If a can take a picture of him to show to my friend back home, he went sure and here you go:
Told ya! He is taking art and he is a slob. Our house is a mess constantly and If i wouldn't kick his butt to clean it up, we'd be leaving in a dumpster, I swear. Oh, here is how our house looks like:
Living room. Don't mind the mess it's Joey's. There is plasma TV also a console game I brought from home. If i left it for Julie and Hermie...I would never see it again. There is Joey by the way with his pet, Luna. She is either a hawk or a falcon i forget. Same thing if you ask me :P She is loud, I hate that bird. Here is living room from different angle.
I didn't take a good shot of kitchen for some reason. But trust me it is much cleaner then living room, because I clean it. I want my food and counter I cook it on clean. Oh yeah, I'm the cook around the house. I had no clue I'm a good cook. You never told me :lol: Or maybe Joey just eats anything you serve him. Grr...Him and that parrot of his...Here is another angle:
There is that plasma TV I mentioned earlier. I really like the wooden floors and brick wall idea. I must do it when I get a house of my own. My room is all the way in the back but I like it.
I just love it. The plant you gave me before I left, Grew into big and yellow monster. It scares me. I finally got a double bed, like I always wanted. I can stretch and not bump with my elbow into the wall. Don't mind pink panther pillows, they were a gift from Joey's little sister. Him and her are Pink Panther fanatics. I accepted it because I am nice like that :D Painting are done by Joey. He is a good artist. Here is his room. Sneaked in it while he was at class. By the way. That girl in the window there stalks me >_> Seriously, don't laugh.
Artists have interesting style. I'm surprised it is not a mess. Last time I came in here I almost broke my nick, because I tripped on the trash he has here. He says he drew the painting above his bed. I should have taken art instead of Psychology :/ Ah, I spoke too soon a bout room being clean:
That blasted skateboard! I almost stepped on it when I came in...And he draws on the floor, apparently. I told him, let's get you a drafting table, but no...Artists are weird I swear...A random shot of Luna. I hate that bird. I only tolerate it because of Joey. If not him, I'd put my hand in that cage and twist it's neck.
She is a nice pet. But she is F**king loud! In 3am, Dinee, 3am, all I hear is EEEEEEECHK! Damn...Anyway, university it self has been going fine. I haven't met any one interesting, all are snobs. or maybe it is just Psychology...I should have taken Art...Joey took this this while I was watching homework video. You can tell I'm bored. On the other hand I should have not told Joey I brought camera. He keeps taking weird photos. And random too.
I had my revenge! Don't tell him I took it. say it's Romeo or something. He has taken worse of me. Eeeh...Let's put it this way. He would attack me in the shower :P All I see is curtain getting pulled then a flash. I should hide the camera from now on. HA, he didn't even realize I was behind him. And superman boxers?! Seriously dude...Well at least they aren't pink panther, now that'd be odd to witness...o_O
I have nothing else to add for now. I just hope everything is fine over there. Please tell me if Dylan is trying to pull something, I will go there and kick his ass. Oh by the way, We have a train station right next to the dorm, just cross the road, Literally. Train goes to Veronaville Station, So if you wanna visit just hop on. Just tell me when you are coming so I can meet you. There is another station it is a bit further though. It goes all the way to Belladona Cove. I will tell you adress anyways if you don't like trains: 357 Liberty St. Acadimie Le Tour, Veronaville. And here is phone number: 345-657-6523. Feel free to call anytime you want too. My cell phone stayed the same. I really miss you. I really do. I hope to hear from you soon.
Diana closed the window and cried. She felt bad for hating him.
Hope you like it. I apologize for LLC not being updated like I promised.
15th Apr 2009, 06:51 AM
Let me guess..Joey from Friends?
15th Apr 2009, 06:55 AM
Let me guess..Joey from Friends?
*hands juu a cookie* You ween :D
15th Apr 2009, 08:54 AM
How you doin'? :P
15th Apr 2009, 03:35 PM
Aww I guess I'm too late to claim the cookie! Anyway this update was funny and it's nice to get a break from the drama. It's great that Jordan and Romeo are there too, at least Tybalt will know someone. He really should change majors if he's so unhappy. Why did he take psych anyway? Luna is awesome and not just because Luna is part of my screen-name. I do hope she stops screeching at 3 am though or Tybalt will commit birdicide ((I'm surprised it's a real word!)). I can't wait for the next update.
15th Apr 2009, 05:58 PM
How you doin'? :P
took me few minutes to get the joke xD
16th Apr 2009, 07:18 AM
That is my FAVOURITE Joey line. I say it all the time :P
16th Apr 2009, 05:26 PM
Have been a silent lurker :p
Love the story though, can't wait for more!
17th Apr 2009, 03:45 AM
Thank you for the comments guys! I am glad my stories are so popular and every one likes them :D Many thanks to my buddy xzkiskazx2 for helping me with chapters 11 and 12! Enjoy guys!
Chapter 11 -I Love Him Not
Diana was walking up to Dylan's house.
She really hoped thing would get better. She really did. She hated to admit the fact that Tybalt might be right. She knocked on the door and Dylan opened," Ready?" she asked.
" Yup," He went out and closed the door. He closed the door behind him and held her hand. Diana pulled it away. It felt weird as she did it. It felt cold and unpleasant. Why does she has sudden feeling of disgust for him?" You all right?" he asked her. Diana looked at him.
" Yeah, I'm perfect..."
When they were in the cinema, Diana felt very sick. She couldn't concentrate on the movie. She got up and excused herself saying she needed to go to the bathroom. As she reached there, she threw up. After she was done she went to the mirror. Her vision blurred. She almost fell over. She opened her eyes and jumped up.
She looked in the mirror and saw herself. She was crying and her face was in bruises. Her clothes was ripped up. Diana's reflection kept crying as she looked at Diana. Diana touched her face, so did reflection.
Nothing. Reflection cried harder.
" You should have listened...." Reflection whispered. Diana blinked. Next second there was nothing.
She touched the mirror trying to see what happened. She had a horrible feeling in her stomach again. She run into the cabin and threw up again. Diana cried as her stomach turned inside out. She got up.
" I must leave..." she told to herself. She left the bathroom and run out the mall. Dylan probably didn't even notice or care. When she got home, she collapsed on her sofa. Her stomach hurt. Dreams were happening more often since Tybalt left. She didn't sleep well, she was broken and she couldn't eat, because every time she did, she felt like throwing up.
Diana started crying, " I miss you..." She cried out and covered her face with her pillow. Marina knocked on the door and came in," Sweetie? Dinee! Honey! What's wrong?" Marina sat next to Diana. Diana cried on her shoulder," I miss Jordan..."
" Sweetie..." Marina hugged her.
" I also miss Tybalt...A lot...." She sobbed. She then told her mom about the dreams and what just happened in the mall.
" I think you are in love with your friend here..." Marina smiled.
" Tybalt?..." Diana looked confused. Her in love with Tybalt? Noooooo. She had nothing more then brotherly love for him. She felt save with him. It felt different, it felt...just good. He was the only guy she let to kiss her.
" Who else silly?" Marina laughed," If Being with Dylan makes you want to throw up and when you are with Tybalt, you feel happy and different...I think that is being in love...or at least having some sort of passion towards a guy..."
" How did you and dad meet mom?..."Diana asked out of the blue.
She didn't want to think about her love life right now. Marina paused for a second then smiled," When I was 16, I was a popular girl in high school. Yeah, believe it or not. Then I argued with my Football player boyfriend, so my friends pranked me by setting me on the blind date. This is how I met your dad. He was what you would call a geek. But he was so sweet! I never met such a wonderful guy before! He was so gentle so romantic. I just felt something towards him that day; few days later I broke up with my football player boyfriend and went for your dad. We married when we were in university..." Diana smiled. Marina looked at her daughter," Few years later Jordan was born. Then you. And Lucy..." She thought about her kids. They were everything to her. When Jordan left to university, Marina realized that they won't stay with her forever. Diana is growing up too, so will Lucy. She gave Diana a hug before she left. Diana looked out the window at the night sky. She liked to watch the stars with Tybalt. He would alway give them weird names and make her laugh. She missed him. Diana walked around the room looking for something to do. Diana took her cell phone out and typed few numbers in. Few minutes later her phone rang.
" Hi..." She mumbled.
" Is something wrong?" Tybalt asked. She texted him and asked him to call her. She closed her eyes holding tears that were swelling in her eyes," No nothing, I just wanted to hear your voice...You..You aren't busy are you?"
" No, not at all. I was playing games with Joey...One second...Yes I WAS!" he said to Joey.
" Come on now dude! Abandon me for a chick!" Joey laughed.
Diana laughed as well," Be quick though..."
" Okey, I'm in my room now," Tybalt laughed," Don't mind him he is a retard..."
" It's okey, he is funny..."
" So whatcha wanna talk about?"
After 2 hours of talking Diana hung up, after saying good night. She did not want to hung up. She looked at the clock. It was 12am. She changed in her pajamas and took her diary out:
I had a horrible day today. I felt sick, I threw up when I had a date with Dylan. He didn't even call or text me. It proves to me how much he could care less about me. I hope things get better. I really hope he is good guy. I also talked to Tybalt today. It is so empty without him. I realize how much I miss him. I think...mom was right...I think I love him....
Diana J. Michaels
Hope you like it.
17th Apr 2009, 04:09 AM
Wow, I loved the mirror scene. That was creative!
17th Apr 2009, 04:12 AM
Great chapter, Kyle. Seriously, you write good. Diana seriously needs to break up with Dylan, he is a pig. Her and Tybalt would be perfect together.
17th Apr 2009, 05:18 AM
I was gonna post this straight after ch.11, but I realised I was missing some screenies...F**king cam too, it seriously hates me when I at top of my inspiration D: But still enjoy :D
Chapter 12 - He Watches Over You
Diana was sitting on the couch over at Dylan's place. She was bored. She didn't know why she came here. Dylan was sitting next to her.
" Diana may I ask you a question?"
" Whatever..." Diana wanted to leave.
" You know?...we've been together for a year..."
" 8 months..."Diana interrupted him.
" Really seemed longer...As I was sayin'...you know...we should have sex!" Dylan said it loud and rough. Diana turned and gave him a blank look," We've been dating for a while now...."
" Convince me more..." Diana expected this conversation.
" There is nothing better then sex, and if you give it up that'd be awesome...I mean it is your duty as a hot dudette to do that..."
" I mean...I'm hot you are hot, that equals sex! Wanna go and do it? Come o..."
" How do you know it is the best thing in the world?"
" Uhh...I heard from friends...."
" Seriously let's go and do it..." Diana looked at her boyfriend. She got up," You are pathetic..."She walked towards the door and slammed it behind her. As soon as she left Britney came out of Dylan's room," I will agree with her you were pathetic..."
" Ach!" Dylan screamed in shock," Stop sneaking up on me like this!"
" You must like have sex with her...if you want her to be permanently yours!"
" I am trying you know!"
" You like aren't! I need to revenge her stealing Tybalt from me!"
" He dumped you, she didn't steal any one..."
" Oh yeah?...At his graduation I saw them like making out!" Dylan's jaw dropped.
" She never kissed me...in anyway not even cheek...that whore..." Dylan felt fury build in him.
" Like I know right?...But like don't worry, I will make her like pay for it!"
Diana sat in the geography class. She hated it. She hated school now. She would have to walk home now.
Also Diana would have to walk all alone to the other end of town to pick up Lucy. Then walk home with her. When Tybalt was here he would help her around with that. She sighed. She felt something hit her in the back of her head. She looked down on the floor and saw a scrambled piece of paper.
She picked it up and her eyes widen when she read it:
I like saw you and Tybalt on graduation night...
There was no need for signature because use of word 'like' gave it away. Diana turned around and gave Britney an evil look.
Britney came up to her at the break and pulled her towards herself," I like saw you two...You think you are so cool like stealing my guy while you are with Dylan?"
" He doesn't care about me, what do you expect me to do?"
" When you date some one you date them idiot!" Britney hissed at Diana.
" I hear that coming from a whore!" Diana screamed out making every one stare at them.
" Oh Am I whore now? Look at yourself cheating on Dylan..."
" Who is Dylan?" Kaee came out from the crowd and came up to Britney," And who are you to tell her she is a whore, whore?!" Britney helplessly looked at Kaee.
" Get out of my sight!" Kaee screamed in her face. Britney squeaked and run off. Diana smiled at Kaee," Thanks, but I could have handled her myself."
" No problem, I had to stick up for you, I promised Tybalt..."
"You did what now?" Diana was confused.
" I know what is going on between you two, and if I was like Britney world would know. Don't worry secret is safe with me. I promised to keep an eye on you and if anything goes wrong report him..."
" I feel watched..." Diana laughed. Kaee smiled and waved at her as he walked off.
When Diana got home with Lucy she went upstairs. She took a quick shower and put on the prettiest clothes she had. She took her hand bag and stuffed some clothes in it. Diana walked down stairs and saw Marina doing dishes," Why so pretty?" Marina laughed.
" I'm going to visit a friend. I might stay over too..." Marina raised an eyebrow, but Diana told her," Jordan is there..."
" Okey be careful..."Diana walked out the door and headed to the train station. She knew she has to see Tybalt.
Hope you like it.
17th Apr 2009, 05:38 AM
I love the update! I bet i'm the first one to reply..hehe..Yay me! Can't wait to read more more more!! I wonder what happns next..hehe:) I'll be waiting..:D
17th Apr 2009, 05:42 AM
Ohmygodzz creepyzzz *turn off overuse of z mode*
Great chapter, can't wait for more :)
17th Apr 2009, 06:29 AM
thanks for comments glad you like the updates :D
17th Apr 2009, 06:30 AM
Poor Britney... NOT!
It's a good thing Tybalt told Kaee to watch Diana, you know, before a war happen between those two
Come on Diana, you can't be dating a guy who only wants to get in your pants!
Oh, and great update, can't wait for more!
17th Apr 2009, 07:46 AM
I can actually hear Britney talking in my head and every time she sys like I can't help but laugh.
Great update! Diana looks determined..wonder what she has in store for Tybalt..
17th Apr 2009, 04:24 PM
You've done it again! I like how you take an average plot (girl meets guy, dates other guy, realizes guy # 2 is a pig and gets together with guy # 1) and make it fresh. Marina's sidestory was interesting and I can't help but wonder what her life would've been like if she had kept dating Mr. Football. Do you have any idea what happened to him in your story's reality?. Wow, Diana's been dating Dylan for eight months! Given that initial infatuation wears off in a month I say it's been seven too long. I agree with Danirawr that Britney saying like is funny. Kaee is great and I'm glad that he got his crush and is sticking up for Diana. Thank you Tybalt! Hmm, I wonder what Diana's going to do?
17th Apr 2009, 04:57 PM
You've done it again! I like how you take an average plot (girl meets guy, dates other guy, realizes guy # 2 is a pig and gets together with guy # 1) and make it fresh. Marina's sidestory was interesting and I can't help but wonder what her life would've been like if she had kept dating Mr. Football. Do you have any idea what happened to him in your story's reality?. Wow, Diana's been dating Dylan for eight months! Given that initial infatuation wears off in a month I say it's been seven too long. I agree with Danirawr that Britney saying like is funny. Kaee is great and I'm glad that he got his crush and is sticking up for Diana. Thank you Tybalt! Hmm, I wonder what Diana's going to do?
I never really thought of what happened to Marina's ex. Well, Diana wouldn't be there for sure if she ended up with mister football player. Also, when I write Britney, I imagine stereotypical American High school girl. I really hate those so in a sense I am making like fun of like them! xD
oh btw lunaselene503, *hands juua cookie anyways* I forgot to give it to you earlier xD
Glad you like it guys! :D I will update in a few. Thank for kind comments all of you
18th Apr 2009, 07:26 AM
I called this chapter that way because of the pool game they were playing xD I think it is adorable :D Enjoy!
Chapter 13 - Marco Polo
Diana walked from the train station. She stood across the road from Tybalt's dorm.
" He said it is right across the train station. It is the only one I see right across the station anyways..." She looked around to make sure no cars are coming. She was surprised there was a little traffic for friday afternoon. She expected billions of cars, going in and out and train station to be crowded.
She crossed the road and rang the door bell. She heard sudden commotion inside," JOOEEEY! DOOR!" She heard familiar voice and thought to herself, 'Lazy bum!'.
" I'm In the bathroom!" Another voice replied.
" Ugh fine!..." Diana heard foot steps and keys in the door. Tybalt opened the door and he had sleepy look on his face that turned into mixture of suprizement and happiness when he saw Diana," DINEE!" He picked her up.
Diana laughed as he sniped her around," Oh my god! I told you to warn me!" He held her close.
" I wanted to surprise you!" She put her head on his shoulder. Tybalt laughed," It worked. God, did I miss you!" They got interrupted by flushing toilet and Joey coming out of the bathroom. He looked at Diana with a surprised look on his face. Diana smiled and waved at him," You are Joey, right?
" Last time I checked I was...How ya doin'?" he shook Diana hand. Tybalt rolled his eyes.
" Is Jordan here?" Diana turned around to Tybalt. He shrugged.
" He is at class I think," Joey said," Wanna go swimming? We have swimming pool over here..."
" So I heard! And Sure, I'd love too!"
" Swimming in autumn? You two are crazy...."
" The weather is awesome! Look at your girl, she is wearing a miniskirt, so the weather must me awesome..."
" Uhm, she isn't my girl..." Tybalt said confused. Joey just waved his hand at him," Girl as a woman, girl as a friend, take it anyway you want. Now get in that room and put your short on..." Tybalt rolled his eyes and laughed.
" Where can I change?" Diana asked. Joey pointed at the bathroom. Diana nodded and went to change.
"Banzai!" Tybalt slid down the slide and splashed into the water," Shit, its cold!"
" It's fine I swan in here just now!" Diana laughed. Joey run up behind her and pushed her," EEK!"she squeaked as she fell into the water. Tybalt started laughing," Agh! You are so evil seriously!" She splashed water on his legs.
" CANON BALL!" Joey jumped into water and landed on Tybalt. Diana couldn't help but laugh.
Tybalt swam up coughing water out, " Dude, you are evil!" He attacked Joey. Diana got out of the water and laid on the sun bed. She watched guys fight in the water but her thought got occupied with Dylan. She wanted to break up with him but she didn't know how. Tybalt jumped out of the water and came up to Diana.
" What's on your mind?"
" May I ask you something?"
" Of course!"
" What would be a good and not such a traumatizing way to break up with a guy?" Tybalt blinked.
" You are asking a guy that never dated..." Tybalt said coldly," wait let me ask Joey...JOEY!"
" Huh?" Joey looked up from the pool.
" We need to ask you dating related question..." He explain to Joey as he was coming up to them. Diana repeated her question. Joey tapped his ear," I think you got water in there Tyb...Hmm...I really do not now..."
" You dated before didn't you?"
" Of course who didn't date in high school?" Tybalt wanted to just disapear in a poof," Oh..."
" Non taken..." Tybalt said coldly.
" I'm sorry it is just weird you haven't..."
" Have you seen the herpies infected girls in Private school?" Diana said," I think because of the rules restrictions, they are worse then public schools...."
" Riiight..." Joey mumbled," let me get it straight, you wanna break up with a guy in not traumatazing way: for him or you?"
" Him obviously..."
" Heh, Dylan to be traumatized by that? Unlikely..." Tybalt chuckled. Diana gave him a look.
" Hmmm let's see now...How was I dumped before...I was got dumped by a girl once she said she is a lesbian...That made me laugh especially when next day i saw he frenching a guy..."
" She was bi," Tybalt laughed.
" Perhaps," Joey continued," my last ex however, said she found some one else, I am still on good terms with her though..." Diana thought of that option. Technically, if she did say that to Dylan it would be true. However, she was not sure if she has mutual feeling from Tybalt towards her.
" This one other time, girl told me she like stronger guys then I am and I later saw her with a weak skinny guy...Fun!" Joey continued," Let's go inside, I'm starving..." They got up and went inside. Tybalt went in his room and gave Diana a towel.
" So how is school?" Diana sat on the couch and dried her hair. Joey took a left over chinese take out from a fridge at blobbed it on the counter. He went to his room and came out with a folder full of papers. He sat at the counter and laid the pictures in front of him as a card deck. Tybalt looked over his shoulder," What's that?"
" Homework...I have to copy some famous artist...So I am looking if i have any sketches already done...What was your question Diana?"
" How is school going for you guys?"
" Decent." Tybalt mumbled stealing some chinese food from the box.
" Awesome! We have lots of fun projects to do!" Joey said cheerfully stealing box from Tybalt's hands.
" You suck..." Tybalt said.
" So do you..." Joey digged into the food.
" You are nice guys..." Diana laughed and went into the bathroom to change.
" I think I am going to change the classes," Tybalt said loud enough so Diana hears," Psychology is complicated."
" Why did you take it in a 1st place?" Diana yelled from the bathroom.
" Grandpa...he said it will take me far in life..."
" Old man haf a poinf..." Joey said with his mouth full. She swallowed and continued," but you have to make your own choices in life too..."
" I will talk to him and see if I can switch to arts or economics..."
" Boring..." Joey munched on a shrimp," go to art with me, it will be fun!" Meanwhile Diana came out the bathroom. Joey's jaw dropped," Rawr...Tybalt you must be gay for not dating her, look at her..." Diana giggled.
" Thank you."
" I am not gay. If I am gay you are a lesbian..."
" Why thank you sweetie..." Joey said in a squeaky voice. Tybalt stuck his tongue out.
" Hey Dinee. Listen, want to go downtown? I have a day off today, so I thought maybe I can take you out somewhere..."
" Sure! But you have to ask my mom..." Tybalt opened his mouth, but before any words came out Diana continued," Yes, normally it would be dad, but dad is stuck in the hospital tonight..."
" Okey then, I will get dressed," Tybalt disappeared in his room. He came out few minutes later," Come Dinee let's go. Joey you wanna go?"
" No, I prefer my chinese cold.." Joey looked in the box for little rice crumbs," AKA I iz lazeh!..."
" Typical, I will see you later tonight then," Tybalt said before he closed the door.
" Mhm..."Joey mumbled. Tybalt opened the car for Diana and the drove off.
Hope you like it :D
18th Apr 2009, 07:39 AM
I kind of hated this chapter. I do not know why. I hope you like it. I do not ehy my photobucket went evil and didn't let me upload the restaurant pictures...Sorry about that....
Chapter 14 - Tragedy
As soon as came to their house, Diana went up the stairs, to the front door. She rang the door bell and Marina opened the door," Why, hello there! Come in guys!" Tybalt followed Diana in the house. Lucy ran downstairs.
" Oh...I thought you were Jordan...But I will hug you anyways," She gave Tybalt a hug.
" She is friendly like that!" Diana smiled. She then turned to her mom," Tybalt needs to ask you something mom."
" Does he now?" Marina smiled," Why Tybalt you grew up! Last time I saw you was at my daughters 16. Boys sure develop drastically!What is it want to ask me?"
" I was wondering If i can take your daughter out tonight,"Tybalt started," Nothing serious, just a friendly out going..."
" Hmm...Sure, but if you take Lucy with you guys. She has been sitting home for days and it be good for her to go for a walk," Diana had a slight disappointment," What you say?"
" Sure, no problem!" why did Diana hope he would say 'no'?
" Oh yay! I will go get dressed!" Lucy squeaked and run upstairs. Tybalt came up to Diana," You don't mind right?"
" No, not at all!" although she did a little bit. Lucy came downstairs few minutes later.
" Let's go?"
" Well, it's up to you, where you want to go?"
" Ooh! Take me out to a restaurant! Like, I don't know...where there are guys in suits that talk french!" Lucy clapped her hands.
" Uhm, nothing to fancy!" Tybalt laughed as they walked towards the door.
" Be careful guys, and have fun!" Marina closed the door behind them.
" But I'm hungry!" Lucy frowned.
" How about we go to that 60s style place? it has good food plus it is not that expensive..."
" Sure, fine by me. Get int he car, girls." Tybalt opened the doors for them.
" I want cheeseburger!" Lucy blopped herself in the seat. Diana sat next to her.
" I will get it, what about you Dinee?"
" Oh come on! You are thin with out a salad!" Lucy poked her sisters side.
" She has a point," Tybalt chuckled.
" Fine get me a cheeseburger as well!"
Tybalt came back few minutes later saying they need to wait for their food.
" You know, you are actually nice," Lucy said when their food got served," I always thought you were grumpy and mean, but you are fun..."
" Am I now?" Tybalt said sarcastically.
" Mhm," Lucy stuffed cheeseburger in her mouth. Tybalt smirked and threw his food at her," Hey! You are mean!" she laughed and threw her fries in his face. Diana rolled her eyes.
" I used to do this with Julie when she was younger. She would always throw food at me..." french fry interrupted him," Okey, I wanna eat those, so stop throwing them."
" Let's go to the park later, I wanna play on the play ground." Lucy stole some fries from Tybalt's plate.
