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beeps
7th Jun 2006, 11:09 PM
Hey everyone, Im starting a new story! Although it says "Poverty Challenge" in the subject title, I will only be using the challenge rules as guidelines. That means that there will be some different and "illegal" things about the story which do not exactly follow the rules of the challenge (For example: If my sim kiddies want to go to college, they shall go to college). But ALL MONEY RULES are the same. The Kilo Family started out with only $100.

So here is The Kilo Family Poverty Challenge!

Introduction

This is Khai Kilo. Khai has always been somewhat of a flower-child and has always embraced the whimsical side of his personality. After four years at Academie Le Tour, Khai graduated with the highest of honors. After moving back to Summerset, Khai looked high and low for a place to call his home. When he finally found the perfect place to start his life, Khai spent a couple of weeks trying to settle back into Summerset and into a whole new life as an adult.
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Chapter 1 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=432925&postcount=10) | Chapter 2 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=434300&postcount=22) |Chapter 3 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=436604&postcount=33) | Chapter 4 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=437776&postcount=43) | Chapter 5 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=439779&postcount=54) | Chapter 6 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=440127&postcount=59) | Chapter 7 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=440239&postcount=62) | Chapter 8 Part 1 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=440623&postcount=66) | Chapter 8 Part 2 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=440624&postcount=67) | Chapter 9 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=442124&postcount=81) | Chapter 10 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=442374&postcount=86) | Chapter 11 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=443388&postcount=100) | Chapter 12 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=444231&postcount=104) | Chapter 13 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=444380&postcount=118) | Chapter 14 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=445654&postcount=127) |
Chapter 15 Part 1 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=447532&postcount=134) | Chapter 15 Part 2 (http://www.sims2community.com/showpost.php?p=447533&postcount=135)

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princessfairybread
8th Jun 2006, 02:06 AM
Great start - you've got me intrigued. Looks like this is going to be a good story :D

beeps
8th Jun 2006, 02:40 AM
Princess...
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to feedback. I will take this as an invitation to continue my story! The first chapter should be up shortly! ;)

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Tixi
8th Jun 2006, 02:43 AM
yes please do continue
i love hippie-folk ^_^

zizismommy_SC
8th Jun 2006, 02:49 AM
I love this challenge. I did it myself. I can't wait to read more.

pickagun
8th Jun 2006, 02:54 AM
About time. Awesome! A hippy type!

beeps
8th Jun 2006, 03:05 AM
*smiles super big* Hey thanks for all the feedback everyone! The Hippie look is awesome, dont you think? ;)

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pickagun
8th Jun 2006, 04:44 AM
Was it all Maxis content?

beeps
8th Jun 2006, 04:54 AM
Was it all Maxis content?

All but the tie-dye shirt

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beeps
8th Jun 2006, 05:34 AM
Chapter 1

Here is a small, closer look into Khai Kilo's recent past...

Well, Khai was always the quiet type. He never spoke up in class, but he was always a top A student. His disposition was one of strength and tenderness, ambition and hope. Khai's mother and father wanted nothing more than to raise their son to follow in their "natural footsteps." But Khai never felt as though their lives and their beliefs were very important. That's why Khai decided to attend college at Academie Le Tour. He spent most of his free time on the bubble blower.
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So when Khai graduated with the highest of honors with a degree in Biology, he moved back to Summerset and set up a life for homself which brings us back to the present. After only a few days, Khai buckled down and looked in the paper. He found a job in the medical field and quickly proceeded to take the job. In fact, it wasn't long after Khai was promoted all the way to Cheif of Staff, fulfilling a lifetime want. Yes, Khai acheived the forever platinum status only a few days into adulthood. He felt great.
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It was because he felt so great about his accomplishment that he started spending more and more time outside enjoying the long summer days. Khai loved spending time outside... In fact, he spent most of his life outside as a young boy. Hippie parents, remember? Anywho, it wasn't until that fateful Tuesday that he met her.
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Khai and Dagmar hit it off well, and the two started seeing each other regularily when Khai would make it a point to sit outside every time Dagmar would deliver his mail. So the weeks flew by and the two love birds finally found themselves falling in love with each other.
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Khai and Dagmar exchanged the sweetest of words day after day. About a week after they fell in love, Khai kissed her for the first time. They both smiled into the small kiss, and Khai couldn't believe the overwhelming feeling he had in his heart as he held her close.
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Dagmar pulled away and smiled dreamily into Khai's eyes. He was her dream man. Not only was he ambitious, Khai was so loving and cared so much about her. Dagmar thought to herself that this could be the man who could change her past romance aspirations into family aspirations. That night when Khai dropped to his knee, Dagmar was too happy to speak.
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Shawnee_SC
8th Jun 2006, 08:14 AM
I love what has already been written, looks like it will be a great story!

Tixi
8th Jun 2006, 10:53 AM
oh this is my favoriate challenge story so far
i love it!
i never normally like male founders, but i love Khai

nckw
8th Jun 2006, 12:18 PM
wonderful story as always
keep goin

hockeystatqueen_SC
8th Jun 2006, 04:49 PM
Great job!
I did this challenge before, and it was really tough! :)

LuteFanBoyNick
8th Jun 2006, 05:27 PM
Very nice but I feel sorry for Khai. Dagmar is a romance sim!

beeps
8th Jun 2006, 06:47 PM
Tixi... Well Im so happy that you are growing fond of Khai. I loved him from the moment I created him, and I knew that I just HAD to incorporate him in a story.
Lute... I know Dagmar is a romance sim, but its strange: She is SO in love with Khai that she hardly ever as any romance wants in her boxes. Its usually always something having to do with Khai!
And everyone else... Thanks so much for reading. I have gotten so many comments on this story I dont know what to do with all of them! (But please dont get me wrong... I LOVE them all ;))

Anywho, thank you to everyone who has given this story a 5 star rating... I SO appreciate it! Its about 1:00 in the afternoon here now, so the second chapter should be up sometime this late afternoon to early evening :)

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greenmtx
8th Jun 2006, 08:27 PM
I love what you have so far. You are a great writer! I can't wait to see what happens with Khai and Dagmar :)

pickagun
8th Jun 2006, 11:20 PM
Great story! Once again I'll bookmark this story

beeps
9th Jun 2006, 01:17 AM
Great story! Once again I'll bookmark this story

Hey pickagun thanks so much! I always love to hear readers making a point to mark my stories. Its makes me smile :)

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pickagun
9th Jun 2006, 02:36 AM
You deserve it. Can't wait for next update.

beeps
9th Jun 2006, 03:08 AM
You deserve it. Can't wait for next update.

*blushies* Thank you very much.

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beeps
9th Jun 2006, 03:31 AM
Chapter 2