" Aaaw come on! You threw all your fries at me and now you are stealing mine? And you saying I'm mean!" Diana laughed.
" Sure, we will go, just finish your food both of you!" Diana laughed.
Lucy was running around the park while Diana and Tybalt were sitting on the bench.
" Why did you ask me that question earlier today?" Tybalt asked Diana.
" I just...I don't know..."
" Talk to me..."
" I don't feel same way towards him..I am closer with my best friend then I am with my boyfriend...."
" Like I said, brake up with him before anything bad happens..."Tybalt sighed. He felt like a broken record repeating same thing over and over again.
" Nothing bad will happen. Everything will be fine..." Diana got up," Lucy! Let's go! Can you drive us home?"
" Sure," Tybalt got up. Lucy run up to him and held his hand. Tybalt looked down at her.
" Hi!" She smiled. Tybalt smirked. He walked girls to the car and helped to get in. When they were home, Lucy jumped out the car," Oh a ball!" She run up to the basket ball that was laying in front of the house.
" Lucy be careful!" Diana got out the car and came up to Tybalt," Thanks for the evening."
" No problem, anytime," Diana stood on her tip toes and kissed his cheek," heh..."
" I never seen Lucy so friendly toward some one, I think she likes you..."
" Really now?" Tybalt heard screetching of car wheels. So did Diana.
" Lucy get of the road!"
" Huh?!" Lucy stopped in the middle of the road. Tybalt and Diana saw bright light behind her," GET OFF THE ROAD!" Diana leaped and stretched hand towards Lucy. Something pushed Diana. She heard her sister scream and screetch of the wheels. Diana opened her eyes. She was sitting on the ground next to Tybalt who had his arms around her.
" Lucy...LUCY NOOOO!"
Hope you like it...
18th Apr 2009, 07:50 AM
Shit! Poor Lucy!
Great update. I knew that was going to happen as soon as Diana said 'Lucy be careful'
Eeek. Can't wait for the next update!
18th Apr 2009, 08:13 AM
Noo!! Poor Lucy! I hope she's okay, or Diana would blame herself for it.
Meh, I hope Diana and Dylan breaks up soon, and she'll be with Tybalt.
Oh, and Dylan: :eviltongu
Great update as always! You know, you do inspire me to write stories of my own. I mean, finally someone write about Veronaville, my favorite neighborhood. But, can you tell about the Summerdreams a bit? Or maybe let us take a glimpse of Puck.
Hermia is going with Puck at his school
When I read the Puck part in chapter 9, my heart flutter with joy, because I always have a crush on him :lovestruc
And I also like your other story, Love Life Complication. It's really great too.
18th Apr 2009, 11:23 AM
Oh noes! She isn't dead, is she? What's happening next!? TELL ME!!!!
Great story so far!
18th Apr 2009, 11:59 AM
Oh noes, Lucy!!! :O
The Tybalt/Joey/Diana chapter was very cute though. I like Joey :)
18th Apr 2009, 05:35 PM
Great update as always! You know, you do inspire me to write stories of my own. I mean, finally someone write about Veronaville, my favorite neighborhood. But, can you tell about the Summerdreams a bit? Or maybe let us take a glimpse of Puck.
When I read the Puck part in chapter 9, my heart flutter with joy, because I always have a crush on him :lovestruc
And I also like your other story, Love Life Complication. It's really great too.
Thanks :D I might include him, but story spins mainly around Tybalt and Diana. I will see if I can add him.
18th Apr 2009, 06:05 PM
Thanks for the cookie. Oh no Lucy! I hope she doesn't die, it would be too sad and Diana may not recover from it. Chapter 13 with Joey,Tybalt and Diana was so funny and I'm glad that Diana's going to dump Dylan. Once again please survive Lucy. Please back up your game as I would hate for you to lose all of this. Have a good day ((or whatever time it is in you timezone)).
19th Apr 2009, 02:26 AM
Waah! Poor Lucy! I never expected that to be the tradedy! Eeep! D: Stupid car! Don't die:) Pleeease?
19th Apr 2009, 03:53 AM
Yay! Puck! (sorry for the fangasm :p)
19th Apr 2009, 11:03 AM
Quick! Shotgun that word before I take it and copyright it! :P
19th Apr 2009, 12:20 PM
The meaning of the word "fangasm" is an over reaction of happiness that can be caused by.. by.. Puck?
Wait, that's "Puckgasm"
Meh, all I know, that word is MINE! :jk:
19th Apr 2009, 12:25 PM
Puck is awesome.
But he has funny eyebrows :P
19th Apr 2009, 05:01 PM
Meh, he does have those funny looking eyebrows, and ears. Which is cute, for me at least :D
I'm still waiting for the update..
19th Apr 2009, 05:28 PM
Aw, poor Lucy. I hope this wasn't what Diana's dream was about a couple of chapters back (finding Lucy all bloody). I hope she makes it.
Anyway, great updates as always Kyle!
19th Apr 2009, 06:10 PM
Wait, that's "Puckgasm"
I am having Tybaltgasm as I write this story then :lol:
Thanks for wonderful comments and updates should be up in a few :D
20th Apr 2009, 04:01 AM
And Dylan is having Britneygasm....
Sorry, my perverted mind, it gets me into trouble :P
20th Apr 2009, 04:17 AM
Gasms All Round
20th Apr 2009, 04:30 AM
Thanks every one for wonderful comments. Fun to see what kind of gasms people are having while reading this story xD and pervertness is fine by me, as long as it doesn't go over the bound XD Enjoy this chapter!
Chapter 15 - Unwanted Visitor
Everything went blurry afterwards. Marina, Diana and Tybalt were sitting in the hospital.
" It is all my fault...I could have pulled her back...Why did you pull me back?It should have been me instead of her..." Diana cried.
" I panicked! I didn't want you under those wheels!" Tybalt's voice was shaky.
" You should have left me!" Diana screamed. She then broke in tears on his shoulder.
" It is not your fault sweetie..." Marina said through her teeth," it is driver's fault..." Jordan run in the hospital.
" I came as soon as I heard! How is she?" he sat next to Tybalt. Marina didn't answer. They heard foot steps and saw Dean. Marina got up and leaped into his arms. He held her close.
" What happened?" he was about to cry.
" Daddy, it wasn't my fault, I tr..." She broke in tears as she pressed against her dad.
" It is okey sweetie, everything will be fine...I will go check on her..."Dean walked into emergency room. Diana sat back next to Tybalt. She didn't even bother to message Dylan. She knew he would care less.Tybalt put his arm around her and whispered in her ear," Everything is fine, it is not your fault..." Diana pressed against him. She closed her eyes. She felt relaxed and safe and she fell asleep.
White room. Diana opened her eyes. All she saw was a white room. She saw a figure at the end of room. As she walked towards it so did the figure. Diana gasped as she realized it was her little sister.
" Where am I?" Diana asked. She feared for worst. Lucy had blood marks on her face. Scratches and bruises. Why did that face look so familiar? Lucy smiled at her.
" It is okey, you aren't dead..." She giggled. Diana's heart stopped.
" A..A...Are you?"
" I can not tell you that...All I can say I am alright. Tell mommy and daddy not to worry..."
" I...I why am I here?...."
" I didn't want to be alone. It is boring." Diana was completely confused," I can see you are confused. Ask me anything. I can not give you direct answers. I am not allowed."
" What is going on?"
" After that car hit me, I fell asleep, and now I am here. So are you...Oh ask mommy to bring Mr. Fuzzy. He will miss me a lot..." Mr. Fuzzy was a teddy bear she got from Diana on her first birthday. She loved that toy. Tears came in Diana's eyes.
" Of course sweetie!..."
" You know Tybalt is a nice guy...Why you are with that weird Dylan guy I do not understand." For a second Lucy sounded like a wise and experienced woman.
" I mean...If not him, You would be with me in emergency room...On the other hand good you aren't...mommy has enough stress...You like him, don't you? You seem so happy when you are with him, I really wish I was adult too now..." She laughed.
" You will grow up fast, and you will regret it too.." Diana smiled as she remembered when she was her age. Then she thought to herself; Why the hell is she still with a jerk of a Dylan?
" I have to go, they are calling me..." Lucy looked around.
" I just have to go...," She hugged Diana,"Oh, one thing...Please listen..." Lucy didn't finish because she disappeared in a little cloud. White corridor became black. Diana saw herself sitting in the far corner. She was beaten up. She was crying.
Diana looked at herself and whispered," You should have listened....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" She screamed as she got dragged away into the wall.
" NOOOOOOOOOOO!" Diana screamed making every one else jump up.
" Dinee you okey?" Jordan asked in shaky voice.
" Yeah, dreams...How long are we here?..."
" Three hours..." Tybalt looked at his watch. They saw doctor come out of emergency room. Every got up at the same time. Dean was standing behind the doctor with tears in his eyes. Diana's heart skipped a beat. So did Marina's.
" I'm sorry to tell you this...Lucy is in comma. We tried everything we could..."
" No, My baby!" Marina screamed as she broke in tears.
"...there is a low chance she will survive. We will try our best to keep her health up. The car hit her pretty bad..." He left.
Marina run up to her husband and broke in tears on his shoulder," I will stay here in case she wake up..." Marina cried out. She sounded hopeless, even though she tried to put some hope in her voice.
" Mom...She asked you to bring Mr. Fuzzy..." Diana said quietly. Marina came up to her and hugged her," Okey, I will..."
" Boys, would you mind staying with Diana at home?" Dean addressed to Tybalt and Jordan," I don't want her being alone in the condition she is..."
" Sure Dad," Jordan took Diana's hand," Let's go sis..." Diana followed him and Tybalt.
Tybalt said he will sleep in Diana's room in case she needs anything. Jordan slept in his old room which was right next door to Diana's. Diana laid in her bed looking up at the celling.Tybalt was laying on the sofa and reading some random book he got from Diana's shelf. Diana sighed and took out her diary.
It was an awful day today. It wasn't at first. It got horrible towards the end. My little sister got hit by a car. I got to talk to her. But it kind of scares me because, I do not know what it means. I mean...I was either in heaven with her or some kind of parallel world. She told me I should listen. To what? I also saw my self being dragged into the wall. I was beaten up. Those visions are really creeping me out now. Tybalt is here with me. I hope I won't have nightmares.
Diana J. Michaels
Marina was staring blankly in front of her. She couldn't and didn't want to think of losing her daughter. Her youngest daughter. Dean was away treating other patients. Marina raised her head and her heart skipped a beat as she saw him, standing at the end of her daughters bed.
Hope you like it! Next chapter will be posted soon :D
20th Apr 2009, 04:39 AM
Eeek scary. Great ending!
It's so weird, I keep seeing people using names that I've used for characters that are later in my story. Freaking me out a little.
Can't wait for the next update!
20th Apr 2009, 05:04 AM
*takes deep breath*
20th Apr 2009, 07:35 AM
Oh my Meggie, stop freaking out :lol: Eh, you were saying you were pervs with all your gasms, well I am a perv :D THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS VIOLENCE, ALMOST WOOHOO AND WOOHOO!
Chapter 16 - Dreams Come True
It has been a month since Lucy got hit by a car. Michaels family heard wonderful news of Lucy waking up the next morning. She was in bad condition, but she would survive. Marina however, felt vary sick. She blamed hospital food for it. And that was what every one thought until she called her family in the living room.
" I have told this to Lucy while I visited her today. She seemed very happy. Well...Guys, We will have addition to our family soon..."
" Oh no your mom is coming over?" Dean said in a cold tone.
" No silly...This visitor will come in about 8 more months..."She stood watching Diana having a wide smile and her husband looking at her in amazement," Yes, I am pregnant..."
" Marina! That is wonderful news!" Dean hugged his wife. Diana squealed as she jumped up.
" I will have a little sibling to practise on! Yay! I have to go tell Jullie!" She run upstairs. As she reached up stairs she paused for a moment. She decided to call Dylan.
" Hey, We gotta talk. Can I come over tonight? Great, I will see you tonight," She hung up. Tonight everything will be over.
After Diana left, Dean came up to his wife.
" Sweetie, may I ask you something..."
" Of course love."
" Uhm...When exactly did we have it? I mean..I do not remember having sex about month ago..." Marina stood still for a second. She looked down and sighed," You might wanna sit down," Dean obediently sat on the bed. Marina sighed yet again," I...Ever wondered why Lucy's sudden recovery was such a miracle?"
" We tried to figure it out at the hospital, but we couldn't an answer..." Marina turned away because tears came to her eyes.
" She was meant to die that night..."
" What are you talking about? I do not understand..."
" I saw Grim Reaper and the end of my daughters bed...He looked at me and nodded. I stood on my knees begging to spare Lucy's life. She is only 13, she has so much to live for. He said," Farewell, I will spare your daughters life if you bare a child from me..." I know it sounds unrealistic but it did happen. I asked if there is another option. He said that another option is your daughter comes with me tonight. I looked at Lucy...and I agreed to his bargain..."
" Did you and him..." Dean started.
" For Christ's sake Dean! He is a corpse! No...All he did was touch my stomach. Then he told me," Bare this child as it is your own." And left. Next thing I know is Lucy sat on the bed and said," Mommy?"..." Dean looked at his wife not knowing to believe her or not. He heard of grimpregnantation before. He didn't know how to react. He got up and silently left the room.
Diana approached Dylan's house. She was about to knock on the door but it opened by it self. She heard giggles and laughs coming from Dylan's room. She slowly came up to it and opened the door. Her heart dropped to the sight she faced.
" Why hi! Guy stealer!" She smiled evilely. Diana just looked at them. Dylan came up to her," I will make you mine too now bitch..." He grabbed her by her shoulders. Diana noticed with corner of her eye the wine bottles in the corner.
" You are drunken piece of shit! We are through!" She screamed.
" Are we now?! Come here," He grabbed her by the hair and threw her on the floor. Diana looked at him.
" What...what are you doing?" Her eyes widen as she saw Dylan attempting to unzip his pants," No..." She tried to get up and run, but Dylan dragged her in the living room and threw her on the sofa.
" Dylan...this wasn't quiet what I like meant..." Britney started.
" Shut up! Stay out of this..." Britney stood watching Diana. She saw fear in her eyes.
" Get away from me!" Diana tried to push him of as he was pulling her pants down. Dylan hit her in the face. Again and again," Help! Somebody help me..." Diana cried out. She felt her pants going lower and lower. She looked at Britney. Britney looked away.
" Dylan please, stop..." Diana prayed for his parents to come home. Or Kaee to hear. Even better Tybalt zoom in and kick his ass. Dream on girl. She looked down and screamed as Dylan was about to do the deed. Then she heard a thump. Dylan grunted and fell of her. Diana sat up and saw Britney with a baseball bat breathing heavily. Girl exchanged horrifing looks.
Diana attempted to pull her pants. Her hands were shaking. Both girl jumped up as they saw Dylan trying to get up. Britney looked at Diana," Run..." She whispered. Diana followed her advise and run towards the door. She ran as fast as she could until she was out of breath. She stopped and screamed. Tears were running down her face. Her face felt sore and it stung as salty tears hit her wounds.
" Tybalt...I should have listened..." The it hit her. Her dreams were a warning. A prophesy. About Lucy being hit by a car, about her getting almost raped. She cried harder. She felt like such an idiot. She got up and run home. She had to tell mom. She would help.
But as she got home, she realize there were more problems without her.
" HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?!" Dean screamed.
" It was for our child! Or you wanted me to just let Grim Reaper take her?"
" No I didn't but have a child from him?!"
Diana cried harder. She run upstairs and grabbed a back pack. She stuffed enough clothes for few days and wrote a note to her mom saying if she need her to call this number. Diana stuck the note to the fridge and run out the house towards the train station.
" Diana?!" Tybalt exclaimed as he saw her face. Diana stood in the door way sobbing. What should she start off with? How her drunken ex almost raped her and beat her up? or that her parents are fighting? and her new sibling is a hell spawn? She put her head on his shoulder and broke in tears.
Joey came out. He gasped," What happened?"
" I broke up with Dylan...And I fell..."Stupid lie," my parent;s are fighting too I just needed to get away...can I stay with you guys for few nights?..."
" Of course what a stupid question..." Tybalt held her close," Go take a shower, I'll get you something to eat..." Diana shook her head. She wanted anything but eat. She still had a picture of Dylan's manhood that made her want to throw up even harder.
" I will lay down after shower..."
" You can sleep on my bed, I will sleep on the sofa." Tybalt said.
" No... I will sleep on the sofa. I will be fine..." She headed to the shower. Her cuts stung as the water touched them. When she was done with the shower, she sat on the sofa in her pajamas.
She couldn't fall asleep. She looked the celling. She got up and went into Tybalt's room. He was stretched on the bed. Diana poked his side. Tybalt looked at her," Sorry I woke you up...Can I sleep with you?"
" Sure," He moved over and Diana laid next to him. She thought about before. If she is to do it with any one, She'd do it with Tybalt. And she wanted it.
" Tybalt..." she started nervously.
" Make love to me..." She whispered. Tybalt rubbed his eyes to wake up completely. He sat up on the bed.
" What now?!"
" I want my first time to be with you. Just like my first kiss was..." She felt confident about it. Tybalt paused. Now that was something he didn't see coming. He was hoping to hit luck in University with that. But he didn't expect that to come form Diana. On the other hand, it is rather her, then some girl he barely knows. He felt oh soooo unsure about it....
" A....Are you sure?" he raised hi eyebrow. Diana nodded.
Tybalt gulped as he leaned towards her," for 100%?"
" Yes..." She kissed him.
I warned you guys :D I hope you like it. I felt so bad for Diana in this chapter.
20th Apr 2009, 07:53 AM
Poor Diana, and I agree with what Meggie said before:
*takes deep breath*
And I now agree with:
20th Apr 2009, 08:08 AM
Ooh la la!
Great update. Poor Diana..but lucky Diana too!
20th Apr 2009, 10:37 AM
Grimpregnation?! Cool! There's some story you got there ;)
And poor Diana! I was wondering what's up with Britney, why is she nice all of the sudden? But, at least Diana's safe. And I hope Tybalt (or Jordan, maybe) kicks Dylan's ass!
Wow, things get hot and heavy with Diana and Tybalt here.. Maybe you do have "Tybaltgasm" when you write the story. And I hope they both know the consequences.
20th Apr 2009, 03:28 PM
Wow those two chapters were a doozy! I'm glad that Lucy is alright and Grimpregnation, awesome! Okay Dylan is the lowest of the low and I hope he goes to you-know-where. At least Britney is decent enough to stop him. I officially take back half of the nasty things I've said about her. Dean will eventually come around, right? And last but not least bom-chica-wa-wa and Tybaltgasm!
20th Apr 2009, 08:59 PM
I am glad you guys loved these chapters and I am glad you're having Tybaltgasms nao XD I iz not alone :D
I will try to update before I leave to school. I loved writing next chapter :D
21st Apr 2009, 04:37 AM
I loved this chapter so much because I am plainly evol beeyotch like that :evil: For some reason my gun glitched..I must re-download it if I am to use it in next chapters...I also gave Tybie a little make over. IMHO he looks shmexier with a beard and few freckles(what kind of redhead is he with no freckles? XD )Enjoy :D
Chapter 17 - Don't Mess with the Capulets
Tybalt woke up. Last night seemed like a dream until he turned around and saw Diana peacefully sleeping next to him.
All of a sudden he felt horrible. He was close with Diana, but he never thought of doing it with her. He needed a drink. He left the room trying not wake Diana up. He run to the fridge and saw bottle of brandy in there. He opened it and made a huge sip. He sat at the counter and stared at the bottle.
Joey came out of his room," Can any one tell me why I have two condoms missing?"
" I took them..." Tybalt mumbled.
" Oooh...You and Diana...congrats! Welcome to the not virgins club...How does it feel to one?"
" Horrible...Why do you keep count of your condoms anyways?..."Tybalt sipped from the bottle.
" If you are a guy like me, you would do that... Why you are so grim about it? Dude, you just had your first time! You should be happy about it..."
" It is just weird...In a sense I am happy I did it with her yet I feel like such a bastard..."
" You sound like you raped her... or she raped you..." Tybalt looked at Joey with hatred," I know you wouldn't do that...."
" Can you tell me why you are so upset about it?"
" How about...We aren't dating? Also how about she is like a sister to me?"
" Not blood related sister..." Tybalt rolled his eyes," is this why you are attempting to get drunk?"
" I'm not getting drunk...I am just thinking..." He started blankly in front of him.
" Look...Did she want it?"
" Yeah...She is the one who asked me..."
" Did you want it. Think..."
" I did..."
" Then what the frig are you panicking about? And gimmie that!" He snapped a bottle from Tybalt's hands, " you are acting like you committed a horrible crime, seriously...I suggest you talk to her and such. I'm gonna go to the gym. I will be there if you need me..." Joey left. Few moments later Diana came out of the room," Good morning..." She felt a bit weird about last night. She didn't know what went into her. She wanted it secretly inside, but she didn't know what possessed her yesterday to open up to him yesterday. She quietly sat next to him and looked down.
" Sooo...Wanna talk about it?" Tybalt mumbled.
" I do not know what to say...I'm sorry..."
"It's okey...Can I ask you about...the..face?"
" I fell..." She knew if she would tell him what happened, He would zoom out of the house, with his gun( He had a gun, he showed to her) and shoot Dylan right in the balls. Maybe she should tell him? He deserves it after all.
" Don't lie to me..." He said quiet seriously. Diana gulped.
" I do not want to talk about right now anyways...I broke up with Dylan..."
" You told me that yesterday..."
" Yeah...I'm sorry about yesterday..."
" No problem. What happened...Please talk to me.."
" If you promise to listen and not to get mad..."
" I will attempt as hard as I can.."It was good enough. Diana sighed and told him everything about yesterday. Tybalt listened and when she was done, He quickly walked into his room and got dressed. He took out his gun from the bed side drawer and walked out the room putting it in has back pocket.
" Tybalt Capp..."
" I just wanna put some sense in his head..." He turned around to Diana," Stay here, I will be back soon..."
" I promise I will not kill him..." He slammed the door behind him. Diana run after him but she just saw him drive off.
She knew how aggressive Tybalt can get, She just prayed he wouldn't get too aggressive towards Dylan. In other words, kill him.
Tybalt was driving in his car. The engine roared as he floored the pedal. He knew where Dylan lives. He parked the car in front of the apartment building. He looked inside Dylan's flat. It seemed empty. He went upstairs to Kaee's apartment. Kaee opened the door and gasped.
" Where is Dylan?" Tybalt said through his teeth.
" Why?" Kaee was scared. Tybalt quickly summarized Diana's story. Kaee's eyes widen.
" I saw him leave with Britney not long ago. If I over heard right, They are heading to downtown..."
" Where exactly?"
" That I don't know..."
" Stay on a look out in case he decides to come back...Call me if you see him..."
" Got it," Tybalt stormed out the apartment almost knocking Suki over. Suki looked at him in shock.
As Tybalt drove off Suki typed a number in her cell phone with shaky hands," Britney? T...T..Tybalt is coming to find you guys...He seems furious about whatever it is...I suggest you two hide..."
Britney hung up. Dylan tried to kiss her but she pushed him away," My ex is on the way here..."
" I told you: have sex with her not like rape her! You know what he will do to us?"
" Oh come on..." He jumped up as he heard roar of a car engine," get...in the car..." He mumbled as he was pushing Britney in the car. Britney looked behind her. She saw Tybalt's car down the road behind them," DRIVE!!!" She screamed at Dylan. Dylan floored the pedal and his car drove off. Sadly he was no match for Tybalt's sport almost racing car. Tybalt sped in front of them blocking their way.
Dylan quickly turned to the side road and sped. Tybalt turned around and chased them. When Tybalt wasn't in sight, Dylan got out the car and run in the back streets with Britney" He won't get us here...They are too narrow..." Or so he thought. He turned around and saw the lights. Tybalt smirked as he saw them run to the dead end. He pressed on his pedal making the car roar. He then sped up with a loud screetch. Dylan and Britney hit the wall. Tybalt's car was approaching.
He stopped few steps away from them. He got out the car and started walking towards them.Tybalt took out his gun and a clicked it. Britney screamed as she saw it.
" Leave now, or I will shoot you right between the eyes..." Tybalt said coldly. Britney nodded and run off. Dylan attempted to do the same but Tybalt turned around sharply and pinned him to the wall.
" What do you want..." Dylan cried out.
" Oh, you know well enough..." He clicked the gun again and put it against Dylan's for head. Dylan screamed," Aaaw, not so tough now, huh? Well you were tough enough when you attempted to rape Diana yesterday.." Tybalt kneed Dylan between his legs. Dylan groaned.
" I was drunk..." He cried out.
" IT IS NOT A F**KING EXCUSE!!" Tybalt hit him with a gun and let go of him. Dylan fell on the ground.
Tybalt kicked him in the stomach," Maybe I should permanently take the will to have sex away from you..." He aimed between his legs and clicked the gun almost letting go of the trigger.
"nnnooo..." Dylan coughed out. Tybalt sat next to him and picked him up by his throat.