Dagmar couldn't have been more happy than she was the moment that Khai asked her to be his wife. It was like Khai could see nothing other than Dagmar's beautiful face shining in the moonlight when he asked her, and he knew that there wouldn't be one, single day that he would ever regret asking her to be his. Khai was on cloud 9.
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When Dagmar eagerly accepted Khai's proposal, she moved into the home. She brought with her a good chunk of money, so the two recently-engaged love birds decided to add onto Khai's small abode. Since in the past, it was just him living in the home, there was only one small bed and not nearly enough room for even a small table and chairs. But with their money now combined, they built another small wing onto their home, including a brand new little car.
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When Khai had quit his job from being the Cheif of Staff at Summerset Hostiptal, he decided that it was time to buckle down and start the family of his own that he has always wanted. The night that Dagmar returned home from her job, Khai met her outside to slip a small, simple wedding band on her finger, making Dagmar his wife.
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Dagmar returned the action by slipping a matching wedding band on Khai's finger. They smiled lovingly at each other before sealing the marriage proposal with a meaningful kiss. When they broke apart, Khai remembered that he and Dagmar would be able to WooHoo. Finally!
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Needless to say, Khai was happier the next morning than he had been in a LONG time. Dagmar and Khai could not seem to keep their hands off each other, whether it was a fleeting touch or WooHooing. On their days off, they usually found themselves in each other's arms.
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As you can see, Khai is a little more cleaned up. Dagmar had told Khai that he needed to cut his hair and was annoyed that hid beard made him look like an old man. Khai visited the local barbar shop and did as his wife wished. He liked the look... Plus it wasn't as scratchy. The new, cleaner look definitely increased Dagmar's want to WooHoo...
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They WooHooed on every spare occation, which made for an extremely happy and blissful Khai. Dagmar felt as though her life was so on-track now that she was married to Khai that she quit her job as a mail carrier and got a job in the Military career track so they could start making more money. This move turned out to be right on time as Dagmar felt her stomach expand as she stood from the couch.
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Khai felt as though he was about to burst when he layed eyes on the tiny bump under his wife's shirt. They clutched onto each other as they shared a congratulatory hug on their new soon-to-be addition to the family. Khai was so nervous and excited at the same time that he put his extreme cleanliness to the test as he cleaned nearly everything in the house!
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Throughout the last couple days of her pregnancy, the General or Summerset called Dagmar and invited her to stay home until the baby was born. The two soon-to-be parents were thrilled that she would get some time off before and after the baby was born. During these last couple of days, Dagmar felt as though she was the only person in Khai's life. Her heart completely melted every time Khai would lean over and gently rub her big belly as he sang lightly to their unborn baby.
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Only 12 hours after Dagmar had gotten the phone call from the General was when she started to go into labor...
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pickagun
9th Jun 2006, 03:37 AM
Wow. Chapter two and already pregnant! How many sim days did it take?

beeps
9th Jun 2006, 03:41 AM
Wow. Chapter two and already pregnant! How many sim days did it take?

To get pregnant? It only took them two tries until Dagmar and Khai heard the baby music...
I luff that tune! :)

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beeps
9th Jun 2006, 08:51 PM
Any more comments about chapter 2 anyone? I always love to hear feedback of any kind... It helps keep me motivated to write and post more ;)

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hockeystatqueen_SC
9th Jun 2006, 09:12 PM
Chapter two was very good. :)
I like hearing about Poverty Challenge Sims' children and the such. :anime:

Jasmin_SC
9th Jun 2006, 09:15 PM
ooh i really wanna see the baby!

beeps
10th Jun 2006, 02:09 AM
ooh i really wanna see the baby!

*giggles*

Having babies is my FAVORITE part of the family-centered game play :) I wonder if it will be a boy or girl...???

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greenmtx
10th Jun 2006, 03:30 AM
*giggles*

Having babies is my FAVORITE part of the family-centered game play :) I wonder if it will be a boy or girl...???

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It is my favorite part of the game too...I go crazy sometimes! I love the genetics :)

I hope they have a blonde boy to start out with!

beeps
10th Jun 2006, 03:34 AM
I hope they have a blonde boy to start out with!

Omg *squeals* I had NO IDEA how much I love hearing predictions and hopes about my stories until I just read this! Im so super excited to hear what others think/want and to see how the poll turns out!

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beeps
10th Jun 2006, 03:56 AM
Oh jeez you guys!!! The poll is exactly 50/50... How exciting! :yippee:

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Tixi
10th Jun 2006, 02:03 PM
haha everyone seems to think it will be a girl
including me!
please update!

beeps
10th Jun 2006, 08:20 PM
Chapter 3

Dagmar was simply glowing as she held up to the light her newborn baby. Khai clasped his hands together and watched as his beautiful wife held their tiny bundle of joy. Khai smiled when Dagmar asked what they should name their new baby, and Khai simply said "Parker."
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Baby Boy Parker
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Khai was so excited about having a baby that he went to work immediately on finishing the nursery. He had been working so hard on it lately that he nearly missed the birth of his son if he hadn't have hear Dagmar's screams in the room next to him. The two proud parents stood in the door of the nursery and smiled at the tiny room.
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The next couple of days flew by in a flash. Being parents sure was tough! The General of Summerset had told Dagmar to take some more days off until she was feeling 100% again, so Khai decided to get a temporary job in the Artist career track. Because he had graduated from college, he was able to get a very high-paying job right away which helped the family a lot.