" Listen Punk..." He hissed," If I see you near Diana ever again. EVER, You are dead. Consider what I done to you here today a warning.." he threw him on the ground. He then shot a bullet right above Dylan's head. Dylan screamed. Tybalt got into his car and drove away leaving Dylan coughing up blood.
Hope you like it :evil: Also to answer every ones question about why the heck is britney nice all of a sudden; Personally, I would not be able to watch other girl getting raped, no matter how much I hate her. So you can make that her excuse, to help Dinee :rolleyes:
21st Apr 2009, 06:45 AM
Jesus, Tybalt's just a touch violent! Dylan's lucky he's not completely psychotic or he'd be dead.
And I definitely agree that Britney's probably had a change of heart seeing how intense Dylan actually was. It wasn't just revenge anymore, it turned to abuse and if I were her I'd be pretty shocked too.
21st Apr 2009, 06:56 AM
Dylan is also Lucky, Gun I downloaded glitched xD I was bored the other day and I was browsing wikipedia for the Romeo and Juliet, and I bumped in to the movie article( the movie with DiCaprio in it) and I kinda thought, that Tybalt is meant to be a bit violent, so I thought adding him a gun will make him even scarier.
Thanks for comment Dani :D( mind If I call you that?)
21st Apr 2009, 07:19 AM
The title says all, don't mess with Capulets! Especially Tybalt. He's mean, and furious, and violent, and, mean (did I said that already?) and that's so cool! That makes me go Tybaltgasm :D He really cared about Diana.
I think Diana and Britney will be on neutral stance from now on.
And Dylan, you're just lucky Tybalt didn't shoot you on the head. Or you would've been dead now, dead I tell you! You bastard, if I were Tybalt, I would've killed you :flamer:
21st Apr 2009, 07:36 AM
Thanks for comment Dani :D( mind If I call you that?)
Go for it!
I've been wondering actually, what should I call you? We're always commenting each other's stories so might as well call each other by our names :)
21st Apr 2009, 07:39 AM
Wow! Loved the update! :D
Tybalt really isn't one to mess with, is he? :P
21st Apr 2009, 10:41 AM
OK, really don't mess with the Capps.
My head is spinning!!!! And yeeeee Tybalt and Diana slept together finally...but they need to realise how much they wanna do it again and be married n have lots of kiddies....
21st Apr 2009, 03:56 PM
Go for it!
I've been wondering actually, what should I call you? We're always commenting each other's stories so might as well call each other by our names :)
Kyle or Ana is fine :D whatever you prefer.
Tybalt really isn't one to mess with, is he? :P
Pretty much :D
My head is spinning!!!! And yeeeee Tybalt and Diana slept together finally...but they need to realise how much they wanna do it again and be married n have lots of kiddies....
That sounded funny yet adorable :P
I think Diana and Britney will be on neutral stance from now on. And Dylan, you're just lucky Tybalt didn't shoot you on the head. Or you would've been dead now, dead I tell you! You bastard, if I were Tybalt, I would've killed you :flamer:
I don't know about that, I haven't actually thought of that :blink: Well I guess that is the reason he[Tybalt] told her to leave.
Oh and trust me... Tybalt will not just kill...He will haunt you in hell :evilnod:*tybaltgasm*
Thanks for wonderful comments every one!
23rd Apr 2009, 07:32 AM
This I guess can be considered a chapter. I've been a little bit lazy, So then next few updates will be with LLC. This just to let you know how Veronaville is, and in case you decide to visit, of what to be scared off and what not :D
Who has not heard of tragic story of Romeo and Juliet? Every one did. Family rivalry was unfortunately settled after the death of the children. The friendship between the two main clans in Verona: The Capulets and The Montagues lasted forever...Or so it seemed. For past 20 there has been rivalry yet again. No one knows the reasons. Clans are set up very differently.
The Montagues clan consists of 4 people and is known to be some what peaceful.
Let's put it this way: If you piss them off they will try and talk things through. If you do not agree: cement bucket on your legs and off in the river you go.
The Capulets however, are complite oposite.
They have been know to be the aggressive clan and they are no scared of consequences. The most fierce person the Clan is Tybalt Capulet.
He is a person you do not want to be enemies with. He is defensive, agressive and he poses 3 guns. If you mess with him or his friends( especially his sisters) you better run and hide. And hide good, he will find you.
Him and his sisters were raised by his grand dad after their parents death. Since Tybalt was the only boy, he was raised as a tough guy and was expected to defend the clan( since grand dad is old now) He was also busy with studies so that explain why he is currently 19 and still single. There is a rumor that he has a soft side to him not many know about.
I will edit this chapter and add a little bit about Summerdreams. My laptop glitched when I was giving them a make over...
23rd Apr 2009, 02:12 PM
This is why you are one of my favorite writer.
Great background! I know that the Capulets were the meanest. Especially Tybalt. And since his rival is Mercutio, I thought Romeo was younger than both Tybalt and Mercutio. So I was a bit surprised when I saw Mercutio still in his teens. But, people played it differently, right? I mean, there was once I made Romeo (who was still a teen) fell in love with Bottom. In the end, Mercutio married her. But that's a long time ago when I don't really know how marriage works in TS2 :doh
And I can't wait for the Summerdreams! I really want to see Puck :lovestruc, in my game, I always set him up with Hermia, but then I break them up and made them hate each other :P And my sis accidentally made him gay.
Oh, and I'll wait patiently. While waiting, I also can't wait for another chapter of LLC. I just noticed the lack of updates now.
And.. is it just me, or are there new smilies?
Like :blah: and :argh:
^Gotta love 'em ;)
23rd Apr 2009, 07:38 PM
Wow you don't wanna mess with Tybalt. I'm sure that Dylan will never even go near a blonde just to be safe. Or at least that's how scared I would be. Background information, yay! I'm surprised that Mercutio's a teen still but maybe he needs to be for a role in an update (pretty please?). Romeo looks very cute and I hope he's doing well at uni. May I ask where's Tybalt's outfit is from?
24th Apr 2009, 07:00 AM
I didn't age every one up I only aged those up who take part in my story. I will eventually age all of them up probably...Glad you like that background information. I just thought I'd clear things up. Luna, I got Tybalt's outfit from here (http://www.clubcrimsyn.com/). Enjoy!
Chapter 18 - Three Big Words
Even if I don't know where to start
Even if my love is tearing me apart
I just know that you and me
We are always meant to be
Marina called Diana and asked her to come home. Everything was settled and Lucy was home too. Tybalt agreed to drive her home. Diana's face looked horrible even though Tybalt and Joey attempted their best to patch it up. Jordan, with help of Romeo and Mercutio, humiliated Dylan a little bit as well. Thus, image will not be displayed for your own protection.
Tybalt and Diana were standing in front of Diana's house waiting for her mom to open.
Marina gasped as she saw Diana's face," What happened?!"
" We will explain mom..." Diana said coldly. Lucy hugged Tybalt.
" Hey guys! I missed you..." She hugged Diana," At least am not alone with the scratch marks..."Diana smiled.
" Let's go into the living room, we have few thing to say..." Dean started. Tybalt was about to leave," You can come, uhm..."
" Tybalt..." Diana whispered.
"...Tybalt. I think you are a part if this..." Tybalt obediently followed into the living room.
" First, I want to say, that...Me and dad talked about it, I am keeping the baby. After all it is for my little Lucy's life. Even though he will be only half sibling, Still please consider him like a full sibling." Marina concluded. Lucy clapped her hands.
" Diana, please tell us what happened to your face..." Dean said seriously. Diana looked down. Tybalt coughed," I think Lucy should leave...I will explain. It is a bit hard for her..." Tybalt said calmly. Marina nodded and escourted Lucy out of the room. She then came back and sat on the sofa next to Diana. Tybalt sighed and told them what happened. He didn't mention him and Diana having their first time, it was not nessasry. When he was done, he sighed and looked around. Marina and Diana had tears in their eyes, Dean had hell fires burning.
" Marina, Please get my surgery kit so I can finish what Tybalt here started..."
" What for?" Marina looked at him in amazement.
" SO I CAN GO AND CASTRATE THAT SON OF A B**CH DYLAN!" Dean screamed out making every one jump up," wait, you are allowed to have gun right?" Tybalt nodded.
" I was about to shoot him in there too..."
" That would have done nothing. He goes to hospital, get a bullet removed, goes with no sex a for a while and all is left is a scar..."
" Guys, stop it! He got enough of being beaten by Tybalt and he got enough from Jordan as well...I think he is smart enough to get the point..,"Diana exclaimed. Marina hugged her daughter.
" Can I come in already?" Lucy screamed from upstairs.
" Yes, sweetheart come in!" Marina said. Tap, tap, tap, tap. Lucy flew down the stairs," Mom, who you want the baby to be? Boy or a girl?"
" As long is it healthy, I do not mind..." Marina smiled.
" Tybalt can I speak with you for a second," Dean said calmly as him and Tybalt left to the kitchen.
" You like my daughter, don't you?"
" Uhm..." Tybalt muttered. Did he?" I'm friends with her she feels like a sister to me..."
" So you saying you stood up for her almost killing the guy, was from brotherly love, kid? I have a sister myself, and I stood up for her few times myself. Definatly not almost killing guys..." He had a point. Tybalt looked in the living room. Diana was sitting with her mother and sister and they were gigiling. He did feel closer to her from the point they had first kiss, he didn't want to admit it. He never liked any one before Diana.
" I don't know,"Tybalt looked down. Dean put his hand on his shoulder.
" All I wanted to tell you was, I'd rather you date her then that jerk of a Dylan. She didn't listen to me when I said no after meeting him." Dean headed to the living room.
" Sir..." Tybalt said. Dean turned around," Call me Dean, kid."
" Dean...Can I..take Diana out tonight, so she vents a little bit after all the stress she had and such..." Dean smiled.
" Sure," He walked into the living room," Dinne I suggest you go get dressed your friend here wants to take you out tonight," He pointed at Tybalt. Tybalt waved at Diana.
Diana looked at her mom who smiled in approval and Lucy gave her thumbs up. Diana nodded and went upstairs," I will be right out..: She went to Tybalt.
" Take however long you need..." Tybalt said quietly. Diana came down about few minutes later. She still looked glam and beautiful even with the beaten up face. Tybalt held her hand as he walked her to the car. Tybalt kept quiet all the ride, although Diana asked him numerous times, where are they going.
" You will see," Tybalt smiled as he made a turn and stopped in front of the down town restaurant.
" Oh my god..." Diana walked out the car and looked up," Isn't it...a bit to fancy?"
" Nah, you deserve a good and fancy evening," He took her hand let's go..." As they went upstairs and took their seats at the balcony, Tybalt asked," What you wanna order?"
" A salad, probably..."
" What is with you and salads?" Tybalt rolled his eyes," Order something more filling then few pieces of vegetables with dressing..." Diana laughed.
" Okey okey...Uhm...let's see here..."
" I want a lobster..." Tybalt said out of the blue," Yes they have it! I'm settled...."He looked at Diana.
" This fillet mignon looks good, I'll order it." Diana said to the waiter. Tybalt ordered his lobster then he went to Diana," You know what you should try? My aunts lobster...She makes it good. Some times she burns it...I think my aunt used to be your teacher..." He looked up thinking. Diana was listening to him and she just admired him. Their food got served.
" This looks yummy and interesting...." Diana poked her food.
" You've been quiet...Anything you wanna talk about?..." Diana looked at him.
" I guess...Thanks for standing for me like this..."
" No problem," Tybalt smiled. For some reason he smiled more then usual today and it felt weird.
" I think you should have killed him though...If you did, police wouldn't bother with you. They never bother with you nor Montagues..."
" Some one knows the rumors," Tybalt laughed. It was true: He did commit some serious crimes before defending his sisters, police never bothered with them. Capulets and Montagues are too powerful in Verona. He did feel bad about what he had to do," But like Joey says, his Karma will get him for his crimes...Hey!" Diana stole some of his food.
" Sorry it looks yummy!" She laughed pushing her plate towards him. Tybalt took some from her plate. When they were done they went downstairs.
" Do you wanna dance?" Tybalt took her hand.
" Of course!" Diana run towards the dance floor pulling Tybalt after her. Coincidently calm music came on. Diana pressed against Tybalt and put her head on his shoulder.
" I...I love you..." She whispered. Tybalt's heart raced.
" I know...It's stupid..." She tried to move away, but Tybalt held her tight.
" I didn't say it was stupid, did I?" He looked in her light blue eyes. Diana looked at him. She felt like she was blushing.
" I love you too," Tybalt moved closer and kissed her. Diana closed her eyes. He moved away from her and whispered," Will you go out with me?"
" Mhm..." Diana cried as she kissed him again.
Hope you like it. I hope it is not too sappy >_>
24th Apr 2009, 07:09 AM
Aww. . . That's so adorable! :D
24th Apr 2009, 07:10 AM
Everyone, say it together: Awwwwwww!
24th Apr 2009, 11:24 AM
Now they're officially together!
24th Apr 2009, 04:22 PM
On the count of three with Dani: Aww! But seriously, I couldn't stop smiling during their dinner scene. Dean's funny and I'm glad he came around with the grim-baby. I can only imagine what Jordan and Romeo did to Dylan. Also thanks for the link to Tybalt's outfit. With all the CC I download, I should've known it was Club Crimson. I can't wait for the next update!
25th Apr 2009, 01:13 AM
Thanks. I'm surprised no one commented song Lyrics over there in the corner ... xD
25th Apr 2009, 05:29 PM
Omg Ive Missed Soo Much! Going Great! ;]
26th Apr 2009, 04:20 AM
This is, I guess, about the rumor that Tybalt has soft side not many know about. Enjoy.
Chapter 19 - Surprise
It has been few months since Diana and Tybalt were dating. Diana was avoided in school by most people, they were scared if they do something wrong she will tell her " The scariest guy in Verona" boyfriend about them. It was a little bit annoying, since Diana was not a cry baby and she simply would not bother Tybalt with something as simple and stupid.
" So how is it being his girlfriend?" Juliet asked Diana at lunch.
" Nothing special. In a sense it is kinda nice being popular but yet is kind of annoying, because every one is treating me like some queen of hearts from Alice in Wonderland. I mean...COME ON!" Diana exclaimed as she saw a senior girl pass by. She was staring at her and she seemed scared," Why is every one scared of me?!"
" My brother is a tough guy in Verona. If they mess with you, he will mess them up, that's why..."
" Nice to know. I can't talk with any one with out them shivering and pooping bricks..." Diana stared at her plate. Juliet laughed.
" It was same with me. I am his sister and people are scared to talk to me some times too. This is what you get for it..."
" How come he is like that anyways?" Diana poked her food.
" He was raised by grand dad. He was very strict on him. He was the only boy after parent's died. Tybie had a soldier routine, that is why he is strong tough and cold. I have to say, he changed a lot since he met you. He seemed a different guy when he was around you even when you were friends...And you know what always surprised me? He had never had any experience...Although all girl were just like hanging on him literally..."
" You mean...He was virgin 'till he was 19?" Diana gasped.
" Yeah...You didn't know?"
" Oh my god...I didn't know...He seemed...I don't know...He seemed like a type of guy that is experienced..."
" Oh no, he didn't like any one. He simply wasn't interested. That is why grandpa though he was gay..." Diana and Juliet chuckled.
" He seriously thought that?"
" Well yeah. He also didn't think that maybe he was making guy so busy he simply has no time to hung out with girls..."
" True that..."
" Wait..." Juliet just had an eureka moment," What do you mean he was a virgin..." Diana looked side ways and she felt herself blushing," Oh my god! When did it happen?"
" Uhm...That night Dylan almost raped me...I have no clue what possessed me to open up..." Juliet smiled.
" Lucky...I still didn't do anything..."
" Don't laugh...I just don't know I feel nervous about it..."
" It is up to you really. You want it with Romeo with romeo you do it... You have been dating for how long?"
" Three and half years..." Juliet paused," I will see how it goes..."
" good sign is that if all Romeo wanted from you was sex he would have left you by now..." Juliet nodded in agreement," May I ask you a question about Tybalt?"
" Go ahead..."
" Why does he have scars?" Diana felt stupid why she never asked it her boyfriend her self.
" Well...Long story short, Scar on the right eye was child hood incident with one of the trainers raising him like a soldier. He hit him with a whip. Good thing Tybalt closed his eye other wise there would have been a patch. The second one...He caught me with Romeo few years ago...Obviously went furious and they got in the fight, Romeo seemed to be winning but Tybalt pushed him of and Romeo hit him his pocket knife. Few days later I talked to him. He agreed to keep it secret from grand dad and this why I am mainly still dating Romeo. I don't know if Tybie ever forgave Romeo for the scar. If you ask me he is still pretty handsome..." She laughed," Piercings how ever he got at sixteen and Hermia tagged along. Grand pa was furious but he got over it..."
" You seem to have a tough family..."
" We do...It all became like that after mom passed away...grand dad kind of lost it after his favorite daughter's death. At least he is not like grand ma....Now was he a bitch! Forgive me lord for talking so bad about dead..." Diana laughed. Bell rang.
" Let's go. We have math. I seriously can't wait till school ends. Tybalt is picking me up..." girls walked up the stairs to their class.
At 1:30, Diana came out the school and she squealed as she saw Tybalt's car.
" Jee, happy much?" Kaee cleared his ear.
" I get same when I see you so calm down," Melly poked his side. Diana run up to the car and sat at the front seat," Hey honey!" She hugged him.
" Hey, how was school?" Tybalt waved at Kaee through the window.
" Good, I hate Biology teacher is such a bitch..." Tybalt laughed as he started the car.
" Wait till you get to university...Everyone is a bitch. By the way, I have surprise for you." He smiled.
" Yeah? You are taking me to the Ice cream place?"
" Haha, not quiet. You will see when we get home..." He drove off and headed towards Diana's house. When they got there Diana run out the car and run up the stairs," What's the surprise?" She felt like a kid who was about to get an Ice cream.
" Calm down Dinee," Tybalt locked the car and run up the stairs. Marina opened the door," Hi guys. Come in."
" What, what, what?!" Diana looked around the room.
" Oh the surprise! My god, this one" Marina pointed at Tybalt," Came in this morning saying it's been 4 months since you were dating and he wanted to get you a present. So he dragged me to the store and you never guess what he picked. It took a lot of convincing for me to agree to this. You present is in the living room..." Diana run into the living room. There she saw a little bed and a food. In the corner there was a little fluffy ball sitting next to the couch.
" OH MY GOD! A KITTY!" Diana run up to the cat and sat next to it. It was a cream cat with bushy brown tail and brown ears. Cat looked at Diana and purred," Aaaaw it likes me..."
" She is all yours," Tybalt sat next to her," I bought few necessities like toys and such. What's you gonna name her?"
" It's a girl? Hmm..." Diana petted the cat," Oh I know! I'll call her Hershey! I like that chocolate, plus her ears and tail are color of milk chocolate," She then jumped up in Tybalt's arms," Thank you thank you thank you! That is the second best gift you give me!"She kissed his cheeks and nose.
" Just make sure she is clean and she is well fed. Tybalt, seriously you can be a persistent ass..."
" Anything for her," Tybalt held Diana close as Hershey rubbed against her legs and purred.
Hope you like it. There will be drama soon don't worry :D
26th Apr 2009, 08:56 AM
kitteh! I love cats!
26th Apr 2009, 09:06 AM
26th Apr 2009, 05:10 PM
What a cutie! A cutie that tried to chop off my thumb once!
26th Apr 2009, 05:30 PM
Not this one. She is sweet cat
26th Apr 2009, 11:49 PM
Kitty! The moment I saw Hershey, the cat-owner in me squeed. It's been nice to have a chapter or two without so much drama as it'll make the drama even jucier. Just a note, but the pictures don't really give a good view of both girls faces (Only Juliet's profile was visible). So that's how Tybalt got his scars. :doh I don't know why, but for some reason everyone gets the vibe that Cordelia was Consort's favorite daughter. Nice chapter!
27th Apr 2009, 04:22 AM
Laptop is a bitch to me sometimes. If i just slightly click to turn to cerstain angle, It turns it like...whoa xD
Sometimes it is hard to make perfect angles...I hate laptop. I wanna get better one down the line.
27th Apr 2009, 05:37 AM
27th Apr 2009, 07:19 AM
Another dramaless update. This character will have quiet a role eventually in the story so I thought I will add her and give her an introduction. Also the Elf guy was not meant to have any role, but I decided to make him part as well.
Chapter 20 part 1 - Ivy the Witch
Ivy was sitting in the living room and she was blankly looking at the TV. A tea cup was floating next to her in the air. Ivy closed her eyes and concentrated on the signal she was sending. Few seconds later she was done.
She opened her eyes and turned to the cup," That is all, thank you." Cup nodded, almost spilling the tea, and floated away in the kitchen. Ivy got of the couch and stretched. She looked up at the celling. She heard humming upstairs. Ivy smiled," Fafnir! Sweetie come down!" A crash," What did you brake?" tap, tap tap. Sound of little paws across the room and then down the stairs. A white glowing cat sat in front of Ivy and innocently looked at her," Nothing mistress...Just water cup..." A cat said with a voice of a teenage boy. Ivy smiled.
" Okey then," She walked into the kitchen and Fafnir followed her. Ivy sat at the table and Fafnir approached his food bowl," Have you contacted Derek yet?"
" I am fruing..." Fafnir said with a full mouth," He is not a warlock so it is much harder then you think, Mistress."
" It is not his time yet. I will teach him everything when the time comes."
" Amazingly you would think he would get your talent...He doesn't even have any of his father's powers...."
" And it is good that he doesn't!" Ivy exclaimed," Do not need to have a Grim Reaper in the house..."
" Oh speaking of that," Fafnir jumped on the table," There is another Grim Pregnantation in town."
" I see," Ivy petted her familiar," Another woman who wanted to live with no matter what it takes?"
" No actually...She pleaded for her child's life." Fafnir wrapped his tail around his paws.
" Ah, that is interesting. She will have a good child." Ivy flicked the hair from her face," It is rare when this happens and It is usually good result!"
" Why you want me to contact Derek?"
" My son promised a visit from University. So I want to know when exactly. You realize maybe I am 250 years old, but it doesn't mean I know everything...Especially not such small details..."
" Ah, of course! Give it to the cat!" Fafnir jumped from the table and raised his tail," I was a human once too..."
" And you got turned into the cat for eternity to suffer from the crimes you committed...Aaaand who adopted you and gave you a shelter?" Ivy knelled down and looked in her familiars face. Fafnir pressed his ears against his head and looked down," You mistress..."
" Come on now. It is not that bad. My apprentice is supposed to be here soon. He like tea when he visits. I will get you cream with sugar just like you like it!" Fafnir raised hi ear and rubbed against Ivy's leg. Ivy swung her hand and the burner turned on. She swung it again and kettle placed it self on the burner. Three tea cups flew out of the cabinet and landed on the counter. Some one knocked on the door," Ah that's him! Come in!" Door opened and an elf boy came in. He had long red hair and red eyes.
" You called teacher?"
" Kin, sweetie! How many times! Call me Ivy!" She invited him to sit on the sofa next to her," How is Verona?"
" Teac...I mean, Ivy, you probably know it without me telling you." Kin smiled.
" Indeed I do. I just want to see what you have learned and what you have improved since our class..."
" Well. There hasn't been too much going on. The Capulet heir is dating now. She is a nice and innocent flower. Ironically they both were their first experience...Hm..."
" Very well! Not many witches and warlock can know such details!" Ivy applaud. Kin nodded," Forgive the uniform, I am at school now and it is lunch time..."
" So it is. What else you have to tell me?"
" Diana's ex he is...Same sort. I think he is sick though uhm..." Kin concentrated.
" Come honey, you can do it..."
" I think with something sexual related?..." Kin said uninsured.
" Not quiet. It is just a simple flu. and his current girlfriend is not that sick. She does have few...shall we call them, problems, but she is not a walking bouquet of diseases." Three cups floated in the room and landed on coffee table. Fafnir jumped up and started drinking his cream.
" Hi Fafnir!" Kin waved at him. Fafnir ignored him and kept selfishly drinking his cream. Ivy smiled and turned to Kin," What else?"
" Nothing..." Kin concluded.
" How about bad things?"
" I don't know..." Kin shrugged.
" There will be few troubles in a week time. Few serious, few not so serious and one horribly bad one..." Ivy said quietly.
" A death?" Kin asked. Fafnir chuckled.
" A death? In Verona! HA!" Ivy gave him as strict look," What? A death, seriously?" Fafnir pressed his ears to his head.
" Yes, a death." Kin jumped up in the seat.
" And Tybalt is involved in it!"
" He is," Ivy nodded.
" I hope It is not Diana...I know him, It will kill him..." Kin squeezed out.
" I can not tell you that..."
" Although she knows..." Fafnir stretched and jumped of the coffee table and went to the corner of the living room. Ivy nodded.
" Just wait patiently. Everything will turn out good." Kin finished his tea and put an empty cup on the coffee table. He looked at Fafnir who was playing with the yarn ball.
" May I ask..." He started.
" He is a teenager just like you. 65 years ago, he was a teenage learning warlock just like you. His practice went wrong one day and killed a little girl. The spell backfired and a slide collapsed on her. The council good not forgive such a deed from a good warlock even if it was accidental. He was turned into a cat for eternity. I stepped in and adopted him as my familiar. He has been with me ever since...." Ivy concluded.
" I am sorry to hear that..." Kin mumbled.
" It is alright. Some thing are meant to happen. You better go or you will be late for your class. I will see you soon Kin." She hugged her apprentice and walked him to the door. Fafnir jumped on the TV and cuddled up. Ivy cleaned up the plates and cups. She looked at the clock. 1:30pm. It's end of school. She walked out her apartment building. Few minutes later a van passed by. Ivy watched it drive off and squinted," And it all begins..." she whispered.
I really like how Ivy turned out. She is meant to have slight resemblance to Poison Ivy by the way :D Hope you like it!
27th Apr 2009, 07:34 AM
I liked this chapter. Forgive me for almost no pictures in the begging, my laptop is being slow in Tybalt's dorm. Hope you like it! and guns glitched yet again...
Chapter 20 part 2 - Diana's Missing
Lucy's 14th birthday was coming up. Lucy was very excited and so was every one else. She couldn't hold her excitement.
Diana was standing in front school and waiting for Tybalt. Every one left and school was empty with the exception of few after school class students.
" It is unusual for him to be late..." Looked at her watch. She saw a minivan drive towards her. She stepped back but few guys came out and threw her in the back and drove off.
Tybalt was running around the house.
" Damn it! Why didn't you wake me up?!" He was looking all over the place for car keys.
" I just got from class! Calm down she is fine..."Joey was looking through the mail," Bill, bills, bill...Letter from mom, Letter from Juliet and Hermia...To Tybalt...Hmm.. It doesn't say from who..." Tybalt came up to him and took the envelope from him. As he opened it he saw a letter in the bad hand writing," We have your bitch!" Tybalt reread the single line on the paper. Every time he did he became angrier and angrier.
" You okey?" Joey asked quietly.
" Can you shoot?" Tybalt asked after long pause.
" You are asking an Italian if he can shoot. Half of Verona is mobsters and my relatives of course I can shoot! I was born with a gu...." Joey paused," Why you ask?"
" I have two hand guns I need. Can you shoot from winchester?" Tybalt ignored his question.
" I can try. It's like shot gun right?"
" Pretty much..." Tybalt went into his room and took a winchester from under his bed and threw it to Joey. He took his guns from bed side table and headed towards the door.
" Can you explain what the frig is going on?!" Joey screamed making Tybalt stop. Tybalt silently pointed at the letter and went outside the house," ROMEO!"
" I"M BUSY LOVE!" Romeo screamed from another house.
" GET YOU ASS IN HERE RIGHT NOW!" By Tybalt's tone, you could tell he was not joking. Romeo and Jordan run in the house few minutes later. Tybalt gave them the letter. Jordan gasped. Romeo looked up at Tybalt.
" What's the plan?"
" Search of Verona..." Tybalt said quietly.
" I am concerned for Diana, but I can not shoot and I am not getting myself into trouble...I am irish not italian like you guys..." Jordan said feeling out of place. Tybalt nodded," Stay here then and stay near the phone. We will call you and tell you what the heck is going on. DO NOT tell your parents! We will get her, and we will not involve the police. Joey, Go with Romeo, call Mercutio and who ever you know to help. I gotta find that bitch Dylan. He didn't learn his lesson apparently." Tybalt stormed out of the house. He floored the pedal making his car roar and drove off. When he reached Verona, it took him few minutes to find Dylan. He was jogging in the park. Tybalt parked his car and got out. He slowly walked towards Dylan charging his gun. He then pulled the trigger hitting Dylan right in the hip. Dylan screamed as he fell on the ground.
" What the hell do you want?!" He yelled at Tybalt. Bad move. Tybalt sat next to him and grabbed him by the collar.
" What did I tell you last time punk?! Now listen to me. I will slowly shoot you up the body until I reach here," He poked Dylan with the gun right between the eyes," So you better start talking. Where is Diana?"
" I...I don't know what you are talking ab..." Tybalt hit him with the gun.
" You do very well..."
" I seriously don..." Tybalt shot Dylan in the other hip. Dylan screamed.
" Did you hear that?" Britney looked up.
" Hear what?" Suki looked at her confused.
"Nothing...Ugh, I like hate being alone..."
" Don't worry, Dylan will be home soon. Hey! You know what I did the other day? You will love it!"
" What?" Britney looked at her nails.
" I called my friends and asked them to kidnap Diana! Your Ex will have the revenge you wanted so bad..." Britney looked at Suki with shock in her eyes.
" Are you drunk?! TYBALT WILL THINK IT IS DYLAN AND WILL MURDER HIM!" She screamed
" He will not..." She heard a shot. So did Britney.
" Go, find them and tell him about everything! NOW!"
" Ugh fine..." Suki got up and headed toward the door.
" Please let me go I seriously don't know anything...." Dylan cried out. Both his legs got shot. His hand was also shot and he was bleeding heavily.
" This is getting tiring..." Tybalt rubbed his eyes," I don't want to kill you because I will have to bury you and I do not have a spade right now..."Dylan almost peed himself as he heard that," Oh well I will have to dig you grave with my hands. Where is my girlfriend?!" He clicked the gun.
" I do not know I swear!" Tybalt was about to pukl the trigger when he heard," He is not involved in this!" Tybalt got up and turned around. Suki was standing in the shades of the trees.
" And you know how?..."
" It is me who set it up..."She slowly started walking towards him. Tybalt aimed at her for head," Woah, you kill me, I have back up and plus you will never know where Diana is if you want her so much..." Tybalt kept his gun and said," Go on..."
" Ever heard of Teriaki Boys?"
" The Japanese teen mobsters? Of course I did. Your point bitch, before I shoot you..."
" They have her. I called them up and asked to finish up what Britney started. Him and her are not involved in this..." Suki pointed at Dylan who was as pale as a piece of paper.
" Where are they?"
" That I do not know. If you managed to find Dylan maybe you can find them with same ease." She looked in Tybalt's eyes. Tybalt put his gun down and turned around to call Joey. He felt a sharp hit in the back of his neck and he fell on the ground.
Hope you like it! :D Also please rate me :D
27th Apr 2009, 08:56 AM
Did he get stabbed? Tell me he ends up okay! TELL MEH!!!
27th Apr 2009, 12:27 PM
Is Suki that stupid? Does she know that messing with Tybalt means DOOM? :doh
And, please don't let Tybalt get hurt! And I hope Diana's okay.
But first, :weep: (For Diana being kidnapped)
And then :madashel: (For Tybalt got knocked out)
I feel oh so untouched right now
27th Apr 2009, 03:39 PM
It's funny but when I first saw Ivy I did think of Poison Ivy. Kin should make a very good warlock and yay kitty spector. Oh no Diana! If she isn't okay there will be much death in the near future. Suki must be the dumbest person ever, if even Britney knew what would result from diana's kidnapping. Hmm, was Tybalt knocked out by a tranquilizer?
27th Apr 2009, 04:59 PM
Thanks for wonderful comments guys! :D
27th Apr 2009, 07:03 PM
omg i love Poison Ivy!!
28th Apr 2009, 05:59 AM
Well the conclusion of the chapter. And my gun finally worked! Yayz! Enjoy!Contains violence!
Chapter 20 part 3 - Should've Known Better
Tybalt laied on the ground. Suki laughed.
" Hahahah! not so tough any more!" She looked down at unconscious Tybalt.
" You are a moron!" Dylan spit out blood," You have not heard how tough he is? He will take out your sushi boys by himself!"
"It is Teriyaki," Suki sighed," I will take those..." She sat next to Tybalt and stretched her hand towards his guns. Tybalt shot his hand out grabbing Suki by the wrist. She screamed as her wrist cracked. Tybalt got up. He squeezed her wrist harder. Suki cried and tried to pull out but Tybalt gripped her.
" Let go..." She cried out. Tybalt smirked and squeezed her wrist harder," Aaaaaah...." Suki screamed.
" You sudden loss of toughness and coolness amuses me." Tybalt rubbed back of his neck with free hand," Lets see now...What shall I do to you?" He looked at Suki teary eyes. Suki screamed harder. Tybalt lifted her and looked in her eyes," Have you heard about Capulets and how you should not ever mess with the heir which is me? Well, did you?!" He shook her like a rag doll. Suki sobbed and nodded," well you will now for the future when I mess you and you Teriayki boys up..."
" Please no...." She pleaded.
" Say what?" Tybalt squeezed her wrist harder. He felt her bone poking through the skin.
" Please no, I will do anything, just stop...." She cried. Tybalt dropped her on the ground.
" Give me your cell phone now..." Suki shakingly gave it to him. Tybalt snapped it out of her hand and browsed through her phone book. He called by the number what said the leader.
" Ya?" A guy picked up. Tybalt heard laughter in the background," Suki is that you?"
" No it isn't...It is a guy whose girlfriend you are holding captive..." Laughter stopped and guy laughed.
" Hey there Tyb! How you doing? Your girl is fine, here wanna talk to her?" There was a commotion and then Tybalt heard Diana crying out, "Tybie help me!" Some one went shut up with and sound of slap.
" Let go of her now!"
" Listen to me you idiot!..." Suki screamed something in japanese but Tybalt kicked her in the face," If you do not let go of her, I will go there and kill every single one of you. I will do it slowly and make sure you suffer...A LOT!"
" Go ahead, we are waiting for you!" Guy hung up. Tybalt threw phone at Suki.
" You are coming with me! And you!" he pointed at Dylan," Crawl home..." He grabbed Suki by the hand and pulled her towards the car. He threw her in there and got in himself and drove off.
" Where are they?" He said coldly while Suki was looking at her wrist with bone sticking through it," Don't make me brake your other hand..."
" They are in the old factory don't hurt me more!" She cried out," They will not rape her or anything...It is not their thing..." She added.
Tybalt stopped the car and pushed her out," it is your fault this happened." He drove off. He dialed Joey's number telling him where to meet him.
Tybalt stopped in front old factory. He charged his gun and walked in kicking the door open.
" Why hey!" The leader came up to him.
" Where is Diana? Let her go now and nothing will happen!"
" It is not that easy man!...We were ordered to get rid of you as well..."
" Were you now?" Tybalt smirked as he heard foot steps behind him," I think it will be Visa versa...NOW!" Tybalt ducked as some of the Romeo's guys shot at the guys. The leader run off and Tybalt chased him.
" Ah shit!" Joey sat behind the boxes as the bullets flew around him. He got hit in the arm. He held the wound. Diana crawled up to him making him jump up.
" Joey!" She leaped into his arms," where is Tybie?"
" Around here somewhere....Damn he loves you if he causes THIS for you!"
" He does indeed..."Some one grabbed Diana from behind and pulled her back. She screamed. Joey aimed his gun behind her. The Leader was holding Diana and holding the gun to her temple. Diana sobbed. All shooting stopped. Then Thud. The Leader let go of Diana and fell on the floor. Joey pulled Diana close and she saw Tybalt standing over him.
" You should have knowns better then to mess with the Capulets...Sweetie, look away..." Tybalt addressed Diana. Diana obediently looked behind Joey's shoulder. Shot. Another. She turned around and saw The Leader with blood dripping out of his mouth.
She run up to Tybalt and cried on his shoulder," It's okey I'm here now..." Tybalt held her close and cried.
Hope you like it. More drama coming up!
28th Apr 2009, 06:55 AM
Wow. Lots of drama.
I have to admit I don't find Tybalt's tough guy routine attractive. I love that he's going after them to save Diana, but breaking a girl's hand like that? That bothered me.
28th Apr 2009, 07:03 AM
She kinda deseved it. I just wanted to show his strength. HE pretty much snapped her wrist with just a grab.
Maybe she simple has thin bones.
EDIT: I reread it took out the part where he brakes her hand agin. it was not nessasry, she in enough pain from broken wrist. Thanks for comment Dani.
I do not like to violent and defensive guys atractive either.
28th Apr 2009, 07:04 AM
Difference of opinion I guess. I understand that it's not the character though. It just means I dislike the character for this chapter.
28th Apr 2009, 07:10 AM
I pmd you :D and it will all be explained in the next update too. So I appologize for making Tyb too violent.
Eh, I guess a guy will do anything for his girl xD
28th Apr 2009, 08:34 AM
Oh my lord. Tybalt is...freakin scary.
But great update anyways. Glad Diana is safe.
28th Apr 2009, 08:38 AM
Thanks. His scaryness will be explained in the next chapter.
28th Apr 2009, 08:44 AM
Wow, scary, but a great update!
28th Apr 2009, 11:40 AM
Tybalt really love Diana, doesn't he? And now I know not to mess with Tybalt, or it will mean DEATH not DOOM anymore. You got that, Suki? Man, she's that dumb for thinking that Tybalt is not that tough.
Did Britney's blondness finally get into you? :loser:
28th Apr 2009, 03:02 PM
Wow, this was so action packed I just stared blankly for a minute (shock- it's a good thing). Tybalt was a little too violent but it's his character. Everyoone needs to recoop from that fight night and I'm glad Diana's safe. It should be good to hear about why Tybalt's so frightening in the next chapter. I think editing the second wrist snap from the chapter was a good idea. You update really quickly, thanks.
28th Apr 2009, 06:17 PM
Thanks for comments guys!
28th Apr 2009, 11:12 PM
This chapter slightly explains Tybalt's burst of violence. Enjoy. This chapter has woohoo reference!
Chapter 21 - Banishment
"The horrible shooting at the old factory has left one dead and 3 injured. Police is looking into the case. The dead is the leader of Teriyaki boy, the vicious Japanese Teen mobsters. There is a report that it all was started by Suki Finik. Also there has been report that Tybalt Capulet, informally know as Capp, Is involved in the shooting. He has been previously accused of the store robbery, but charges have been taken away since there has been found evidence of him not being in town when robbery happened. On the other news..." Consort turned of the TV and turned around to his grandson who was sitting in the sofa with a furious look staring blankly in front of him.
Tybalt's head hurt and he vague remembered anything from what has happened. He remembered shooting and he remembered killing a guy. Also something about broken wrist. he felt drunk even though he knew has not drunk anything since his 1st time with Diana. Consort huffed," DO you have an explanation for yourself young man?..." Tybalt kept looking in front of him.
" You are shaming the Capulet clan!" Consort said calmly, although he was getting furious," A shooting?! For what?! For a girl that is 3 years younger then you! Couldn't you find some one your age?!"
" Girl my age are whores..." Tybalt mumbled.
" No they aren't! How many time i tried to introduce you to other clans in Verona. I wanted you to date some one your age and status! She is a peasant! Oh my god! A shooting! This is how low you go?! A dead guy! You broke girl wrist! Is that how I taught you to be towards the girls?!"
" I did?..." Tybalt tried to remember the details of last night.
" Oh don't try to pull the I didn't to it! You are almost 20! Start thinking! How am I gonna pull your ass out of this?! HOW!" Tybalt scratches back oh his neck. He hissed as he felt a stinging pain. He saw blood on his fingers," Tybalt, are you listening?!"
" Huh?" Tybalt looked up. Consort dragged him from the sofa and threw him on the floor.
" You better respect me!" He started.
" I do granddad..." Tybalt mumbled. Consort smacked him int he back of his head.
" Do not interrupt me! I want you, to break up with that Diana girl..."
" What?!" Tybalt's heart skipped a beat. He couldn't imagine being without her and he respected his granddad," Wh..."
" I will tell you why! I guy of your status should be driving around around Verona, shooting people for a peasant girl! She is not worth it! You should have picked some one of your status! I thought I raised you better..." Tybalt couldn't and didn't want to take it any more. He got up.
" At least I stand up for the woman I love and not just let her go and hold grudges for 45 years!" Consort paused. Tybalt raised hie eyes and saw Juliet and Hermia Peeking form the kitchen. Consort turned around," How the hell do you know that maggot?!"
" If you didn't want me knowing anything, you should have not locked me in the library as a punishment. And also you should have kept the you diaries better!" Tybalt said sharply," I know very well what is this war all about! It is Isabelle Monty isn't it? She was you high school love but she left for Fabritsio and wanted to stay friends. What did you do? You simply let her go even though you loved her. Yes, it is good that you didn't force her to stay with you. It is womans choice as you say. But you decided to hold grudges against whole Montagues clan all over again! You started the argument that was solved generations ago for a girl! Unlike you, I try to keep mine close and I care less if she is a peasant as you say! I love Diana! I do. She is my only one! I love her. Even if she decided to leave me tomorrow, I will let her do it. I will not hold grudges like you did and will not hate her and the guys he picks! She is a great friend and unlike you, I..."
" SHUT UP!" Consort yelled as he slapped Tybalt across the face. Juliet gasped in the kitchen," don't you dare tell me how to live and what to do! You are nothing!" Tybalt tasted blood in his mouth," If you do not break up with her, DO not consider yourself a Capulet!"
" Very well, I guess this is what I will do!" Tybalt wiped the dripping blood from his mouth. Consort, honestly didn't expect such reaction from his grandson. And he did not want to do this.
" Dump the girl now!" He yelled on top his lungs.
" NO!" Tybalt waved his hand at Consort and run up the stairs. Juliet and Hermia run up after him. Consort furiously followed all of them," Girls help me get my stuff I am leaving...."
" Tybie please don't leave.."Hermia pleaded. She has been close with her brother. Tybalt sighed as he took a suitcase from the closet and started throwing clothes in there.
" If you do this now there is no coming back!"Consort barged into the room.
" I don't care! I'd rather be with the one I love and care for unlike you!" Tybalt pushed him away. He closed the suitcase and stormed out the room. He hugged his sisters and headed to the door. Consort followed him.
" TYBALT, YOU ARE OFFICIALLY BANISHED FROM CAPULET CLAN! You better not step you foot into Verona until you are done with college. After that I care less what you do, maggot!" Consort screamed on top of his lungs," And do not ever step you foot on the Capulet mansion ground! EVER!"
" FINE!" Tybalt turned around and screamed furiously. He saw Juliet run out of the mansion," TYBALT!"
" Get back Juliet! Or you wanna follow him?!" Consort pulled his grand daughter back. Two dobermans run up to Tybalt and whined. Tybalt petted them.
" I'll miss you guys," He raised them since they were puppies," Bye Bosko. Bye Ralf!" He threw his suitcase in the trunk and drove off with a roar. Juliet watched her brother drive away.
Tears were pouring from her eyes. Hermia turned around to her grand dad," Look what you did!" She cried and run up to her room.
Diana was sitting in her room and reading a magazine. Some one knocked on her window. She opened it and heard," Ouch! Careful!"
" Oh my Tybie, I'm sorry!" She stepped back and let Tybalt get into the house," What are you doing here? And why aren't you using the door?" Tybalt scratched his smacked nose and summarized what has happened about 30 minutes ago. Diana gasped as she heard everything and stepped away.
" What's wrong?" Tybalt was confused.
" Don't hurt me..." she was scared.
" Diana. I would never. I would feel horrible if I ever did. You have to believe me..." He took her hand.
It felt warm and soft," I love you, I would never do anything to hurt you..." He held her close," Oh by the way, can you tell me what do I have at the back of my neck...it hurts like a bitch..."Diana nodded and offered him ot sit. She gasped as she saw a cut size of a quarter.
" What?..." Tybalt asked.
" It is a cut size of a quarter.."Tybalt shivered as he imagined it," Talk to me...You said you vaguely remember everything..."
" Yeah. I was furious at Dylan, SO I remember being...Over reactive to him, but you have to understand I panicked!" Diana kissed his cheek.
" I understand, continue..."
" Then Suki came and she said That Teriyaki boys have you then I remember she hit me and..."
" Blurry...Now I am informed I broke her wrist causing the bone to go through the skin. I mean she might have deserved it, but Jesus..." Tybalt slid in the sofa. Diana quietly looked at him," Also I remember killing a guy..."
" I think you were drugged..." Diana whispered.
" I kinda figured that honey..." He rubbed his neck," Damn it... What the heck did she put into me? Did he hurt you?"
" He...attempted to do things with me. I kicked him the way you taught me..." Diana looked away.
" He deserved to be dead then..." Tybalt looked around the room," I feel bad...I mean...Suki is like Britney, but what the hell did she put into me that caused this?!"
" I will ask dad tomorrow he is a doctor after all. I suggest we go to bed now...I am very tired..." She stretched and headed towards the bed. Tybalt came up behind her and held her close. Maybe she is a peasant girl, but she is his peasant girl and only his. He kissed her neck and Diana giggled," You need to shave it tickles..." She turned around and Tybalt kissed her lips. Diana laughed," I get the hint..." She held him close as they fell on the bed.
Hope you like it. More coming later on tonight!
29th Apr 2009, 02:43 AM
i love Tyblats outifts <3
29th Apr 2009, 04:24 AM
aaww i feel special that u miss my comments!
I tottaly love your updates, i love the drama in your story! and it's so romantic too ugh.. remind me of andrey ;) u know what im talking about.
Keep it coming hun!
Your biggest fan =P
29th Apr 2009, 08:49 AM
Ahhh that's much better behaviour from Tybalt. I forgive him now :P
29th Apr 2009, 09:46 AM
Wow. I've never liked Consort that much anyways. :p
Great update! :D
29th Apr 2009, 10:42 AM
Awww Tybie I knew you couldn't act that horribly in your right senses :wub:
Ack stupid consort. Oh well now he can live with Diana...
29th Apr 2009, 12:17 PM
Bad Consort! Bad! He's always that ugly old grumpy grandpa in my game ;)
Poor Juliet and Hermia, they would miss Tybalt so much.
Oh, oh, oh, and Tybalt + Diana = Aww!
29th Apr 2009, 04:02 PM
If I could do the vampire hiss, I would hiss at Consort. Juliet and Hermia's sadness made me sad. I wonder how Consort will react if or when he finds out about Juliet and Romeo's relationship. It's good to know that Tybalt isn't so reckless that he would do it when he isn't drugged. I can't wait to see what you'll throw at us next!
P.S. Tybalt and Diana are rediculously cute together.
29th Apr 2009, 06:09 PM
Thank you guys! I have another chapter written out so I will post it in few :D
I really find them cute together especially cuz of the hights :D
30th Apr 2009, 10:00 AM
Ooh ooh! Update, please! :D:D:D
30th Apr 2009, 09:52 PM
Not the best chapter but at least it has the explanation. Enjoy! I do not know if Mix of those too will cause such effect, but this is fiction it does not need to be 100%true!
Chapter 22 - Overdose
Diana woke up at 11 am. It was a beautiful sunday morning. Tybalt was snoring next to her with his arm hanging of the bed. She poked his side and whispered," you are snoring..."
" Mhm..." Tybalt put a pillow over his head and continued sleeping. Diana got of the bed and put her pajamas back on and went out he room. Her mom was downstairs making breakfast.
" Good morning mom! Hey bump!" Diana waved at her moms stomach. Marina smiled," It is not that big...By the way, you can tell Tybalt to come down as well if he is up..." Diana blinked.
" How do you know?"
" Well first of, I saw you two sleeping when I came to wake you up earlier. Second, even if I didn't see you, you only sleep in when he is over. You are usually up at 9. Please stop making such a secret out of this. Dad and I know about you two so stop sneaking around like it such a secret..." She smiled. Diana looked down," Just please tell me you are careful when you are doing things...I don't want grand kids just yet..."
" Mom please...Of course, I know..." Diana laughed.
" Okey, just making sure. Go get you man up if he is still sleeping," Marina hugged Diana. Diana smiled and went upstairs. Tybalt was sitting on the bed and he looked dead. Diana smiled," Morning!"
" Mhm...When did you wake up?"
" About 10 minutes ago...Come downstairs mom is making breakfast!"
" She knows I'm here?"
" She saw us...Come on now." Diana got up and went downstairs. Her dad was sitting at the table and mom was serving food. Tybalt came down few minutes later.
" Good Morning!"Dean smiled," Please stop using the window when you want to visit my daughter..."
" Uhm dad...Tybalt has to say something..." Diana mumbled.
" What?..Does this require me getting out my surgery kit?"
" Perhaps...But not for the purposes you think of..." Diana nodded and Tybalt told him everything he remembered. Dean listened and nodded," So what is last you remember of that night?"
" Killing the guy...Then it is all blurry..."
" Hm...I don't know what drug, that is if you were drugged, can cause that..."
" I feel horrible...I broke girls wrist...and I killed a guy..." Tybalt moved his plate away and collapsed on the table.
" Well I can tell one thing! They guy would have been sentenced to death anyways. He has committed too many crimes..."
" I didn't know death sentence was legal..." Marina looked at her husband.
" Oh yes it is love. He was delivered to the morgue yesterday. I took a look at him. Horrible. I was told by police he has been on the search for 4 years and he would have been sentenced to death. They said who ever did it did the right thing..."