Dagmar loved staying at home with baby Parker. She thought he was the cutest little baby she has ever laid eyes on. Khai was happy to see little Parker's reddish eyebrows and big brown eyes... He had gotten something from each of them.

Every day after Khai returned hom from his job, he rushed in the house to give Dagmar a quick peck on the lips and cuddle with his new baby boy. This was the life he had always wanted. Dagmar would turn baby Parker towards his father, and Khai would stand and talk to him very often.
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When baby Parker's birthday rolled around, Dagmar set to work on baking a birthday cake for their little one. Although Parker wouldn't be able to eat the cake while he was a baby, they knew he would enjoy it after her transitioned into a toddler. Happy Birthday Parker!
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Khai, Dagmar and Parker had the time of their lives on the day of his Birthday. Dagmar knew that Parker would take after his father as he was already nearly walking and crawling over everything! Khai chuckled to himself when he found little Parker on top of the kitchen counter and walked over to take him down before Dagmar saw and got to worried.
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beeps
10th Jun 2006, 08:21 PM
Hey everyone... Sorry this chapter is so short. I have been having some slight problems with my computer, but chapter 4 will be longer hopfully. But please enjoy!

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greenmtx
10th Jun 2006, 10:17 PM
YAY a boy!!!!! He is sooo adorable and I love his name :)

pickagun
11th Jun 2006, 01:29 AM
YES! It's a boy! Looks good too. I've seen some toddlers have...interesting traits

Tixi
11th Jun 2006, 02:11 AM
oh i was wrong
but Parker is adorable. it's so good when a legacy kid is good looking.

beeps
11th Jun 2006, 03:24 AM
Thanks so much guys and gals! I am loving this family, and the next chapter should be up by tonight or tomorrow morning :) Look for it!

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HunterGreen
11th Jun 2006, 05:57 AM
I know Dagmar is a romance sim, but its strange: She is SO in love with Khai that she hardly ever as any romance wants in her boxes. Its usually always something having to do with Khai!

I love Dagmar! She married a sim in my poverty challenge, and had really beautiful children. She also had nearly all her skills maxed, and the ones that weren't were the easy ones (creativity and logic), she was the resident cook and repairperson in the house. The romance sim aspect of her didn't get in the way too much with my family either, she mostly focused on things for her husband, the most trouble I had from it was when she got a crush on her sister-in-law's husband.

Shawnee_SC
11th Jun 2006, 07:51 AM
Parker is so cute and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

beeps
11th Jun 2006, 03:20 PM
HunterGreen... I think Dagmar makes very beautiful children as well. She is one of the only (IMO) good-looking NPCs I have come across whilst playing the game. Thanks for reading!
Shawnee... That is SO awesome to hear that you cant wait to read the next chapter! I should be putting it up this morning sometime (Its 9am where I am).

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beeps
11th Jun 2006, 03:54 PM
Chapter 4

After Parker's Birthday, things for Khai and Dagmar started to get back into the normal pace. Khai was unemployed again, but Dagmar was doing rather well climbing the ladder in the Military career track. Khai was so proud of her. Dagmar came home one evening with the biggest smile Khai has ever seen on her face because she had personally received a promotion from the General of Summerset himself! She was simply beaming.
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Because Dagmar was gone so much with her new promotion, Khai was rather happy that he was unemployed at the moment so that he could stay at home and raise Parker. He taught little Parker many things, and in no time at all Parker was nearly walking on his own!
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In fact, because Dagmar was gone for such long shifts Khai had to manage Parker on his own. For never being a dad or even watching someone take care of a little toddler, Khai though he was doing a pretty good job. He even learned how to make Macaroni and Cheese for Parker! Yes, things were going well.
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The day that Dagmar came home to find little Parker walking was another big day in the young couple's life. Khai could barely stand it as Dagmar jumped up and down trying to keep her secret to herself. Finally she put up a finger as to motion 'hang on' and then it happened...
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Dagmar was pregnant!!!