" Nice to know..." Tybalt cried out," I mean I am not an ideal person but oh my..."
" How violent do you get? Not drugged that is. I need to know for medical purposes..."Dean asked.
" The most would be what I did to Dylan before Suki came. I do not like doing it, but I do it for a scare not for enjoyment...I mean, I would never shoot any one. I'd injure, but not kill. What did she put into me?!" He covered his face with his hands. Diana put her hand on his shoulder. Dean sighed.
" Let me, take a look at you," he went into the living room and Tybalt followed him and sat on the couch," Marina sweetie bring me all my kits please." Marina nodded and left the living room. She came back few minutes later with boxes. Dean searched through one and took out a flash light," Open your mouth and say Ah.." Tybalt looked confused," Do you want me to find out whats wrong or not?" Dean said strictly and Tybalt opened his mouth obediently. Dean looked in and sighed. He then checked his eyes," Let's see now. No speech, vision and...what did I just say?" he addressed Tybalt.
"No speech, vision and..."
" And hearing defects either. Let me see that cut," Dean looked at Tybalt's neck," Oooh..."
" I know..." Diana looked over her dad's shoulder.
" I will take a blood test..."
" Don't you need to go to hospital for that?" Tybalt looked at Dean.
" Kid, this house is a hospital. When you have three kids that like to climb things, you will be prepared for anything!" Dean took out a needle and cleaned Tybalt's hand. He then poked him," Ouch!"
" Come one now!" Dean laughed," I will be right back..." He left and came back about 10 minutes later," Just as I assumed. Over dose of steroid and hallucinogen...."
" A what?" Tybalt looked at Dean with a confused look.
" You say you do not remember everything right?"
" Hallucinogen. Made you either do not remember or remake your memories. Here is another question: Would you be able to brake this in just a grab?" Dean pointed at Diana's wrist.
" No never!" Tybalt mumbled.
" Think of her as not a girlfriend for a moment. Would you be able to break it?" Tybalt looked at Diana's wrist and turned his head estimating his power.
" No. Not in a grab. That is for sure."
" That explains sudden burst of power you had. Steroid. I think her purpose was to knock you out and make you forget everything. But she over dosed and made you...Hyper shall we say..."
" How did she inject it?!" Tybalt was officially confused. Dean turned to Diana," Sweetie do you know where we keep a family photo box? Bring it to me!" Diana went to the TV stand ad took a photo box from the drawer and handed it to her dad. Dean looked through and took out faded photo and a coffin ring.
" Oh my god dad! You were a biker?!" Diana laughed.
" I wasn't always a geek! This ring is has a little needle on the cross,"Dean pointed at the ring. Tybalt looked and saw a slightly noticeable lump," My japanese friend gave it to me in university. He said you can put any drug you want in it and just punch a person in the neck, this is where the main blood stream is, and you can knock them out. Depending on the drug. I never filled it with anything because I was simply lazy but I liked the design and I simple wore it. I want you to have it. My rebellious days are over. And for future, do not turn your back to japanese with a ring like that on their hand" Dean laughed as she handed ring to Tybalt.
Hope you like it! :D
30th Apr 2009, 09:54 PM
She's a peasant, huh? Who does he think he is? A king? Whatever. He's just a product of arranged marriage to the real head of the Capp family.
EDIT: I'm loving the story, btw. Not too many VV stories out there. GJ!
30th Apr 2009, 10:18 PM
Another some what dramaless chapter. Proves that Britney isn't the only one stupid xD Well if you a friend wit5h her, you become stupid as well xD Enjoy! Also gun is there for scare.:D
Chapter 23 - It Is Your Fault!
It has been about three weeks since the incident with Teriyaki Boys. Diana was feared even more now and so was Tybalt. Diana hated having the fame of being toughest guy in Verona girlfriend but there was nothing she could do about it. At least she was not bothered. Much.
" Hey yo! Looking tough with the killer boyfriend of yours?!" Some senior girls bothered Diana yet again. Juliet stuck a middle finger at them and turned to Diana," Why don't you tell Tyb?"
" I don't want him waisting bullets on the crap like them..."Diana mumbled and turned around," what? are you scared?"
" Us?! The gangs we know will mess up your boyfriend pretty bad!"
" My brother will kill them all by himself!" Juliet said.
" We ain't scared! Bring him on!"
" Diana! We gotta talk!" Britney run through the crowd to her.
" No, leave me alone! go have fun with Dylan..." Diana turned around and was about to leave.
" It is important...it is about the events..."
" I do not wanna talk about them I have enough of those," She pointed behind Britney," idiots!"
" Us idiots?! You watch your mouth girl! We will mess you and your guy pretty ba..."
" TYBALT!" Some one screamed down the hall. Every one turned around only to see Tybalt slowly walking down the school corridor while every one was pressing into the walls. Only one's that didn't were Kaee, Juliet and Diana. Girl looked at Tybalt who ignored them as if they weren't there and came up to Diana and kissed her cheek," Hey honey!"
" Uhm hi..." Diana squeezed out a smile," what are you doing here?"
" Just need to sort some things out with people.."Tybalt cracked his knuckles. He raised his eyes and saw senior girls, that were just bothering Diana, looking at him with a clear fear in their eyes," were they bothering you?" he then turned to Diana.
" Hoyes they were!" Diana smiled evilly and turned to girl," Go ahead girls! Bring your gangs!"
" What gangs? I know every single one in Verona..." Tybalt turned to girls and put his hands on his hips. One girl got pushed out of the crowd. She looked up at Tybalt who just raised his eyebrow as he was looking down at her.
" Yes?..." Tybalt looked bored.
" We are sorry there is no gangs that we know! We just messing with Diana!" She cried out as she covered her head. Diana burst laughing so did Juliet. Tybalt just smirked.
" And your purpose waaaas?..."
" To look tough, please don't kill me!..." Tybalt rolled his eyes.
" Sheesh this is why I came here!" He turned around and went coldly to Britney," Where is your friend?" He then noticed with the corner of his eyes other girls running away. Britney jumped up as he addressed her.
" I...I don't know..."
" You do not know where your best friend i..."
" She is upstairs in the library!" Britney spat out. Tybalt widen his eyes.
" I didn't know I was that scary...Am I?" He turned to Diana and Juliet.
" To me, no." Diana laughed.
" Same here. Just be careful. Grandpa has police on the tip toes because of you. They are making sure you are no where in the Verona...."
" yeah, yeah, I know! I'm of to the library to read some books...To put some knowledge into some one's head rather!" He walked of upstairs. He opened the library door and every one jumped in their seat as he looked around to find Suki in the far corner with her back towards him. He walked up to her and tapped on her shoulder. She turned around and screamed. Tybalt put his finger to his lips," Shh, how about we talk outside?" He said furiously. Suki nodded and followed him outside the library.
" Let's see now...What the heck did you drug me with?"
" You aren't scaring me! I don't have to talk..."
" I am trying to be nice because you are a girl..."
" SO?! I still have back up!"
" Oh do you now?!" Tybalt hissed," Good luck getting them out of jail and helping your ass. Leader is dead and teriyaki boys don't exist any more! Thanks to you!"
" Ha!" Suki chuckled," What do you care! you don't even have gun! I am n..." Tybalt took a gun out of his back pocket and clicked it. Suki stopped in mid sentence and gulped.
" You were saying something?"
" I have no clue what you are talking about...don't kill me like you did with Kenji...."
" Just talk and ignore this thing I have in my hand...."
" He...I...I am not saying anything..." Tybalt rolled his eyes.
" I will not shoot any one, especially a girl. I already feel bad for breaking your wrist, which by the way I apologize for. Now listen to me," He put his gun back in the back pocket," Talk, or I will call Hermia. She is not afraid to beat the crap out of you or your friend together. And I taught Hermia how to fight." he looked into Suki's eye. He felt fear.
" It was my idea to kidnap Diana. Kenji helped me develop it. I just followed it..." She broke in tears," he said that we do this, we kidnap your girlfriend and we knock you out. Then we let her go and you wake up and that is it. It was a plan to humiliate you. Make you lose a fight and make you seem like no such a tough guy that you are. Hallucinogen in mix with steroid knocks you out for few hours. He overdosed. He put to much of steroid. This is why I...I freaked out when you grabbed me by the wrist and broke it. You were so furious. I am sorry. I just wanted to finish up what Britney started!"
" It is your fault everything happened. How about just living everything to just let it go? No? That was not an option. how about we scare the crap out of Diana and then put her guy to shame? You have a weird logic and you make me sick. Now your friend is dead thanks to you and your stupid plan. I hope you are happy!" He turned around and went down stairs," Love, Are you done for today?" he asked Diana.
" Yeah. Lucy has party tonight. Julie you wanna come?"
" Yeah, I just have to go home and change...See ya guys!" She waved at them as she walked out of the school. Tybalt kept quiet all the way until they reached home. He parked his car behind Diana's car in the bushes.
" Why you doing this?"
" You heard Julie...Police is all over the place. I gotta start wearing hoodies again." He walked in with Diana from the back door.
" You sure? I mean, I am worried just be careful..." Diana held his hand.
" I will be fine..." Tybalt said sharply as he helped Diana to care her back pack upstairs. Diana looked away," I...I'm sorry...It is just...This whole thing is ridiculous! You know what she said?! She said she did it to shame me! OMG TYBALT CAPP IZ LIEK LUST A FIGHT!LULZ..." Diana laughed," Why you laughing?"
" I am sorry you used slang and made it funny..." She giggled. Tybalt smiled.
" Anyways, She just wanted to humiliate me. They over doesd and made me go nuts! I killed a guy Dinee!"
" I know..." She hugged him," he was gonna get killed anyways..."
" I know, I know...Just..grrr..."
" Calm down, Tybie," Marina knocked on the door.
" Sorry guys, I served the cake and Lucy is to eager to blow out the candles. Come on!" She waved her hand and guys left the room.
Teen Lucy will appear in the next chapter :D
30th Apr 2009, 10:19 PM
She's a peasant, huh? Who does he think he is? A king? Whatever. He's just a product of arranged marriage to the real head of the Capp family.
EDIT: I'm loving the story, btw. Not too many VV stories out there. GJ!
Thank you :D and and Arrange marriage is a great idea! How come I didn't think of that XD
Thanks for comment :D
1st May 2009, 07:06 AM
I'm loving this story. :D Great update again. I'm looking forward to seeing teen Lucy. :)
1st May 2009, 09:01 AM
Nice update! Looking forward to little Lucy being all grown up!
1st May 2009, 10:11 AM
TWO updates, yayayayayayaya!
Can't wait to see teen Lucy...
1st May 2009, 01:34 PM
Yes, it's your fault Suki! Because of you, Tybalt is no longer a Capulet (or that what Consort thought)!
I'm playing Veronaville right now, still have the urge to make Mercutio and Tybalt fight..
Oh, and teen Lucy! This is gonna be awesome!
3rd May 2009, 02:49 AM
Many thanks to xzkiskazx2 for helping with with chapter in so many ways! And simply thanks for support hun! Enjoy! And ignore the tipped over garbage...Dylan didn't quiet get over Diana braking up with him. I just go so fed up with picking up and him typing it over, I just kept it there that day...:lol: Also Lucy is meant to turn 14, not 13. My bad, I will fix it in the other chapters.
Chapter 24 - Addition To The Family
Diana was looking thought the mail box," Bills, bills, bills, letter from Tybie, What's this?..." she opened the envelope," Oh my...MOM!" She squealed and run upstairs," MOMMY! MOM!"
" Oh my, what, what, what?!"
" I got letter from school! I got amazing grades this year and they say I can go to university skipping grade 12!"
" That is wonderful sweetie!" Marina hugged her.
" I wanna go to university, school sucks..." Lucy came downstairs.
" Oh my..."Marina gasped as she saw her daughters hair. Diana just opened her mouth.
" Your hair is neon purple..."
" Yeah...Experimenting..."Lucy moved on to living room.
" My...I think that car accident really got into her..." Marina whispered to Diana.
" I think it is phase. Remember one day i dyed my hair blue?"
" Yeah but...your washed out next day...Hers are permanent!"
" She will be fine.. Anyways! I just need you to sign this then I can graduate in few days after finals!"
" I don't know...You have to ask da..."
"DAADDDY!" Diana screamed downstairs.
" Wha?" Diana run downstairs. Few minutes later she came with a wide smile and stretches the paper to her mom which had a signature on it. Marina rolled her eyes.
" You just wanna be with Tybalt don't you?"
" Yup!" Diana watched her mom sign the paper.
" Well, just behave yourself there...Ooh..."
" Ma, you okey?" Dinee came up to her mom.
" Yeah, baby is kicking again...I am nervous like it my first child..."She laughed.
" Aren't you supposed to give birth in like few days? Oh my, what if it falls on my graduation?"
" Then this when you get your little brother or sister!" Marina smiled. Diana walked into the living room. Lucy was slouching on the couch and watching movies with a bored look.
" Wanna talk sis?" Diana sat next to Lucy. Lucy didn't even look at her. Diana sighed. Lucy was only younger then her by two years, yet they were so different," You like some one don't you?"
" What's your problem, what do you care?..." Lucy said with tears dripping down her eyes.
Diana noticed Marina peeking into the living room. She was making it to obvious.
" Let's go to my room and you can talk to me...." Diana held her sisters hand as they went upstairs. As soon as the door closed, Lucy broke in tears on Diana's shoulder.
" This one guy in school said I am to young for him, and he is only two months older then I am. I really liked him and he said he likes high school girls...."
" High school girl will not date a guy like him trust me....Unless they are Britney or Suki perhaps...Sweetie is that why you dying your hair? To impress him?"
" Fifty fifty...I like alternative styles plus I do want to impress him..."
" Who is the guy?" Diana asked stroking her sisters head.
" Oh him! DO not even bother. He is Dylan's cousin and you know what pig of a Dylan did to me, right?" Lucy nodded," Apple doesn't fall far from the tree..."
" What should I do?...I want to date too..."
" Why you have such an urge? I don't remember being fourteen and wanting to date so bad...."
" You and Tybalt are so cute together. I want to be in the relationship too..."
" Lu, don't rush it. It will come to you..."
" How did you and him start dating?..." Lucy interrupted.
" Uhm..." Diana paused. That was a first time her sister asked that. How was she gonna phrase to fourteen year old with out making her think that this is the right way to do thing. ' Oh him and I had first sex then four days later he asked me out! Yeah right, idiot!' Diana thought to herself. Even thought it was pretty much how it happened, she didn't wanna traumatize her sister and give her the wrong idea about dating," we were close friends for almost a year, and just about 7 month ago he asked me out..." Diana looked at her sister. Lucy smiled," That is so sweet! I wish I can start dating one of my friends...Do you guys have sex?"
" Ooookey, now that is none of your business! You are not old enough plus it is not polite to ask those questions even from your sister..." Diana tried to change the subject.
" But you do, don't you?" Lucy laughed as Diana blushed.
" Perhaps, now please back to the original subject," Diana laughed," Just do not rush anything. You will know when the right moment is..."
" For sex?"
" No for dating, you perverted child!" Diana nudged her sister," Now let's go downstairs maybe mom needs help with cooking."
Next few days flew by fast. Diana was picking the dress for her graduation, Marina was preparing for the baby that on the way. Juliet and Kaee also got permission to ship of to college now if they wanted to. Juliet wanted to go so she begged her grandpa to sign it. He did. Kaee however decided to stay an extra year. He said it will do no harm, plus he will help Lucy out who will go to high school next year. After attending graduation, Tybalt took Diana out. Consort was at graduation and he didn't wanna risk being caught.
" So what you say?..." Diana laid back on the seat.
" I am happy for y..." His phone rang," One moment...it's your dad..." He stopped the car and Diana got out.
" Hi Daddy! wha..What?! Right now! OH MY GOD! we are gonna be there!" She hung up and jumped back in the car. She could hold the smile and she kept giggling.
" What is going on?..." Tybalt smirked.
" My mom is in the hospital and she is giving birth right now!"
" Whoa...You sound like you are giving birth right now..." He looked around to make sure no cars were coming and drove off.
" Step on it!" Diana said happily and laughed.
" Jee..." Tybalt floored the pedal and his car roared as it drove down the street," Put the seat belt on. I do not want you flying out the window..." Diana obediently put the belt on," I don't remember being that excited about my sisters..."
" You are a guy, so it is different for you..." Diana laughed. When they reached the hospital they saw her dad outside the delivery room.
" Nothing. It has been about an hour now...." he sat on the chair and stretched his legs. Diana sat next to him and Tybalt leaned agins the wall. It seemed ages before the nurse came out and said," Congratulations, it is a boy! " Diana and Dean rushed in and Tybalt stayed outside. Diana gasped as she saw her mom holding the baby.
" he is so cute! How are we gonna name him?"
" You can name him if you want honey..." Marina smiled as she held little baby boy.
" Hi there!" Diana waved at him and smiled. Little boy smiled.
" Hey little dude!" Dean leaned forward and smiled," I am your...half dad I guess?" Marina laughed.
" Consider him like yours. So what is his name, Dinee?" Tybalt knocked.
" Can I come in?"
" Go ahead sweetie!" Marina smiled," You are like a family to us!"
" Oh wow...I thought all babies are ugly after I saw Hermia as a baby..." he laughed," No offense..."
" Non taken.." Marina smiled," He will develop..."
" Hm....I wanted to call that my kid, when i do get one eventually, but this name really fits him. How about Duncan?"
" That is a wonderful name," Marina picked Duncan up, " Hi Duncan! Welcome to the world!"
Hope you like it! Dinee will be YA in the next chapter. Also her, Tyb and Joey are going to mountains for summer vacation so expect some vacation photos in the next chapter!
3rd May 2009, 06:26 AM
Such a cute update!
I hate the name Duncan though, it reminds me of Veronica's old boyfriend in Veronica Mars and he was sucha douchebag!
Looking forward to the holiday shots :D
3rd May 2009, 06:33 AM
:lol: I don't mind it. Not he best name, but it is fine. I makes me think of Duncan McCould or whatever it was XD
Thanks for comment.
3rd May 2009, 07:38 AM
Lolz at Lucy's purple hair!
Great update as always (I'm startin to feel like a parrot)...
3rd May 2009, 08:05 AM
Yay for baby Duncan! And Lucy has her first crush.. and dyed her hair purple to impress him, hmm... probably hormones :p
And Diana as a YA? Time passed so fast..
3rd May 2009, 09:48 AM
Aww! Nooboo! :D
Dina as a YA? :weep: They grow up so fast! Great update. :)
4th May 2009, 06:39 AM
Thanks for wonderful comments, I will update next chapter tomorrow
4th May 2009, 09:41 AM
Like cannot wait.*wootpartywoot*
4th May 2009, 03:57 PM
Go Diana, Go Diana!Getting skipped a grade definately highlights the fact that she's too smart for Dylan who got left back a grade. Lucy is definately hormonal. I remember when I was fourteen. Now that I look back at it, I was so silly trying to impress a guy too. Nooboo- and a grim nooboo at that! I can't wait to see young adult Diana. Please don't lose Veronaville.
P.S. Wish me a happy belated birthday ((I turned sixteen yesterday)).
4th May 2009, 07:49 PM
Wow, Kyle, you are very good when it comes to story writing! Keep it up! :D
Aww, congrats on the new nooboo. :)
4th May 2009, 10:15 PM
Thank you very much guys for your wonderful comments! I have made about 30(if not more)vacation photos, but I'm only posting about 10-12 here. If you wan to see the rest, I will post them as a next update. Happy belated Birthday lunaselene503! Enjoy!
Chapter 25 - New Place
Diana spent her summer with Tybalt and Joey. They rented a room in three Lakes Village for just about whole summer. Here are some photos of their vacation. They also went camping for the whole august. Also Diana discovered that Tybalt wears glasses when he reads. That was a shocker even for Joey who shared a house with him for a year.
After summer vacation guys went straight to university. Tybalt and Joey had to repeat half of the first year, because Tybalt had family problems mentioned earlier so did Joey. His relative died so he had to take some time off.
" Guys we need to move..." Joey said as he blopped his butt of the sofa. Tybalt raised his eyes from the book.
" It has been a week since we came back and you already wanna move?"
" Why move? I like this place..." Diana sat next to Joey on the sofa.
" Well, first. it is getting crowded. Jordan and Romeo Live in a different dorm with their girlfriend this year. It is loud. This freshmen are getting on my nerves by living their garbage all over the place..."
" Oh my look who's talking..." Tybalt mumbled returning to his reading. Joey stuck his tongue out.
" As I was saying. Plus those freshmen are...Some different type of music freaks! I can't listen to it.. I woke up last night 'cuz of the boom boom booms they were having!"
" I never heard their music..." Diana looked at Joey confused. The second she said that, some one turned the music on the loudest. It was rap. Tybalt took his glasses of and looked at other in shock.
" Well music isn't that bad..." Diana squeezed out a smile. it was a bad thing to say since Tybalt and Joey were rock music fans," I mean come on!..."
" I'd have less problem if they were playing rock or techno...but that!" some one knocked on the door and shouted.
" You guys wanna come out? You have been locked in the house since school year started..." Tybalt coldly started at the door. He seriously wanted to shoot lazers at it if had any. Joey got up," I'll handle this!" He opened a door and smiled," How about... A NO!" he slammed the door," Stupid freshmen."
" You are nice... Come on at least we have each other..."
" Oh! Also trains!" Tybalt interrupted Diana," Sorry sweety..."
" No problem..."
" Oh yeah, that is the major turn of about this place..."
" There aren't that many trains lately anyways...." Diana heard a train in the distance. As it passed by, the house shook. Tybalt held on to the table with a " i am not impressed look" And Joey run to the game console and caught it few seconds before it hit the floor. Diana looked at the celling. It was long distance train from Belladona Cove going to Veronaville. Shacking stopped as soon as the train disappeared in the forest. Diana looked at Tybalt who looked at Joey, Who was holding on to the console like it was a baby.
" All in favor of moving say Aye!" He raised his hand.
" Aye," Tybalt and Diana said in unison. Diana went to the computer and guys stood behind her looking over her shoulders.
There were many adds. Some were from last year graduates, some were just build houses.
" Nothing that will fit 3 of us..." Diana sighed after they called many add numbers," half of them are taken..."
" Half are in the worst area of the campus..." Tybalt collapsed on the sofa. Joey read every single add once again.
" Hey! how about this one! It is just down the road form here and it has two rooms. You and Dinee can take one, I will take another...Tyb throw me the phone..." Joey stretched out his hand . Tybalt threw the phone at him hitting his head," Damn you..."
" Sorry...." Tybalt yawned. Joey typed the number in and waited for the reply. After few beeps some one picked up. After few beeps Joey said," Uhm, yeah hi! I saw the add in the SimCity Daily Website, that you have a house for rent in Acadmie Le Tour. yeah the two room one. Can me and my friend check it out? Hm..can you do it today? Oh you can? that is wonderful! Sweet, I will see you there in a bit. Bye!" he hung up," guys get dressed we are going to see the house..."
" isn't it too late?" Tybalt cuddled up on the sofa.
" Love, it is 3:30." Diana giggled.
" Yeah? Seems later...." Tybalt mumbled. Joey smacked him with the pillow," Hey what gives?!"
" get your butt up if you want a new place to live in!" He stuck his tongue out. Tybalt smacked Joey on the butt with the other pillow.
" I had my revenge!" He laughed as they went out of the house and Tybalt locked the door behind him.
House was in beautiful area of the beautiful area of Acadime Le Tour. It had a few houses and it had a little park. They stopped in front of an orange house.
" This is it..." Joey looked down and compared the addresses," Whatcha think guys?" Tybalt looked at the house with a tired look and Diana was looking at it with amazement.
" Colorful..." Tybalt said.
" Fantastic!" Diana squealed as she looked at the house.
" Artist think alike..."Tybalt rolled his eyes.
" Didn't you switch to art as well?" Diana hugged him.
" Yeah, but it kinda blinds me..."
" Hi, you are the guys that said you wanna check the house out right?" A goth like looking girl came up to them.
" Yes that is us!" Joey said cheerfully while Tybalt wasn't impressed.
" Nice to meet you! Come on in!" She smiled and walked to the door with them. The house was spacious and colorful. It had two rooms upstairs and two bathrooms. Kitchen was in orange colors.
" Aaaand how much is it for the place?" Tybalt asked while Joey and Diana were looking around the kitchen.
" About 1200 a month..."
" Whoa...I don't know if we can afford that..." Tybalt exclaimed.
" Yes we can!" Joey stepped in," I work at the cafe, I can ask for extra hours..."
" I will find a job, it will be easy since every one likes boobs to be around their place..." Diana smiled and Tybalt frowned at her," Plus you have a job as a cashier in that coffee store with Joey..." Tybalt looked at both of them. They both had kitty eyes.
" Aaaaaah, damn both of you...fine!" Diana leaped in his arms and Joey jumped on his back almost making him fall on the floor.