Khai was so overjoyed about his lovely wife being pregnant that he almost forgot about little Parker's Birthday! Yes, today he would be transitioning into childhood. Khai was so proud of his little man (that's what he always called Parker), and he decided to wow both his little man and Dagmar with his baking abilities. Khai baked his first ever layer cake for Parker's Birthday. Mmmm it was good too!
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Dagmar was getting tired earlier now because she had the baby to think about, so she waddled off into her room to slip into her jammies while Khai and Parker talked about anything and everything. As Dagmar slipped into her jammies, she thought about how hard it would be now to keep up her new busy hours at her job and still take the time to spend with her two children. But she was determined to make it work.

She waddled back into the living room where Khai was putting away all the dishes and Parker was sitting on the couch watching TV. Dagmar sat down gingerly next to her son and reached over, pulling him close to her. She knew that she wouldn't be able to do this when he was a teenager! She loved her son. And she loved Khai. Life was going well indeed.
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The next couple of days went by rather fast. Dagmar was put on maternity leave AGAIN (which she did not like very much), and Khai went out and got a temporary job cleaning houses in the meantime to support her and the kids. Parker won the spelling bee at school, and the two parents threw him a little party to show him just how proud of him they were.

After they had eaten a filling meal of hotdogs and french fries, Dagmar stood up quickly. She eyed Khai and he stepped in front of her. He asked if it was time, and Dagmar nodded her head. The two asked Parker to wait in his room while Dagmar gave birth to their second child. A healthy... baby... BOY!
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Lucas Kilo
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greenmtx
11th Jun 2006, 06:38 PM
YAY!!! Another boy with another great name! I really am loving this story :)

beeps
11th Jun 2006, 06:48 PM
YAY!!! Another boy with another great name! I really am loving this story :)
Yay! Im so glad to hear that someone enjoyed the last chapter I posted :) Im like sitting here waiting for people to comment! Haha... I need a life.

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Kalorii
11th Jun 2006, 07:01 PM
Smashing work again, BP :smash: I liked the whole hippie angle from the beginning. I think it gives Khai a whole different kind of personality. Now I wonder if any of his kids will take on his old habits... :gjob:

beeps
11th Jun 2006, 09:23 PM
Now I wonder if any of his kids will take on his old habits...
I think someone sometime down the road will take over his old habits... *mysterious music plays*

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beeps
12th Jun 2006, 05:04 AM
***BAD NEWS!!!*** :rage:

Im so freaking upset right now guys! So my lame-o computer decided not to save a ton of the pictures I had taken from like a whole days worth of playing different families (The Kilo Family included), so Im missing some pictures of the boys in their different ages... I hope everyone can bear with me and still read the story with the pictures I still have.

Sorry again guys! New chapter should be up tomorrow...

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richdude_SC
12th Jun 2006, 05:22 AM
Aww, don't you just hate computers. Anyway bp, great story, I love reading it.

~Squash-buddy-ven~
12th Jun 2006, 12:50 PM
Sorry to hear about the pics, but this is just a GREAT story, so I'll bear with you of course.. I love this story.. :)

Panique
12th Jun 2006, 01:56 PM
Yeah! Aww, why won't Dagmar have a cutsie little girl? Nothing wrong with Parker and Lucas though^^

beeps
12th Jun 2006, 06:45 PM
Thanks for understanding everyone! Just let me eat some lunch, and Ill get to work on the next chapter :)

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Kalorii
12th Jun 2006, 06:52 PM
Awww... That really sucks, boolPropped. Gosh darn computers.

:cranky:

I'm sure the pictures you do manage to take will be just fine though. :anime:

beeps
12th Jun 2006, 07:39 PM
Alright... again please understand that many of the pictures I was going to include from now on were accidentally deleted (grrr), but please enjoy anyways!