The girl smiled," here are the spare keys guys. All I need for you to sign here..." Guys signed the paper and left the house saying bye to the dealer.
" Okey let's go and pack! Maybe we can move in by the end of the week. I hope boxes fit in your car Tyb. Or we will have to tie them to the roof of the car..." Joey run to the door of their dorm with the keys.
" I ain't putting anything on the roof of my BMW!...That car is expensive and I ain't destroying the paint..." He paused," Damn we need to move I started talking like a rapper..." Diana laughed.
By the next afternoon they were done with packing.
Some freshman came up to them and said," You guys are like done moving yet? My peeps are about to come over soon so we will give them your house..." Tybalt gave him a cold look, Joey simply ignored him and Diana stood there not knowing what to do.
" Give us time..." Tybalt mumbled as he put some boxes in the trunk.
" We gotta get down with my peeps, we need space..." Tybalt rolled his eyes.
" Dinee, can I do it? Please?! Pleeeease?"
" Do what?!" Diana looked at her boyfriend confused.
" Just say yes...."
" Yeah sure..." Diana then wished she said no. Tybalt swing his fist hitting the freshman right on the nose. Diana gasped and Joey cheered," Whoa! Nice going Tyb!"
" And stay down!" Tybalt commanded as he grabbed a giant box all by himself and went to the car. Diana silently went to the car and put last of her boxes in there while Joey was laughing his head off.
" You guys done?" Tybalt pushed on the trunk and it closed with a click. Joey threw one of his last boxes in the back seat and slammed the door," Whoa! Gentle!"
" Blah Blah Blah..."Joey climbed in the car from the other door.
" If the door brakes, it comes out from your paycheck to fix it..."
" Fine seriously..." Tybalt drove off. Diana turned around and saw a few freshmen run in the house.
" Do you think it was okey that we took the furniture?..." She asked.
" Yeah, 'cuz technically it was mine....I bought it as soon as I moved in..." Tybalt paused. Joey laughed his head of when he heard some freshmen screaming about the furniture.
" Aaah, home sweet home! No more annoying dormies, no more mascots and cheerleaders and I can finally scream " Get of my lawn!" to every one passing by our house Joey laughed as him and Tybalt were unpacking the the last of the boxes.
" Where is Dinee? I have not seen her since we came here..."Tybalt asked.
" She said she'd be unpacking in the room that is her and your upstairs. I'd check there..." Joey took out the precious console out of the box.Tybalt went up stairs and saw Diana passed out on the bed. She pretty much did all the work around the room. Everything was set up except maybe few boxes still being out.
Tybalt smiled and went downstairs to help Joey set up the kitchen.
For now this all of the Tybie, Dinee and Joey. From now on, Lucy will be the main character. Sorry for the last picture but she didn't want to pose any other way >_> hope you like it!
5th May 2009, 12:44 AM
The holiday pictures were great. It's cute to see Tybalt and Diana spending time together, and Joey were alone. The pic when Diana and Tybalt woohoo makes me laugh. Do you think that Joey should get a girlfriend?
And those freshmen! I can't stand rap either, they hurt my ear :lol:
Where did you get Diana's outfit from? I've been looking for something like that!
Lucy will be the main character? Cool!
And may I suggest you age up Hal Capp, because he might be perfect for her ;)
5th May 2009, 02:12 AM
I already have a match for her though :/ and a spoiler, Puck will take part in the story too since so many people wanted him to appear.
5th May 2009, 03:48 AM
Great update! I laughed at the woohoo pic..poor Joey stuck outside.
And I LOVE Diana's final outfit, I have that in my game and use it waaay too much.
It's sad this is the last of these guys, but I'm curious to see where Lucy's story goes :D
5th May 2009, 03:52 AM
Oh they will appear again xD it is just for now they will appear as bg characters.
EDIT:Should I post the rest of the vacation pictures?
5th May 2009, 05:45 AM
PUCK! Aww, that cute elf face gives me more Puckgasm :lovestruc: I can't admire him anymore cause he's dead in my game :(
Oh well, I'll look forward to Lucy's match. BTW did you ever played other premade families? Bianca Monty and Kent Capp makes a great sidestory.
EDIT: Danirawr, where did you get the outfit anyway? I've been looking for something like that for ages.
5th May 2009, 05:51 AM
I forget i think it was liana sims or something...
5th May 2009, 06:43 AM
It's from All About Style, here (http://www.all-about-style.com/adult_feca7.html)
5th May 2009, 11:19 AM
Thanks for the link!
5th May 2009, 03:01 PM
This update was fun and thanks for the birthday shout-out. I agree with Decoy, joey needs a girlfriend. It'll be interesting to hear Lucy's voice and I can't wait ot se who you pair her up with. Yay, Puck!
5th May 2009, 10:38 PM
Thanks for comments guys! I might update tonight, if not the tomorrow :D here is the rest of vacation pictures. They can be found here (http://forums.sims-community.com/showpost.php?p=1351894&postcount=260), here (http://forums.sims-community.com/showpost.php?p=1351884&postcount=494), here (http://forums.sims-community.com/showpost.php?p=1351888&postcount=80) and here (http://forums.sims-community.com/showpost.php?p=1351892&postcount=242) :D
7th May 2009, 10:59 AM
Hey Luna, you like Puck too? Wee, another Puckgasm :p
I like the vacation pics, it makes me wonder if I want to have Bon Voyage..
7th May 2009, 10:12 PM
Lucy's story! :D Enjoy!
Chapter 26 - Old School Friend
Lucy was laying on the bed in Jordan's old room. Her old room got turned into a nursery and she remodeled Jordan's old room into her room. Although Diana said she can take her room when she is gone, she still took Jordan's because it was purple. Plus Diana's room would get very cold in winter because of the big windows she had in her room.She was reading a magazine when her mom knocked on the door," Sweetie, wanna help me with shopping? We gotta get some food for the house and Duncan is out of diapers..."
" Already? Didn't we just buy them this week?" She sat up on the bed.
" Well, he is a bit of a stinky aren't you?" Marina tickled Duncan who laughed. Lucy got up and stretched.
" Sure, let's go. Come here you!" Lucy took Duncan from Marina's hands and hugged him. Marina smiled and went downstairs to the car. Lucy followed her with Duncan and she helped her put him in the back seat. She then climbed in and her and her mom drove off.
Ivy was walking around he store with Fafnir walking next to her.
" Let's see now...I think I have everything..."
" Tuna?" Fafnir interrupted.
" Yes I got it, don't worry!"
" Why did we come here? Fridge was full last time i checked it..."
" There is something going to happen today that will change some one's life!" Ivy smiled as she walked down the isles.
Marina took Duncan out of the car. Lucy rolled up with the cart to her mom.
" So what are we getting?" Lucy walked tot he store.
" Food silly...let's see now...while I am in this isle, can you get canned food from the other isle?..."
" Sure mom." Lucy run off.
" Sweetie don't run!" Marina shouted as Lucy run down the isles. She didn't notice Ivy's cart. She bumped into it as hard as possible, flew over it and landed on her back," LUCY!" Marina run to her daughter. Fafnir frowned," You knew that would happen right?" Ivy just nodded. She run up to Lucy," Oh my god, I am so sorry. Sweetie are you okey?"
" Yeah I am fine...My side hurts though..."
" Silly child! I told you not to run!" Marina frowned as she helped her daughter up," You have weak bones too! What if you broke your rib?!"
" Mom I am fine!...Ow..." Lucy bend over as her side hurt. Ivy came up to her," Allow me to help. Where does it hurt, dear?" Lucy held her right side. Ivy gently moved her hand away and touched her side. Her palm glowed with light blue light. She took her hand off," How does it feel now?"
" Like nothing happened..." Lucy smiled.
" Oh my..." Marina gasped in amazement," You are a witch aren't you?"
" That glow around me isn't there for nothing you know?" Ivy laughed," I am Ivy Rider, nice to meet you Marina. Long time no seen. You have not changed a single bit..."
" IVY?! From college? Oh my! I haven't seen you since my wedding! What brings you to Verona?!" Lucy and Fafnir looked at them confused.
" You know how I am I never stay long in one place, but I think for now I am settled in Verona while Derek is in college. He is a freshman this year. They grow up so fast!"
" I know my second oldest, Diana is going there this years as well. I didn't know you were pregnant..."
" Uhm...it is a long story, but I will make phrase it easy. He is conceived same way as that little cute tot you are holding...." Marina nodded understandably. Ivy turned to Lucy," And what is your name sweetie?"
" Lucinda Maria, but call me Lucy or Lu every one does..." Lucy smiled at Ivy. Ivy smiled back.
" Nice to meet you little Lu!"
" Lucy, honey, can you take Duncan to play ground? Make sure he doesn't crawl into anything dangerous..."
"Okie mom...Oh nice cat..."
" I am not just a cat thank you..." Fafnir frowned.
" Oh dear..."
" This is Fafnir, my familiar. He is a bit of a grump when he isn't fed," Ivy smiled as she petted Fafnir who purred. Lucy laughed and run of to the play ground with Duncan. Ivy looked at Fafnir.
" Oh no I ain't baby sitting them..."
" I will not give you yum yums when we get home then." Ivy smiled. Fafnir pressed his ears against his head.
" Fine...Sheesh, leave the baby sitting to me, it is always Fafnir..." Fafnir ran off.
" He is cute.." Marina laughed when Fafnir was far enough not to hear them. Ivy laughed with her.
" He is a teenager at heart. He is very faithful though. How has your life been?"
" Well. Dean is now head of staff in the hospital, he gets paid a lot, so we have enough money to send all of the kids to private school and then university. You probably know everything anyways."
" About 50%...How is Diana?"
" Uhm, I guess okey. She is camping with her boyfriend and her best friend right now. They have university in a week." Marina shrugged.
" Tybalt right? Hm...he has a scary reputation... Well, after that girl Suki I think it is..."
" Pretty much. But he is a nice guy. I wouldn't let Diana be with him if he was an asshole."
" Knowing you he wouldn't be allowed in good eight miles around your house," Ivy laughed," I am glad she is happy she had some tough times didn't she?"
" Yeah, she didn't get along with many boys when me and Dean finally though she is happy she got almost raped by Dylan. He seemed like a nice guy..."
" A wolf in sheep's costume..." Ivy paused," Lucy has a gift..."
" Oh please!" Marina waved at her.
" No I seriously feel that in her. She will make a good witch if she has the desire..."
" Knowing Lucy, she can't concentrate on anything shorter then TV commercial..." Marina looked towards the playground. Ivy laughed.
" Well, I can train her if you want. I am a good witch and I will make sure nothing goes wrong. If anything happens I will take full responsibility."Marina paused.
" I guess...If she wants to though..."
" Of course. I am done with my shopping, I will now head home. If Lucy comes to you saying she has to meet up with some one and she has no clear answer with who, you will know it is me. Good bye Mari. I will see you soon. My best regards to all your kids!" Ivy swung her wand and shopping cart followed her as she head to the cash register.
Sorry i took a while to update. Hope you like and please comment they motivate me! :D
8th May 2009, 06:20 AM
Ooh, now it's Lucy's story! She still acts like a little girl sometimes :anime:
Meh, speaking of old school friends my mom also met her old college friend recently. While shopping with me too :p
8th May 2009, 08:33 AM
Ooh! Lucy! I agree with decoyenderek, she does act like a little girl still. Purple hair is a little bold, if I do say so myseld. :p
9th May 2009, 04:49 AM
Wow so Ivy and Marina were college friends cool. My mom and I are always running into her old friends. I know the saying's a cliche but it really is a small world. Marina and Dean are so relaxed (yet secretly attentive) for parents that sometimes I'm startled. Most parents would freak out if one daughter died her hair purple and maybe a witch, another was sexually active and their todddler is a grim child. They really are sim parents aren't they? ^.^ I know I've said this before but please back up your neighborhood as I would hate for you to lose Veronaville and cancel this story. See you next chapter!
Decoy: Actually I'm more of a Juliette or Mercutio fan, but I have a soft spot for him as my Juliette antagonizes Puck since he's "stealing" her little sister from her.
9th May 2009, 04:59 AM
I back it up every time i get an important event. :D it is backed up do not worry :D
Thing is Dean, is a strickt dad, Marina is more understandive of a teen age nature so she kinda let's it flow as long as it doesn't go beyond boundaries I guess. And they do not know about Diana's sexual activity that is why they are not screaming at her. Marina is simply guessing she is doing things with Tybalt( I mean come on they are dating for almost a year and never had sex? Yeah right xD ) And with grim child...Tere was not much they could do about it...
Thanks for comment,( I love your detailed once Luna xD) and I should update soon...:D
9th May 2009, 05:30 AM
I like Lucy's purple hair :P
I'm getting blonde streaks today. Much more boring :)
9th May 2009, 05:44 AM
Mercutio also rules, he's always the clumsy one that got picked on by Tybalt most of the time in my game :p But I dislike Romeo, cause for me he's like Dylan. He got my legacy spare pregnant (thanks to ACR)!
And I can't wait for the next update! This has got to be my favorite drama/romance story.
15th May 2009, 03:57 AM
I apologize for not updating for a while. I have been Trying to finish up LLC and I kinda forgot about this story. LLC has only 3 chapters to (waah) and I will be updating this one more often. Enjoy!
Chapter 27 - New Day
" Rise and shine sweet heart!" Marina came into Lucy's room. It was her first day in high school today and Lucy wasn't very excited.
" Mmmh, I don't want too..." She covered herself with the blanket. Marina pulled the blanket of her.
" Come on! I will make French Toasts for breakfast..."
" French Toasts? Is there strawberry syrup some where?..." Lucy looked up at her mom.
" Yes there is! Now get your butt in the shower while I cook them!" Marina left the room. Lucy sat up on the bed and stretched. She grabbed the towel and slowly walked to the bathroom. She looked int he mirror. Her purple hair was a complete mess and she now felt bad for dying it this way. She climbed in the shower. Warm water made her almost fall asleep again. When she was done with the shower Lucy put her uniform on and came downstairs where there was a plate on the table with french toast floating in strawberry sauce.
" Just how I like!" She sat at the table and stabbed her toast with the fork.
" Well you are my kid, I ought to know what you like what not." Marina laughed while eating her toast. Duncan looked at his bowl with a disappointed look.
" Wah..." he cried.
" Come one honey! It is good for you!" Marina smiled.
" What's in that thing?" Lucy said with a full mouth.
" Of course! His mom and sister have something that smells yummy and is tasty and he has too eat porridge..I'd cry too." Lucy finished her toast.
" he has too eat porridge..." Marina started but got interrupted by honking of the bus," Ah. Bus is here. You have to get going sweetie!" She put her plate aside and got up.
" I don't want too..." Lucy walked to the front door with her mom. Big yellow bus was standing in front of their house.
" High School isn't so bad. Diana and Jordan went through it!" Marina stopped in front of the bus door.
" Well yeah but.." Lucy paused and looked up at some kid who was making faces at her.
" Come one honey. It will be okey," Marina hugged her daughter," Behave, listen to the teachers and try not to get into fights. In case of emergency call dad or Jordan." Marina waved. Lucy sat next to the window and watched her mom and house slowly disappear. Lucy bus slowly drive around Verona picking up other kids. She once again was jealous of Diana having boyfriend. This time for the car. She would have been in school by now.
" Hey there!" Lucy lazily raised her eyes to see a red head smile at her. He was leaning from a seat in front of her. Lucy was not in the mood to talk," Leave me alone..." She mumbled. Red head nodded and sat back in his seat. Bus finally stopped in front of school and every one rushed out. Lucy was the last one to go. She stepped out of the bus and her jaw dropped as she saw the high school building. There was a group of people talking in front the school. Some of them weren't wearing uniform. Lucy sighed," well you gotta socialize a little bit Lu..here it goes..." She said to her self as she walked up towards the gang.
Kaee noticed her come up toward them," Hey you are Lucy Michaels right?" Lucy was surprised that she was so famous.
" Yeah that is me. Hi..."
" Hey, I am Kaee. The Emo goth guy who doesn't live up to his character." He laughed as he shook her hand.
" Ha ha...how do you know who I am?" Lucy said confused.
" Well You sister is my best friend's girlfriend. I have a role of a guardian angel. I've been looking over Diana by Tybalt's request and I am making sure everything is fine with you..."
"...because Diana asked right?" Lucy laughed," You are funny!"
" Well I told you I do not live up to the character," he laughed," Let me introduce you to some people that you can talk to if I happen not to be around or something...This is Melly, my girlfriend," Lucy looked at Melly and for some reason she felt jealousy," This is Kin," He pointed at long haired elf guy," and Hermia. Juliet's and Tybalt's sister."
" Hi!" Lucy waved at them.
" Hi! I think we are in the same class this year. It will be fun!" Hermia smiled," by the way this is my boyfriend, Puck!"
Lucy's heart skipped a beat when she saw the same guy that was being nice to her on the bus," Oh..."
" Hey!" Puck smiled.
" Uhm...Yeah...Sorry about before..I was tired..." She mumbled.
" It is okey. First day of school is always bad..." he laughed.
" Have you met?" Hermia looked puzzled.
" Yeah, on the bus..." Bell rang," Let's go! Isn't it fun! First class!" Puck said cheerfully although it was obvious he was about to just go back home and sleep.
" Come on," Hermia took Lucy's hand and pulled her into the school building.
After boring math and literature, Lucy was happy to have Art. Ms. Kyle was a cheerful teacher. She had an interesting style which consisted of Bright orange top and green bottom.
" Helloo class! What a small class. Not many people chose art? Oh well. My name is Ms. Kyle and I will be teaching you art thought the high school. Today we will be drawing a quite simple project. Fruits! They consist of shapes so it is very easy! Let's begin shall we?.." Lucy looked around the class. She stopped and admired a dark skinned guy with dark green eyes.
" I see you are interested in him..." Kin said calmly.
" Eh?" Lucy's little pink cloud of love went away in a poof.
" That guy over there. I know you are staring at him..."
" I am not..." Lucy looked away.
" And now you are blushing..."Kin rolled his eyes.
" What is it to you?" Lucy said angrily. Kin gave her a cold look and for a second they exchanged looks. Kin broke the silence," nothing..." He turned to his paper and continued his attempts at drawing an apple.
Twenty minutes later Lucy, Hermia, Puck and Kin were sitting in the cafeteria.
" Grr..." Hermia poked her lunch with a fork.
" What is wrong with it this time?" Puck who was used to the fits about cafeteria food from his girlfriend, rolled his eyes.
" It is hard as a brick..." Hermia sighed pushing her plate away.
" Guys, I have a question. Who is that guy over there?" Lucy took a bite of her sandwich.
" I am amazed you don't know him.." Kin said calmly.
" He is a graduate from junior high like you," Puck added," He was in same class with you and you don't recognize him?"
" Guys change a lot you know?" Hermia said," I wouldn't recognize you if you changed next year..." Puck raised his eyebrow.
" Let's invite him to eat with us!" Lucy smiled.
" There is no place..." Puck said.
" Don't be a meanie! There is!"She pushed Kin out of his seat. Kin gave her an angry look.
" Who is a meanie now?No there isn't the tables here are for four people only..." he continued.
" He can put chair next to you an..." Lucy tried to say but she noticed the guy get up and walk to wards the exist of the cafeteria," Oh my! Wait!" She got up and run towards the guy. Kin mumbled something and sat back in his chair.
" Hey!" Lucy said as she got close tot he guy.
" Uhm, what is your name?" she smiled.
" Mike and you?"
" Lucy, nice to meet you!" she paused trying to think of topic for conversation.
" I like your hair! Suits you," Mike interrupted the silence.
" Really?...Thanks..." Lucy blushed.
" Yeah. Have I seen you before? You seem familiar..."
" We went to Junior high together apparently..." She laughed.
" Oh yeah...You had two brown pony tails!" Mike laughed with her," You are funny!"
" So are you!..." Lucy smiled.
" Uhm...Wanna meet up sometime after school?..." Mike started. Meanwhile Kaee was watching them.
" Sure...Uhm...how about at my place tomorrow?"
" Sure. I will wee you then..." Mike smiled and walked off.
" What are you looking at my raven?" Melly said. She had a sweet smooth voice.
" Making sure everything is okey..."
" You are over reacting. And you are so not making it obvious, stop looking like this my little bat..." She whispered.
" I don't want Diana chasing me with an ax on streets of Verona..."
" Tybalt is more likely to do that. Plus let the girl experience..." Melly kissed his cheek.
Lucy came home in good mood that day.
" See I told you high school isn't that bad!" Marina said as Lucy walked upstairs to her room," Dinner will be served soon!"
" Okey..." Lucy went upstairs and changed. She looked out the window and she saw the park. She tilted her head as she widen her eyes. He pupils shrunk then her eyes glowed. Lucy blinked and everything stopped. Lucy looked around the room.
" That was weird..."she said to herself. She went downstairs," Mom...I have to go the park...meet up with some body..."Marina almost dropped her spoon.
" With who?" She asked quietly. She saw her daughters eyes glow. Lucy blinked and it disappeared.
" I...I...I am not sure...I just have to go..."Lucy mumbled. Marina nodded.
" You can go, try to be quick...." She said calmly. Lucy run out the door and headed to the park. Marina sighed.
Hope you like it.And the art teacher is in a sence me xD she is created for my artist nickname which is KyleTheArtist and she is complete oposite of me :P
15th May 2009, 01:43 PM
PUCK!!!! Puck Puck Puck! I screamed when I saw him :lovestruc: I giggled when you wrote that he was just about to go home and sleep, and when you added that he got used to Hermia's fits :D
Maybe Kin likes Lucy? Even though she likes Mike?
Ms. Kyle's funny! And a bit too cheerful, so then you're gloomy but you're actually funny like Kaee?
PS: LLC is ending in another 3 chapter? Noo! Please write a sequel or another story!
15th May 2009, 05:25 PM
She is was just created for my artistic name xD We are perhaps the same but we are most likely totally different xD
15th May 2009, 05:44 PM
Yay, an update! It was cute how Lucy was worried about her first day of high school. I can't wait to see how her love life pans out. Hi Puck! Please stop making Lucy's heart beat,mmmkay? The science teaher must have alot of guts to wear such bold colors. Melly's nicknames for Kaee made me laugh and aww at the same time. so did Kaee's comment on beging chased with an axe (I have a wierd sense of humor). Someone *cough*Kin*cough* looks jealous.
15th May 2009, 06:26 PM
Haha xD Thanks. Little story behind those colors and names is South Park Kyle xD I had this nickname since grade 9 and I am not planning to change it because it is stuck to me now :P
Also Melly is poetic plus gothic, So I don't know what kind of cuddly names goths have between each other those were the only two I could think of xD
22nd May 2009, 05:15 AM
I apologize it took me a while. I've been busy with finals and also with finishing up LLC. Also I am deciding if I am buying TS3 and most importantly, if I should make sequels for both stories. I am keeping TS2( hell no, I played to long to just delete this xD) so I can keep the stories going, so I ain't abandoning anything! Woot! Enjoy!
Chapter 28 - Lessons
Lucy walked into the park. she felt like she was being dragged. Everything stooped when she reached a bench on which Ivy was sitting.
" Hey there darling!" she smiled at Lucy. Lucy looked puzzled.
" What is going on?"
" I knew you had a talent. Did you feel you are being dragged here?" She asked.
" Pretty much..."
" Okey, I have and important question to ask you. Have a seat," She patted on the empty place next to her. Lucy sat next to Ivy," Do you want to...Wait... Do you know what witchcraft is?"
" When you cast spells?" Lucy asked.
" Close but not quiet. Do you want to learn it? Think and tell me. If you don't want to, feel free to go home, I am not holding you..."Lucy paused and looked at Ivy. Ivy had calm aura around her and Lucy felt safe.
" I am sorry, Ms. Rider. I don't think I am patient enough..."Lucy got up.
" It is your choice," Ivy nodded. Lucy squeezed out a smile and walked away. few steps away from the bench she stopped. Ivy said she had a talent. Lucy looked at her hands. She turned around and saw Ivy sitting on the bench and looking in front of her with a smile. Lucy sighed and walked back tot he bench and sat down quietly.
" Yes?" Ivy broke the silence. She kept looking in front of her with smile on her face.
" I am interested..." Lucy looked down.
" Are you sure about it?"
" Yes, please teach me...Will I get a cat too?"She smiled.
" Haha, not straight away silly," Ivy finally looked at her," Okey then, shall we begin? Lesson number one: Observation! Observe the nature around you..." Ivy said as she slowly moved her hand around," What do you see?" Lucy tilted her head.
" Trees, leaves, people...usual stuff you see in the park..." She shrugged.
" True, but you are a witch you see more then just that. Look closely at the lake..." Ivy pointed. Lucy squinted her eyes and looked closely. She saw a little girl sitting in front of the lake. She had a dress from old time on she had interesting hair style. She was transparent too.
" Oh my!" Lucy gasped," She is a ghost..."