Chapter 5

Khai and Dagmar spent the next couple of years together in complete and utter bliss. Khai was back working in the Artist career track as a canvas stretcher while Dagmar was making loads of money as an officer in the Army. The two boys, Parker and Lucas, were growing up so fast!
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Parker was enjoying high school and had a lot of friends, although he never really dated much in school. He spent most of his time trying to make friends as popularity was very important to him. Lucas on the other hand was flourishing in many areas of his life but was struggling with school. He said that while he was in class there was always something else on his mind besides school.

Khai and Dagmar did their best to encourage Lucas to try harder in school, and Lucas certainly tried his best. But everyone always knew in the back of their heads that Lucas would never be a top A student. They never told this to Lucas, but rather they praised him for all his good, average grades. As long as he was trying his best, Khai and Dagmar were alright.

Because the boys were getting so big, Khai went to work on his off days building a new room for his sons. Parker was really into science fiction, and Lucas was into whatever Parker was into. He really looked up to his older brother. So Khai built their room and painted the walls black so the boys could pin up all sorts of posters all over their walls.
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The boys loved it! Khai was so proud of himself and felt even better when Dagmar said congratulations after she looked the room over. Khai had a smile plastered on his face for days after he had finished the boys' room. Because of his permanent good mood, Dagmar suddenly felt something familiar happening...
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The two lay in bed talking about their boys and wondering if they would be able to afford the new baby when Dagmar stood from the bed. Khai looked over and jumped out of bed, taking a stance behind his wife. Dagmar clenched her fingers into little fists and tried to control her breathing as she gave birth to her third child.
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Khai took a deep breath and walked over to his wife who was holding their new bundle of joy in her arms.
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Would Khai and Dagmar finally get a little girl? Is the third time really the charm??? Find out next chapter!

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hockeystatqueen_SC
12th Jun 2006, 07:42 PM
Suspense! Ahh! :)

beeps
12th Jun 2006, 07:45 PM
Suspense! Ahh! :)
Well... if you ask nice enough I may just post another chapter... :)

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richdude_SC
12th Jun 2006, 08:27 PM
Is it a girl? Oh well, I'll have to wait for the update like everyone else.:blink:

hockeystatqueen_SC
12th Jun 2006, 08:35 PM
Well... if you ask nice enough I may just post another chapter... :)

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Ok...pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? :anime:

beeps
12th Jun 2006, 11:25 PM
Chapter 6

Welcome Baby Matthew!
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Khai and Dagmar welcomed their third son into the family with cheers and hollers. They were thrilled to have another bundle of joy, and the two boys were equally as thrilled. Khai took baby Matthew from Dagmar's arms and gently placed him in the crib before sitting down on the couch. He talked to Dagmar for a while about the new baby, and they both decided that Khai would keep his job to earn some more money for the family.
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When the boys came home from school the day after their baby brother was born, they made sure to set aside some time to play with little Matthew. Lucas was still too young to hold his little brother, but Parker took baby Matthew outside so the three brothers could bond a little before dinner. They sure were good to little Matthew.
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It was that night that Parker decided to talk to his father about college. Because Khai was a knowledge sim himself, it was really important that all of his children get a good education. Parker told his father that he wished to become an influencial man in Politics, and Khai was happy with this.

Having a life in Politics was sometimes hard, but Parker was a hard worker. Khai knew that he would do well in college and acheive his dreams rather easily. Parker talked to his father about going to Academie Le Tour, which pleased Khai greatly because that was the college where he graduated from. Khai hugged his oldest son, and Parker walked over to the phone to call about scholarships.
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Khai thought about everything that Parker had told him. His som was growing so much, and Khai couldn't have been more proud. He snuggled into bed after talking to Dagmar about everything and kissing his three boys goodnight. He was certainly going to sleep well tonight.
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Another chapter tonight???