" She is, but don't worry she is a friendly spirit. Bad spirits however, You never acknowledge that you see them, if you do, bad things happen. Oh, look she is waving at you..." Ivy pointed at the little girl. She was waving at Lucy and she was laughing. Lucy waved back," Now what else do you see? Look around carefully..."Lucy closed her eyes. She took a deep breath and opened them, next second the park was filly with people from different eras. They were all ghosts and have different clothings.
" Whoa..." Lucy exclaimed.
" This one of the ways you can find out things about the world!" Ivy got up," Observation is very important for a witch or warlock. This is how I know a lot of things, I have my friends helping me here. Why hello Count!" Ivy bowed to one of the ghosts," How are you?"
" I am wonderful my dear, thank you!" Count bowed back and floated by.
" Aren't they supposed to come out at night only?..." Lucy got up and came up to Ivy.
" Pfft! That's a myth just like black cat brings bad luck...No, they are always out they are protecting us and looking over us. But like I said bad spirits are more active at night and at full moon especially. Hi darling!" Ivy patted a little girl ghost. Girl laughed and came up to Lucy and hugged her. Lucy felt cold from head to toes. Girl laughed and skipped away. She looked around and saw Kin entering the park," There is my other student. Kin honey, over here!" Ivy waved.
Kin run up to them but he looked serious as soon as he saw Lucy.
" Hello..." He said coldly and looked away.
" Whatever..." Lucy looked away.
" I know you guys, didn't start on good terms but please, if you both are my students you must get along. That is an order!" She smiled. Kin looked at Lucy. Lucy stretched her arms out.
" Peace?" She smiled.
" Fine," Kin hugged her.
" There you go! Now Lucy, Kin. For our next class, I want you to come to my house. Okey?" Lucy and Kin nodded," Also! Some one is powerful enough to get their glow!" Ivy smiled and swung her wand. A little light blue ribbon came out and spun around Kin. It slowly faded and Kin was glowing light blue," You advanced my apprentice..." Ivy smiled and bowed. Kin bowed back.
" When Do I get a glow?..."Lucy said quietly.
" When you advance like Kin did," Ivy smiled," Now run along, I shall see you soon!" Ivy hopped on her broom and took off. Kin and Lucy watched as a light blue sparkly trail was fading as Ivy flew away further and further.
Hope you like it! next Chapter should be updated soon!
22nd May 2009, 07:04 AM
I love this chapter, Ana! (Mind if I call you that? :P) I'm still getting used to the purple hair, though. :P
22nd May 2009, 07:17 AM
Not at all Liz :D and thanks for the comment :P
22nd May 2009, 08:21 AM
Meh. I combine two chapter in this one and it might be a bit on a short side. side note: I are eenjoeening ah newz usernamez :D Enjoy!
Chapter 29 - The Duel
it has been 6 months since Lucy met Ivy and others. She has been improving a lot in her studies(not just magical) but she still had hormonal problems, such as liking to many guys at once. Speaking of guys. Her and make have been getting along greatly and it was not too long until he popped the question.
" Uhm, Lu...."He asked shyly," Will you go out with me?"
" Why...Yes! Of course I will!" She leaped into his arms. She felt like the happiest girl there is to be and she couldn't wait to tell every one.
After they departed( which seemed like ages) Lucy run in the school yard. She found every one at the far bench talking.
" Guys! Guys I have something to tell you!" She shouted as she run towards them.
" Oh my, shoe got another A..." Puck rolled his eyes and laughed.
" Naw, different tone. It is more calm when it is an A..." Kaee shrugged.
" I...Me and Mike are dating!" Lucy squealed. Every one paused for a moment.
" Congrats?" Kaee mumbled," Sorry I don't know how to react really..."
" No problem, as long as you are happy for me I am happy too!" Lucy smiled.
" I am happy for you!" Hermia said and smiled," Welcome to the dating life! It is a lot of experiences!"
" Thanks I figured," Lucy laughed. Kin looked up at her. His senses were kicking in and he did not like them," Kin you okey?"
" When he says that he isn't..."Puck put his head on Hermia's shoulder. Kin gave him a cold look. Lucy looked at her friend.
" Talk to me Kin..."
" I don't like him, okey?" He looked at her. Lucy flinched as he saw the look in his eyes.
" I have a bad feeling about him...I just do..." Kaee steeped away.
" What do you mean bad feeling?" Lucy started getting annoyed," Can't you just be happy for me?"
" Not until you are with him..." Kin looked away. Lucy took out her wand. Kaee, Hermia and Puck gasped in unison," No need to be violent, I am more powerful then you..."
" Prove it..."Lucy said through her teeth," Real friend are happy for their friends!" She swung her wand and shot a blue stripe at him. Kin dodged and stripe hit puck making his messy hair even messier. Kin gave Lucy a cold look," Stop..." He said quietly.
" No!" Lucy shot again this time almost hitting Kaee," You are just jealous because you are the only single one..." Kin took his wand out and shot. Lucy jumped up and it missed her.
" You went to far with that miss..."
" Bring it on!" Lucy screamed as she sent the most powerful spell she could. It hit Kin in the chest. He grunted. They kept exchanging attacks until Lucy hit his wand out of his hand," Give up..." She smiled," You aren't as powerful as you thought..."
" I do not wanna hurt you..." Kin said calmly although he was raging.
" I don't care!" Lucy spat at him," Come on show me your power!" She went sarcastically towards him and tried to grab him. Kin pushed her away and screamed, " I said NO!"
Lucy looked at him and shivered as she saw and felt the rage in his eyes. She now realized what he meant by he has the feeling. Does he have same feeling towards Mike? Lucy felt tears swelling up in her eyes. She threw Kin's wand at him and run off.
" Lucy..." Kin started.
" Go away you monster!" She screamed and could hold the tears anymore. When she was gone Kaee came up to Kin.
" What the fuck was that?...." he said calmly, but he was getting a bit furious.
" I don't know...I have a bad feeling about this guys and she kept trying to look tough and wouldn't understand me..."
Lucy was standing in the hearing distance behind the bushes and crying. She was confused and she felt like a complete idiot.
Hope you like it. I am of to bed it is late and I am tired. Please coment because they motivate me! :P
22nd May 2009, 08:31 AM
Finally I can comment! Anyways, great update! I've been reading both of your stories since you started them, but on S2C I couldn't post, so I just lurked.
22nd May 2009, 09:56 AM
Love the story! I see that you like mine too. I updated mine finally, so if you care to take a peak, now you know. ^^
22nd May 2009, 07:37 PM
Yay, an update! I'm glad that Lucy's started taking witch lessons. I know that i couldn't be a witch since I'd feak out if I saw aghost in the daytime. Lucy,Lucy,Lucy, what are we going to do with you? You're so hot-headed that you had a magical duel with Kin just because he said that he had a bad feeling about Mike. Still, she needs a hug and a cookie. I hope Ivy will talk to her and Kin about getting along and not having magical duels at school.
22nd May 2009, 10:48 PM
Great update, Kyle! :)
Um, it is just me or is the story missing a chapter? ;)
23rd May 2009, 12:22 AM
how so? o_O
23rd May 2009, 02:02 PM
When you made chapter 28, it didn't get put into the madoober.
But still, great update! :D
23rd May 2009, 02:11 PM
Absolutely lovely story! I discovered this just a little while ago and have been looking in every so often for a new chapter. SooOooo... GREAT JOB! Keep up the amazing writing and simming! :D
23rd May 2009, 06:43 PM
Oh thanks :D I fixed that :P
23rd May 2009, 07:06 PM
MOAR FIGHTS! BAHAHA!!
Just kidding, sorry. Lucy's got a boyfriend now and Kin's the only one singled out in the group..
29th May 2009, 04:40 AM
thanks for wonderful comments every one! I will update tomorrow and we will go away from Lucy's story( I really miss Diana and Tybie D: ) also: Technically next chapter was not meant to be but I decided to make it anyways. Hope you will like it :D
29th May 2009, 06:08 AM
Can't wait to read it!
30th May 2009, 04:42 PM
Yay! The missing chapter came home :)
I can't wait for the next installment... I'm curious about Kin.
31st May 2009, 05:19 AM
Thanks. I am trying to get things done and RL is busy( we are moving within a week) I am building some stuff in the game to, so it might take a while. i apologize for the wait.
4th Jun 2009, 04:06 AM
Ugh...Finaly, it wasn't such a busy day, saw new apartment with mom-in-law, hubby and sister-in-law(who I do not like...)and I had a free moment to just play my simmies :D I've been string at TS3 picture for last couple of days, so guess what...I went out and bought it :lol: Nao I has it on the computer and it is kinda slow but hey, at least it works(It will run faster if I delete sims2, but Hell no, I love them too much) So here is update. I am not abandoning TS2, so do not worry, Stories will still be going! Any whoz...Enjoy this chapter.
Chapter 30 - His Little Secret
Diana and Tybalt were walking toward Jordan's apartment building. Tybalt looked at the parking lot and saw Romeo's car.That meant he is here and he didn't want to bump into him.
" Why did we come here again?" Tybalt sighed.
" Visit my brother, silly,"Diana smiled.It was close to the middle of her second year and she hated how classes get longer towards the holidays. She really got the chance to spend with her boyfriend, not even visiting her family. Diana rolled her eyes and looked up, admiring the building. Tybalt Stretched," ooh, he has gym! I am off to explore...See ya." He swung the door open and walked inside. Diana rang the door bell. Few minutes later a pale blond guy came down. He was wearing brown shirt and jeans and he had shiny lip gloss on his lips.
" Why hi! You must be Diana! Jordie told about you," He had a sweet voice and a feminine manner of speaking. It was obvious he was not straight.
" Uhm, Hi!" she said confused," And you are...?"
" Nick Dare! Say, the guy you date, is one lucky bastard look at you!" he waved his hand at her.
" Why thank you! Your gu..."Diana paused.
" I am not offended, you can call me gay openly..." Nick smiled.
" You have one lucky guy too then!" She laughed," Nice to meet you!"She stretched her hand for a handshake.
" Like wise. By the way call me Nickie if you want, sounds cuter..."
" Okey, Nick is fine..."Diana paused when she saw some one approaching," Hi Jordan..." She waved at her brother. Jordan's heart skipped a beat.
" Hey love," Nick leaned to kiss Jordan, but Jordan dodged," What?"
" Oh my..." Diana came to a sudden realization.
" ...God...I screwed it up. Please tell me she knows..." Nick covered his face.
" She doesn't..." Jordan looked away.
" Jordie..." Diana didn't know what to say.
" I will explain...Let's go upstairs. Nick I will be back soon." Jordan took Diana's hand and walked toward the door.
" Take your time sug!" Nick shouted as they were walking. Jordan took Diana on the roof of the apartment building. There was a lot of junk.
"Do not mind the mess," Jordan said waving at the stuff," We just put everything here that was left over from last year..."
" You had some messy people living here before you..."Diana chuckled. Jordan sighed and took out a pack of cigarettes.
" You don't mind?" He asked putting one in his mouth.
" Nope, my room mate smokes when inspiration hits him. I am used to it."
" Do you smoke?" Jordan asked offering his sister a pack.
" Naw, I tried once, tastes disgusting..."
" Good girl, It is a nasty habit..." Jordan put his cigarettes away and sighed. For few minutes him and his sister were looking at the campus quietly.
"Well..."Diana stretched.Jordan breathed out a cloud of smoke and shook the ash from the cigarette," How is school?..."
" Good," Jordan said coldly," back to the subject..." he paused," if Nick didn't make it obvious and he did, plus you are a smart girl. I am gay." Jordan breathed in from the cigarette.
" Uhm...Since when?" Diana asked," I thought you had a girlfriend..."
" I always was...and I lied..."
" You are a good actor then, I had no clue..."
" Heh," Jordan chuckled," I am sorry I didn't tell you earlier..."
" It is okey..." Diana put her head on his shoulder," Why didn't you tell me earlier?"
" You would tell mom and she would tell dad...and you know dad and gay people..."
" If you do not want me telling mom, I will not, you know me..."
" I know, but I do not want dad finding out..."
" You have to tell mom. She can keep a secret."
" NO!" Jordan shouted. Diana coughed as cloud of cigarrete smoke hit her face," Sorry..."
" Akhe, It's cool. Jordan, mom will not tell...You can trust her..."
" I don't know..." Jordan sighed and threw finished cigarette of the roof. Diana came up to him and hugged him.
" Tell me," she whispered as Jordan hugged her back," Are you happy?"
" Well yeah," Jordan mumbled.
" Is he treating you well? He seems like caring guy," She said.
" He is."
" Then you have my blessing," Diana kissed her brother's cheek," I do not mind as long you are happy together.
" Just don't tell dad..." Jordan whispered as he held his sister close.
" Secret is safe with me Jordie," Diana smiled.Tybalt came upstairs. Nick was walking next to him.
" Hey Tybie!" Diana smiled.
" Hi...It feels tense, what's the matter?"
" I hate how you know things sometimes..." Diana chuckled," Jordie can I tell him.."
" Yeah whatever, from your words he doesn't seem to be blabber mouth..." Jordan shrugged.
" Well Tybie, you meant my brother Jordan before...He used to be your dormie few years ago. This," She pointed at Nick," is his boyfriend..."
" Hi...Wait what?" Tybalt raised his eyebrow," You mean you are...homosexual?"
" Wow! You are genius!" Jordan exclaimed sarcastically.
" Whoa...I didn't know...I thought you had a girlfriend..."Tybalt mumbled," I guess you lied to hide that..."
" You are mind reader or something..."
" Look, I am cool with that as long as you are happy..." Tybalt shrugged," I don't want our friendship to go down hill because of...Uhm,"he tried to think of a better term," Your gender preferences..."
" Thanks Tyb," Jordan smiled and turned to Diana," He is a good guy, don't ever let go."
" I won't," Diana smiled," Look you gotta tell mom at least..."
" I don't know..." Jordan looked down.
" Sweetie, your sister has a point..." Nick sat next to Jordan," Mother always understand. I told my mom before she passed away and she understood that. She said as long as I am happy, she is happy for me too. Please, Jordie..." Tybalt shivered. Diana nudged him.
" Okey, I want it to be over with. Dinee, can you go with me and Nick tonight?"
" Yeah, It is Wednesday, dad is usually stuck in hospital," Diana nodded.
" We will take a train. I will met you at train station at around..." Jordan paused.
" 6:30?" Diana suggested.
" Yeah, I have class in an hour, I will be done by five and I will have plenty of time to change and such..." Nick smiled.
" Great then I will see you then. Come on Tybie let's get going," Diana took her boyfriends hand and they walked towards their house.
Jordan, Nick and Diana got at their house at round seven. Diana rang the door bell and Lucy opened. It has been about a year now since Lucy started dating and argued with Kin, her hair was still purple and she didn't seem to change much.
" Oh my! What a surprise! Come in!" She stepped aside and let them in," MOM! We have guests!" She shouted.
" I will be there in a minute," Marina shouted from upstairs. Meanwhile Diana, Nick and Jordan went into living room. Diana knelt down to play with Hershey and Nick sat on the sofa with Jordan. Lucy came up to them," Hi!"
" Hey, " Nick smiled.
" Lucy this my friend, Nick," Jordan said.
" Come on, I know he isn't a friend..." Lucy laughed.
" It is a bit obvious you are not just friends, other wise why would you bring him here..." She shrugged," You are dating right?" Nick and Jordan exchanged looks.
" We are..."Jordan said quietly.
" I don't care, just be happy. Did you guys do it yet?" Lucy asked. Diana run up to her and covered her mouth.
" What did I tell you about privet questions like that..."
" Mfffm..." Lucy muffled.
" What?" Diana moved her hand away from her mouth.
" I am almost sixteen, come on!" Marina came down stairs.
" I think we better go," Diana dragged protesting Lucy out of the room.
" Hi Jordan," Marina smiled at her son," Who is your friend?"
" Mom this is Nick, and this is what I came to talk about. He is...I...Well..." nick held his hand. Marina knew what he was trying to say.
" You and him are dating," She said and raised her eyebrow.
" Hmmm...Wow...how long have you been this..you know..."
" I always been..." Jordan looked down. Marina smiled. She knew how hard it was for him to come to her and say this. What could she do? If this is how he is happy, then she has no power or right to tell him no. She loved all her kids no matter what their preferences were.
" Come here," she told him. Jordan got up and Marina held him close.
" I do not care, as long as you are happy together," She run her fingers through his long hair," You are my baby and I will not turn away from you because you prefer guys not girls."
" Mom..."Jordan cried on her shoulder," I thought you would be like dad..."
" There there," Marina patted his back," why would I, dear? And I will not tell your father and if you ever visit try not to bring Nick with you or act casual. it is not against you dear," she addressed Nick.
" Don't worry mam, I understand." Nick nodded. Diana run downstairs holding Duncan in her hands.
" Mom, guys, look! Oh sorry to interrupt!" she tickled Duncan's tummy," Come on, say it!" Duncan giggled.
" Jodan..."he smiled and stretched his hands towards Jordan. Every one stood and watched him.
" Oh my baby! His first words!" Marina exclaimed.
" See even he approves!" Diana smiled. Jordan held Duncan and smiled.
" Hey dude," he smiled," you grew since I saw you last time. Now who is this?" He pointed at Diana. Duncan looked at his sister and smiled.
" Close enough," Diana shrugged.
" And this?" Jordan pointed at Marina. Marina Knelt down and smiled at her son.
" Maina," Duncan clapped his hands and hugged his mom.
" Yes I am!"Marina picked the toddler up," Yes, i am you little man! Now let's go it is sleepy time," Marina headed towards nursery before she left, she turned around," Nice to meet you Nick!" She smiled at him and left.
" See, I told you it won't be so bad!" Diana hugged her brother.
" Thanks, for support," Jordan smiled as he hugged his sister back.
" Any time Bro," She laughed," I am here for you!"
yeah, I know very random chapter. Originally Jordan was straight, but then thought gayness makes him cute :D Hope you like it!
4th Jun 2009, 05:26 AM
When I saw the title I (for some reason) thought the "secret" was Tybalt's. Great update!
4th Jun 2009, 05:29 AM
Nice chapter! Glad Jordan's coming-out wasn't too stressful
5th Jun 2009, 02:43 PM
Jordan's got support from his family though. It's a lot different than what would happen in RL, but I guess some are different than others.
And Lucy has a perverted mind xD Just saying.
6th Jun 2009, 12:28 PM
This was a good chapter, was not expecting Jordan to be gay.
It's cool that everyone's good about it, Lucy is just...funny. In a good way. And still sporting the purple hair I see? Braver than me :P
7th Jun 2009, 06:14 AM
Jordan's got support from his family though. It's a lot different than what would happen in RL, but I guess some are different than others.
It definitely comes down to the family. I'm sure if my brother came out, or me, or anyone we knew, my family wouldn't give a toss because we don't judge or discriminate.
He's lucky to have a family like that, I know people who are terrified of coming out because of how narrow-minded their families are. It's really upsetting.
10th Jun 2009, 06:32 PM
Thank so much for wonderful comments!
We have moved last sunday and I've been unpacking with hubby for last few days D: I will try to update in the next few days.
*hugs every one*
20th Jun 2009, 07:27 PM
Hey guys! Life has been a bit busy, my laptop had little bit of fixing done( I didn't lose anything don't panic). I have been helping husband out with a job search( it is tough) and I deleted TS3( Burn it hell, It was no worth it...EAxis could've done better) since I didn't like them anyways and 5.5 GB were too much for my little Topy to handle(yes my laptop has a name)
I will try to make the pictures tonight and post the next chapter. Thanks for patience guys!
23rd Jun 2009, 04:55 AM
Finally! God, I got into the mood for writing again. With all the stress dad-in-law is causing I am surprised I am in mood for anything. I apologize for not updating for a while. Enjoy! :D
Chapter 31 - Make Up
Lucy was sitting in Jordan's and Nick's room. Nick was playing with her hair and Jordan was cleaning the kitchen.
" You have such beautiful hair! Ugh, why did you dye it purple?" Nick said as he brushed through Lucy's hair.
" Hormones..." Lucy rolled her eyes.
" Oh, Mine were rockin' too in grade 8! Oh, My god! I died my hair rainbow colors. My teacher and parents were in shock!"
" Like a rainbow? You are a rebel!" Lucy laughed.
" Thank you now sit still, or I will accidentally dye your ear. Do you want me to trim it? It is kind of uneven..."
" Yeah, cut it short. Give me a complete make over!" Lucy shrugged.
" Short? You sure? You have a beautiful hair!" Nick gasped.
" Yes please!" Lucy nodded," Jordan isn't it great that you boyfriend is a hair stylist?"
" Eh," Jordan shrugged," I guess, not that I cut my hair often..."
" Oh please, 2 times a month you come for a trim!" Nick waved his hand at Jordan. Jordan rolled his eyes.
"Nick can I ask you a girlie question?" Lucy said quietly.
" Sure, honey, go ahead," Nick said," Look down." he said as he slightly pushed Lucy's head. She obediently looked down.
" Ow, cold..." She shivered as cold scissors pressed against her neck," I'm in an argument with a friend since grade 9. I am in grade 10 now, almost 11, we still have not talked for a while."
" My what happened?" Nick said brushing her hair.
" Well he didn't like my boyfriend..."
" That is a good reason to stop being friends..." Jordan said.
" I know I feel so stupid. We have not talked since..."
" And you are asking?" Nick asked.
" what should I do..."
" You miss him? You like him? Go and talk to him solve your problems..." Jordan said as he checked the stove.
"It is not that simple," she said,"I feel so bad. He is an amazing guy, and I destroyed our friendship because he didn't like my friend..."
" Well, crap happens..." Nick said putting his scissors aside," What color do you want? What style you want rather..."
" Brown. And whatever you think is good for me..."
" Classic Style will suit you," Nick said as he applied the dye on her hair.
" I suggest talk to him,"Jordan said as he wiped the counter.
" I hope he will talk to me..." Lucy sighed.
" He will if you ask nicely,"Nick said. Lucy just sat quietly for the rest of her make over. When Nick washed her hair and dried it he moved on to the make up," Let's see now. Peircings gotta go."
" But I like them.."
"They don't fit the style I am trying to give you. Light brown is going to suit you. A bit of lip gloss and VOILA! Watcha say hun?" He held mirror in front of Lucy.
"Is that my sister?" Jordan smiled as he looked at Lucy.
" Oh my god! I look awesome!" Lucy laughed for the first time in few months.
"Now let's go to the mall," Nick said as he helped Lucy get up," I am starvin' plus you need some new clothes to much this style..."
" But," Lucy started.
" No buts, my treat! Let's go Jordie!" He threw coat at Jordan and they walked to the car.
In the mall Nick helped Lucy pick new clothes. Jordan was watching as his sister brightened up with the change. Marina kept calling him and saying she doesn't know what is wrong with her daughter. She changed a lot, she stopped eating and she hardly spoke. He smiled as Lucy spun around in a dress in front of the mirror.
" You are spoiling my sister, Nickie..." Jordan chuckled.
" Come one now, girl need to be spoiled once in a while!" He laughed," This dress is very cute. Brings out your beautiful green eyes. I'll get it for you."
" Nickie!" Lucy gasped," I already have 5 outfits..."
" A payback is a smile on your face as you try them on. Now come on, let's pay for this and go eat. I am starving." He payed for the dress and they went towards the food court.
Later they drove Lucy back home. Lucy unlocked the door and went into the living room where she saw Marina and Dean watching some kind of soap opera.
" Sweetie, where did the guys go? I missed it.." Dean said scratching his head.
" To the hospital. Maria is giving birth and they wanna see who is the father is," Marina said in a calm voice.
" They should use condoms, those movie people. Less drama..." Dean shrugged.
" Well otherwise there wouldn't be any show..." Marina looked up as she saw Lucy walk in. Dean took his eyes of screen and looked at Lucy. He then turned to Marina.
" Who is this beautiful girl? I think Jordan dropped one of his friends here by accident..." He laughed.
" Wow. You should have told me you are going for complete make over honey!" Marina smiled.
" Well, Jordan's b..." Lucy paused in mid sentance as she saw Marina's eyes widen,"...Buddy...is majoring in beauty stuff, so he offered me a free make over for practice."
" How manly..." Dean chuckled.
" Not all male beauticians are gay, Dean." Marina nudged her husband," My hair stylist, for example, is a man, he is married and has two kids! he is not gay at all."
" I was just kidding sheesh..." Dean laughed," Love, can you make me coffee?Like usual?"
" Sure darling. Lu, come with me, you can help me and I will make you something too."
" Sure mom," Lucy walked to the kitchen with Marina. Marina put kettle on the stove and turned to Lucy," Well? It is for Mike isn't it?" she smiled. Her smiled faded as she saw Lucy frown.
"No! No! Not for that ignorant ass, who prefers watching sports instead spending time with me! Not for an ignorant sick f**k that tell nothing but perverted jokes and chases every skirt that passes by! Not..Not...Ahhh," She broke in tear.
" Lu," Marina tried to hug Lucy but she moved away," Talk to me I am here..."
" Why is it so perfect for Diana?! WHY?! Why do I have to suffer?! She has a boyfriend, who cares for her, who is ready to die for her and why do I get blessed with a asshole who cares about masturbation more then ME?!" She covered her face. Marina's ears almost melted as she heard her daughter swear like a sailor. She decided to let her vent the way she wants to rather then holding it back in," I lost my closest friend over him who was right in a first place about him and I didn't listen!"
" My, another similar story...You know that Diana had an asshole boyfriend that almost raped her before Tybalt asked her out?" Marina said calmly. Lucy gulped and looked at her mom.
" What?..." She never knew that part.
" Yes. Look Lu, as Shakespeare said, Life is a theater and we are the actors. Only difference is there is no script to follow. Every time in life there are down falls. They are always there. Don't ever let them stop you. Take them as experience. Dinee had similar problem. She didn't listen to Tybalt when he warned her. Result: Dylan going to hospital with broken legs..."
" I said to much. Anyway, you have to listen to your heart. What does your heart tell you right now?"
" To commit suicide..." Lucy said bitterly.
" No, this is your depression talking. Ignore it and listen to what your heart has to say. Come on you are a witch..."Lucy looked in her mothers eyes. She paused and closed her eyes. She wanted to be with Kin right now. She needed him more then ever.
" I have to see Kin..." She said quietly. Lucy raise her eyes and so her mother's smile which made her feel warm," Mom..." Lucy leaped in her mother's arms and cried on her shoulder.
" Shhh, it is okey honey..."Marina rubbed her daughters back," Is it your friend that was bothering you the most?"
" Mhm..." Lucy muffled.
" Go talk to him. It will make you feel better. And brake up with the ass hole of yours," She laughed," Go now before it starts raining. Come on."
" Thanks for help Mom,"She kissed her mom's cheek and run out the house dialing Kin's number.
" Yeah what?" Kin answered in grumpy voice.
" We have to talk..."
" I don't know what to talk about..."
" Please..." Kin paused.
" Eh, what the hell. Where?"
" At school. I will be there in a moment."
When Lucy got there it was getting dark and Kin was already there.
Kin turned around and he lost the word when he saw Lucy.
" Uhm, Hi..." He rubbed his neck trying to think of words," You changed a lot..."
" You didn't," She smiled.
" So uhm...what do you want to talk about?..."
" Us..." She paused. Kin stood rubbing his elbow and looking around not knowing what to say.
" I am sorry," Lucy broke the silence.
" For what?" Kin frowned.
" Not listening to you. You mean a lot to me. Your friendship is more valuable then dating an asshole..." She paused," I am breaking up with Mike..."
" If for me, don't do it. I am dating..." Kin raised his eyebrow.
" In a sense but not for reasons you are thinking," Lucy rubbed her neck," I...I..Unlike Diana and Tybalt, I see you nothing more then a friend. You are an amazing guy, just treasure the girl you have or I will have to haunt you in your dreams..." she laughed. Kin chuckled," Puck told me. Congratulations."
" Thanks," He smiled," why you breaking up with Mike?"
" He is not he one sadly...I blindly followed him when I had crush on him...I..we.." She tried to hold her tears back but she couldn't," Are we friends again?..."
" Yeah, come here," Kin held Lucy close," You can cry now..." Lucy broke in tears on his shoulder.
" I missed you!"
" I missed you too.."
" Tell me, why were you so protective?"
" I liked you, more then a friend. I was jealous. Simple." He laughed," Uhm...you are yet to have your first kiss right?..."
" How do you know?..." Kin laughed and waved his hands making light blue glow make a line.
" I am a warlock after all. You...eh...wanna do it with me?"
" First kiss?" Lucy laughed," Don't you wanna have yours with your girlfriend?"
" I only started dating few weeks ago. Rushing much? Plus it was kinda my dream back when I was crushing on you..." He paused as he caught Lucy's eyes staring at him," It is okey, you can burn me with a spell now..."
" No I won't, I'd love too." She smiled.
" What, really?"
" Uh-uh," Lucy nodded," It will be our little secret." Kin looked in her eyes and paused. He came up to Lucy and held her hands. He then closed his eyes and pressed his lips against hers. Lucy closed her eyes.
Moment seemed to last forever. Lucy felt something wet wall on her head. Kin stepped back and looked up. Lightning brightened the sky and thunder roared. Raindrops fell down on the couple.
" Under the roof, quick!" Kin held Lucy's hand and run under the roof of their school. It was pouring.
" How romantic!" Lucy shouted trying to over shout the sound of rain hitting the ground.
" Yeah, isn't it?" Kin laughed. Lucy put her head on his shoulder,"Wanna go to the cafe? I am hungry.."
"Sure, just tell me one thing before we go: Promise me, we will stay best friends for ever?"
" Yes, I promise. Now let's go, my car is behind the corner." Kin held Lucy's hand and they run out under the pouring rain to the car.
Hope you like it guys! Please comment!
23rd Jun 2009, 07:46 AM
Daww, how adorable. :D The makeover is great, too!
23rd Jun 2009, 08:02 AM
I think your writing is getting better, but to be honest I would like to see a different direction for Lucy, rather than playing out what had happened with Diana.
I don't know where this is heading, so I can't say that with certainty, but at the moment it just feels a bit stale.
23rd Jun 2009, 08:15 AM
It is similar, but not the same trust me. Out come is different.
23rd Jun 2009, 12:51 PM
This was SO CUTE, and Lucy looks great with her new hair :)
Like danirawr says, this could be a little boring if it just went over Diana's storyline. But, you said, it's going to have a different outcome, so great :D
23rd Jun 2009, 05:44 PM
I noticed that as I was writting it. I will spoil it: In this case they DO stay friends. unlike Diana and Tyb. No more spoilers :D
24th Jun 2009, 01:45 AM
Lucy's new look suits her, but I still like that purple hair.
I like it that they're still friends, it's like what I'd do with my best friend.
24th Jun 2009, 03:40 AM
I decided to update this, because with dad in law screaming all kinds of sh*t I just wanna get away. It is only missing 2-3 pictures, which I will add tomorrow. Unlike me, try to enjoy yourselves...
Chapter 32 - Derek
Diana went downstairs and saw Tybalt stretched on the sofa and blankly staring at the TV.
"Whatcha watching cupcake?" She asked.
" When did I become cupcake?" Tybalt raised his eyebrow.
" Just now," Diana giggled," Mind answering my question?"
" Yeah: I don't know." Tybalt shrugged," I watch whatever is on. I was working on term paper all morning so might as well watch something. Oh! On news, my grand dad officially announced I am out of the will..."
" How you know that?" Diana asked.
" I just said, from the news... I saw him in front of the camera on the stand at the town hall and he said that..."
" Yeah...He is just trying to get to me that is all. It ain't bothering me. I can live with out his will and mansion I was supposed to inherit..."
" It is not that pretty anyways..." Diana shrugged.
" My point exact...So, 'sup with you...sugar cube?...I suck at cuddly names don't I?"
" I don't mind being sugar cube," Diana laughed," and I wanted to say, Lu is coming over to talk to me, so you know, don't look like a couch potato."
" But I am lazy today..." Tybalt whined. Diana put her hands on her hips and gave her boyfriend serious look.
Tybalt glanced at her and rolled his eyes," Okie, okie mom..." Tybalt laughed and stretched. Diana poked his side and walked toward the kitchen. Tybalt rolled of the couch and followed her.
" Where is J?" He said as he browsed the fridge.
" I wish I knew that," Diana said as she poured ice tea in a cup," he has been disappearing a lot lately. I wonder where of too?..." Diana blopped at the table.
" He is a drug dealer..." Tybalt mumbled as he grabbed an apple from the fridge.
" He is?"
" Pfft, silly...Of course not, I am screwing around...What's for dinner?"
" I don't know yet..." Diana's sentence was interrupted by the door bell. Her and Tybalt went into the living room and opened the door. Joey came in with a girl who was carrying suitcases. She was dressed in black and she was very pale. She had bright red hair and dark make up. She was obviously a goth and to pale to be a Veronian.
" Hey guys..." Joey started shyly.
" Hey, who is the girl?" Tybalt said raising his eyebrow.
" This is...ehm...My girlfriend..." Diana choked on her ice tea and Tybalt's apple went down the wrong way.
" What?..." Diana said through her coughing," Why didn't you tell us earlier? How long?"
" I wasn't sure if you will accept the fact that she is a goth..." Joey looked down and nervously started fixing his nails," And just about four months now..."
" You are a freaking goth J!" Tybalt raised his voice but next second got hold of himself," Excuse me..."
" I know...but how am I supposed to know how you two will react..."
" You know how we will react? Congrats man!" Tybalt gave Joey a noogie.
" Yeah, yeah...Thanks...You seriously don't mind?"
" Joey, why would we?" Diana laughed," I assume she is moving in with us?"
" I don't mind, I will have another girl in this house at least I won't be alone..." Diana smiled.
" Let's start all over then, shall we?" Joey cleared his throat," Tybalt, Diana. This is my girlfriend, Ingrid Anderson. Ingie these are my best friend and room...house mates, Diana Michaels and Tybalt Capulet. Ingie is from Sweden. Her family moved to Verona few years ago so she is kind of new around here," Joey smiled.
" Hallo guys," Ingie waved at them and blushed.
" Hi," Tybalt and Diana smiled.
" Dinee, this calls for celebration. I am coking dinner tonight," Tybalt said.
" Sure, just don't burn anything..."
" You are still going to remember that first time I tried to cook fish..."
" Yes I will. Don't worry, Ingrid..."
" Ingie," Ingie inturupted," It is shorter and cuter."
" Oh, okies," Diana continued," Tybalt is a good cook, he just burned fish one time..."
" Blah blah..." Tybalt waved his arm at her.
" Come on, I will help you unpack," Diana smiled as she help Ingrid carry the bags upstairs," SO how did you and Joey meet?"
" Weeell..." Ingie stretched," I just came to your university, I transfered from Sim State University, I didn't know any one, so I was a bit grumpy. I tried to make friends but every one avoided me. That made me even more grumpier, I had so many friends in Sim State. Then Joey came up to me and he started the conversation with me. I thought it is another joke, like the many people before him did, so I told him to leave me alone and he said that I am too pretty to be grumpy. I said you think I am pretty? and he told me that is why he came up to me. He asked me if I am free after my class and we went to the cafe and this is how it started..."
" Aaaaw," Diana said," That is cute! Joey is a very nice guy, I've known him for ages. Also if you ever need anything feel free to ask me, alright?"
" Sure, you are very nice Diana..." Ingie smiled.
" Why thank you! And please call me Dinee, every one does."
" Alright Dinee!" Ingie giggled.
" DINEE, HONEY!" Tybalt shouted from downstairs," LU IS HERE!"
" Tell her to go upstairs!" Diana shouted back," Come on, I will introduce you to my sister," Diana took Ingie's hand and they walked out of Joey's room. Lucy smiled when she saw Ingie.
" Hi D, who's your buddy?"
" My new house mate, Joey's girlfriend, Ingrid. She is from Sweden."
" Hi, nice to meet you!" Lucy shook her hand," I used to be alternative too, but I changed to classic style."
" It suits you better if you ask me," Ingie smiled," I take cosmetology as secondary subject, so I can give you beauty tips if you want."
" Why sure! Diana I like her!" She laughed.
" Heh, well what did you want to talk about Lu?"
" Oh, I guess I should leave and let you talk..." Ingie started.
" No no, it is nothing private, you can stay. I'd actually like to know what you think too."
" Okey, let's have a girlie chatter and sit on the bed," Diana said as she stretched on the bed," Spill it out sis..."
" Well, my boyfriend Mike has been an ignorant asshole to me," Lucy said as she sat in the bed," SO I broke up with him..."
" How familiar..." Diana rolled her eyes," what did he do?"
" I was surprised but he cried..." all three girls paused and then they burst into laughter.
" What?" Diana said wiping down her eye.
" I think my eye liner ran..."Ingie said through laughter.
" Yeah he cried and begged me not to leave. He said he will change to be a better person, but I refused and said he has been ignoring me for too long so bah bye suckah!"
" Wow, good riddance, I say.." Ingie said. Something metal fell downstairs and it followed by 'Ouch!'. Diana turned her head and shouted.
" Guys, you okey down there?!"
" Yeah, Joey dropped the pot! Don't panic!" Tybalt replied. Diana shrugged and turned her head back to Lucy," what are you gonna do sis?"
" Well...before I did that, I met up with Kin adn we are friends again...and we had our first kiss..."
" Aaaw, that is so sweet!"
" Are you gonna date him?" Diana asked.
" No." Lucy said.
" Well he is already with some one, plus I don't have love feelings for him. Oddly kiss felt right..."
" What are you gonna do now?"
" Be single for now and wait, maybe the one will fall from the sky..."
" You sound hopeless..." Diana raised her eyebrow.
" yeah, I am jealous of you. You have a guy who is ready to die for you and I wasn't blessed with that..."
" You will be just give it time," Diana smiled," Hm, I think they are making cheese steak. Wanna stay for dinner?"
" No, I wanna go and meet up with Ivy. Can you drive me there D?"
" Sure, let me get car key from Tyb. I will help you unpack when I get back Ingie," Diana said as she was going downstairs.
" Don't worry about it, have fun with your sister," Ingie smiled.
" Tybie," Diana run int he kitchen and kissed Tybalt's cheek.
" Whatcha doin'?"
" Food..." Tybalt looked at Diana," You need car keys, don't you?"
" How did you guess?" Diana look at him in surprise.
" Well why else would you act all nice and cuddly?"
" Out of my love to you perhaps?" Diana smirked.
" I am just kidding," Tybalt kissed her lips," Keys are on the hook over there. Just be careful."
" Thanks and I will be," Diana grabbed the keys and went towards the car with Lucy.
When they arrived at Ivy's house. Diana's mouth opened when she saw Ivy's apartment building.
" Holy..." She gasped," Your friend lives in a mess..."
" She prefers simple living. Don't worry she has the money."
" I don't care, I just expected it to be a..well more richer looking building from the way you described her. What is that glow over there?" Diana pointed in front of them.
" That is Fafnir, her cat. A teenager trapped in cat's body for eternity..."
" Thank god you are here! She sent me out here to wait for you guys like 20 minutes ago... My tail almost fell of from sitting so long!"
" He is a grumpy talking cat..." Diana whispered.
" I heard that," Fafnir frowned. He jumped up in Lucy's hands," there better be tuna and lots of it!"
" I will ask Ivy to give you some for your patience!" Lucy cuddled the cat and walked up the porch. She knocked on the door," Come in!" sweet voice replied. Girls came in and saw Ivy sitting on the sofa. Everything in the house was glowing.
" Wow..." Diana gasped as she saw a mop zoom by her wiping the floor. Duster flew next to her head and started wiping the dust of the shelf.
" Hey hey, be polite guys!" Ivy swung her hands and all the 'cleaners' dropped on the floor," I apologize Diana, they are normally very polite!"
" it is okey..." Diana mumbled.
" Why hey there Lu! How are you?" Ivy looked at Lucy.
" I want tuna for my tiring effort of sitting for 20 minutes outside! My tail is numb!" Fafnir inturrupted.
" It is in your bowl in the kitchen." Ivy smiled.
" I am a witch don't forget that!" She smiled as Fafnir run of to the kitchen.
" What an ungrateful cat...he didn't even..." Diana started.
" THANK YOU!" Fafnir shouted from the kitchen.
" Never mind..." she laughed.
" Oh Lucy, there is some one I want you to meet." Ivy said," Derek!" She shouted. Lucy's mouth opened as she saw a light greened skinned boy come downstairs. He had beautiful green eyes and red hair. Boy paused as he saw Lucy and blushed," Lu, This is my son Derek. Derek this is Lucy!"
" Hi..." Lucy blushed as her and Derek looked into each others eyes.
" Ah," Ivy gasped," How rude of me! Diana would you like some tea?"
" Yeah sure!" Diana got the hint and followed Ivy to the kitchen. When they left Derek and lucy continued looking at each other.
" Hi..."Derek smiled," How are you?"
" I am good, you?"
" I came to spend weekend with mom." He replied and looked down," You uhm..like video games?"
" I love them!" Lucy smiled.
" Oh! I just bought this awesome shooter...you are probably more into girlie games?"
" You kidding? I love shooters! I love races too!" Lucy smiled.
" Oh that is great! I just bought a new shooter on the way here, SimDoom3. Wanna go play? We have console upstairs."
" Sure, I'd love too!" She nodded. Derek took her hand and led her upstairs. Ivy and Diana smiled from the kitchen as they heard them laughing upstairs.
There you go. I am actually only missing one picture, so I don't think I will post it. here is a picture of Derek in his teen form :
His YA version is not to different( different outfit only xD)
Hope you like this guys!
24th Jun 2009, 07:35 AM
New boytoy! For Lucy, perhaps? That was quick update!
And don't feel bad for your father-in-law. Sometimes they're just like that.
24th Jun 2009, 07:37 AM
it is a worse case here. to many details. he is a plain asshole that is all.
and thanks for the comment. I tired to hint on her future boyfriend there :D
26th Jun 2009, 10:59 PM
Hey guys, I shall update soon. I've been stuck in TF2 lately( gawd is this game awesome or what?) and didn't touch Sims 2 at all D: This story is heading to conclusion( aprox. 6-8 chapters) I am planning on sequel. Maybe. Depends on your reaction.
I guess every one is stuck in TS3 XD
27th Jun 2009, 07:39 AM
Nononononononono! Don't finish it yet! I want MOAR! :D Please?
27th Jun 2009, 12:09 PM
Not everyone is stuck on TS3! I don't even play TS3 unless the expansion comes out!
Don't end this, I love this story. If you want you can make a sequel.
27th Jun 2009, 07:10 PM
I am not planning to end this anytime soon guys. I am just saying that this story is heading to conclusion.
27th Jun 2009, 08:26 PM
I love this story :D keep it up!
29th Jun 2009, 08:33 PM
Sorry to hear about your jerk father-in-law, you shouldn't be taking any guff from him, and if he tries anything call the cops and have his butt taken to jail, so what if your mom cries, it's better than him hurting you, verbal or what have you. Can you help me with one thing? I have a story up, but I have no idea how to post a second chapter? Can you tell me how to put on/in second third and so on chapters, I have yet to get an answer and I would like to get my story going rather than be stuck on the prelude.
29th Jun 2009, 10:21 PM
you click the go advanced button and you add a chapter tittle in the tittle bar.
And we will next time he starts.
2nd Jul 2009, 06:24 PM
YAY! just got my laptop wrkning again and finally got to catch up wid ur story! diana is sooo pretty! cant wait to read more!
4th Jul 2009, 05:19 AM
You click the go advanced button and you add a chapter title in the title bar.
That took me a bit to figure it out, then duh, I found it, right below!
Yay it worked, thanks so much! I was wondering what went wrong, after I finished adding the second chapter, as I first viewed it in the thread mode, and then had a second look at it in the story mode. Now it looks just like yours with 2 chapters, thanks so much again, I had no idea how to add new chapter, now I do, thanks again. My story is called The Resurrected Tricouís if youíre interested in reading it. I donít know if you know this but you can write your whole story in Word or any other word possessor to check for spelling and grammar errs, then copy and paste it after youíre done.
4th Jul 2009, 06:24 AM
*gives KTA $100*
Your story is awesome - Have i already comented this one??
Oh well, then I will again!
This is an awesome story!!
8th Jul 2009, 02:35 AM
Hi guys! I love all your comments! I have about half of chapter 33 now so I should try and post tomorrow. I have 3 commisions to color so that takes some of my time too...
Thanks for being patient
8th Jul 2009, 10:31 AM
No worries! Update whenever you can. Looking forward to it :)
15th Jul 2009, 12:03 AM
This story is awesomee!!
I can't wait for more.
I just read the whole thing in bout' 2 hours...*looks around* Ya.
22nd Jul 2009, 04:03 AM
He's adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful work, mmkay? I love it :)
24th Jul 2009, 05:37 AM
Hey guys! I know I haven't updated in a while! I apologize for that. There has been a lot going on and I couldn't set my mind on writing. Thing got better now so I shall update both stories tomorrow! thanks for patience!
25th Jul 2009, 04:53 AM
Hey guys...it took me a month to update and I feel bad. Things got a bit better now and I should be able to update more often. I got my inspiration back too a long with my appetite. I had Vitamin C poisoning( I am not sure if that's the term, but basically, it is what happens when you have to much of it) I felt very dizzy and sick and could not eat for 3 days. Now I got my appetite back and I have been eating like a pig, which will probably cause another poisoning XD Don't worry, I will be fine. I am having plenty of green tea and water, and that made me feel better. I should listen to my husband more often. He tell me not to do something, I go ahead and do it, and end up hurt or sick...Anyways...enough about me, of to the story we go :D Enjoy!
Chapter 33 - Tutoring
Time flew by fast. It has been few years now. Jordan and Nick got engaged. Lucy and Derek who, started dating few weeks after they met, are now engaged as well, which wasn't greatly approved. Couple promised to marry right after university and Lucy is now on her 2nd year along with her friends.
Diana is on her 2nd half of last year. So are Tybalt, Joey and Ingie. Diana switched to pharmacist few years ago, because she figured that art is wonderful but might not take her too far. Tybalt however was still taking art and him and Joey wanted to open a business when they are done with university.
Tybalt jumped up as he heard the phone ringing. He run up to it thinking it was Diana, but it wasn't.
" Hello? Oh, hey Melany! I am fine. Right now? I can't. I am busy with chores...Tomorrow is fine, I will try my best if not Saturday for sure. Yeah, okey bye..."
" Melany?" Joey said after Tybalt hung up.
" Mother F...JOEY! Damn it you scared me!" Tybalt flinched. Joey raised his eyebrow and walked to the kitchen," J?" Joey sat in the chair and lit a cigarette," Silent treatment eh?" Tybalt took a cup of coffee and sat next to Joey. For few moment guys sat in silence. Joey breathed out a couple of O's and said," Who is Melany?"
" You are giving me silent treatment for this?" Tybalt chuckled.
" I didn't know cheating was funny..." Joey went seriously.
" Cheating?...OH! Oh! Oh!...I am not cheating! I am tutoring!..." Joey raised his eye brow," She is a girl from my geometry class, I was assigned to help her with improving her geometry..." Joey widen his eyes and slowly breathed the smoke out.
" I see...For a minute there I thought..." he looked away feeling like an idiot.
" I would never cheat on Diana! Are you kidding?"
" Well, I am sorry to doubt you man! So who is she?"
" Transfer. Blond, Blue eyes, bratty, annoying. Opposite of Diana pretty much."
" Diana is blond with blue eyes..."
" I mean character wise! I don't like her, but I am stuck with her till her grades improve," Tybalt said as he tossed empty coffee cup in the garbage can.
" You don't have to be stuck with her you know?"
" Extra Credit..."
" Oh," Joey sad as he finished his cigarette," Something else worries you doesn't it?"
" Eh," Tybalt shrugged," I feel wrong being around another girl even if it for school purposes..."
" Don't sweat it. You are not doing anything wrong are you?" Joey said.
" No," Tybalt shook his head.
" How about you introduce both girls to each other?" Joey suggested," This way you will feel better and Diana won't have to worry!"
" I guess. I shall try that then. Well I am gonna lay down. Diana should be home soon."
" She is home, she came back with Ingie few minutes ago."
" Oh! I missed that? well I will go say hi then!" Tybalt got up and went towards the stairs.
" Tell Ingie to come down!" Joey yelled from the kitchen.
" Coming honey!" Ingie said from upstairs.
" Well, I don't need to deliver the message," Tybalt laughed as Ingie passed by. He got to his room and saw Diana laying on the bed.
" Hey Tybie!" Diana smiled.
" Hi!" He smiled as he layed down next to her.
" There is something on your mind I know it!"
" You always know it!" Tybalt laughed," I wanna introduce you to some one later on."
" I am tutoring a girl, Melany, for extra credit in geometry..."
" Heard of her..." Diana said unimpressed.
" It is for extra credit. I feel bad..."
" as long as you are not doing anything bad with her, you shouldn't." Diana shrugged," Are you?"
" I would nev..."
" I trust you," She interrupted," I don't like the idea of some girl being around. I trust you, I don't trust her."
" I will not let anything happen. You are the only one for me!"
" I know, Tybie," Diana leaned and kissed his cheek," I will go take a shower then I will go to bed. I am tired. When do i get to meet your student?"
" Down the line. I will have to tel her as well."
" Sure, no problem." Diana smiled and disappeared in the bathroom. Tybalt looked up at the celling. He had an uneasy feeling. Something was telling him that introducing the girl to each other would be a bad idea.
Hope you like it! I am sorry, it is kinda short, but I didn't know what else to add. I promise longer chapters ahead :D
25th Jul 2009, 05:08 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
You needs to update your siggy, btw...:)
25th Jul 2009, 05:13 AM
Oh dear xD Give me a minute lol
25th Jul 2009, 06:19 AM
Give you a minute for what? :blink:
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