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hockeystatqueen_SC
13th Jun 2006, 12:13 AM
Great job!
Another chapter, please? :)

beeps
13th Jun 2006, 12:15 AM
Great job!
Another chapter, please? :)
I suppose... ;)

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beeps
13th Jun 2006, 12:28 AM
Chapter 7

Dagmar woke up very excited remembering that her oldest son was leaving for college in the evening, PLUS it was baby Matthew's Birthday! She walked into the bathroom to take a shower where she found Khai shaving. Dagmar's eyes popped out of her head. SHAVING?!?! She could hardly believe her eyes as she watched Khai's face starting to show...

Khai smiled through the thick, foamy shaving cream. He told Dagmar that he thought it was time for a change... Plus the boys had been teasing him about looking too old for his age. Dagmar chuckled and hopped in the shower after Khai was finished.
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The boys liked his new look, and Parker said that he actually looked his age. "Plus dad, the hippie look is totally out of style," Parker added with a giggle. Khai just laughed along, wondering if any of his children would ever look like he did in his college years...
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Khai and Dagmar rushed into the little room when they heard baby Matthew gurgling. Parker was there holding him, and something started to change. Matthew started to giggle, gurgle and shake a little bit until Parker tossed him into the air. Happy Birthday little Matthew!
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As the commotion of little Matthew's Birthday subsided, the whole family sat down for a while and talked about Parker leaving and starting a whole new life in college. When the taxi pulled up, Parker kissed his parents goodbye and then kissed his two younger brothers on the cheek and walked out the door. Parker drove off to Academie Le Tour, leaving behind his parents and his two younger brothers.
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pickagun
13th Jun 2006, 12:29 AM
3 boys now! Agh now I wish I had the Uni EP...

beeps
13th Jun 2006, 12:35 AM
3 boys now! Agh now I wish I had the Uni EP...
*smiles* I really really enjoy sending my simmies off to college. I cant stand it now when some simmies only have 4 want boxes... Thanks for reading ;)

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beeps
13th Jun 2006, 05:51 AM
Chapter 8

When Parker arrived at his rented property in Academie Le Tour, he immediately called the registrar to declare his major in Economics. Because he wanted so badly to climb the Politics career ladder, he thought that this major would help him achieve that quickly.

It wasn't before long that Parker had gotten into the swing of things, and he was really starting to enjoy college. Although he was getting perfect A+ grades, he felt as though something was missing. Until he met her, that is. Her name was Laci...
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Laci was honestly the most beautiful woman that Parker had ever seen in his entire life. He grew very close to her very quickly, and he started to invite her over between their classes. It seemed to Parker as though Laci was very comfortable around him. They even played together and had pillow fights like they were kids again! It made college very bearable.
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Back at home, Lucas was already a teenager! He was getting along fine in High School, but definitely not as well as Parker did was he was in High School. But Khai and Dagmar realized that all their boys were going to be very different from each other, so they knew that they must treat them differently. Lucas was enjoying hanging out with his skater friends, and he was still into science fiction like Parker had been.
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Lucas was also certainly flourishing with the ladies in his class. There was one girl in particular that he liked named Gretchen. The two love birds would get together nearly every day, and they soon were going steady. Lucas felt like a million bucks when he was with her. He even had his very first kiss with Gretchen.
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Well, Parker soared through college with flying colors and was only two days from graduating from Academie Le Tour with the highest of honors, just like his father. Laci was graduating at the same time as Parker, and they had grown very fond of each other. They had kissed for the first time the other night, and it was really all Parker could think about.

When Parker got home, all he could think about was inviting Laci over so she could meet his parents, but he wanted to get settled first. The first thing that Parker noticed was that little Matthew was a child now! He was so handsome and was looking more and more like Khai and Parker every day.
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Khai and Dagmar knew that Parker would be coming home soon, so they worked on expanding and redecorating the house. They totally redecorated their bedroom...
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And built Parker a room of his own...
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They decided not to do too much with Lucas and Matthew's room since they liked it just how it was.
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After Parker had unpacked and everything, he talked to his parents about Laci. They seemed so happy for their son which made inviting Laci over so much easier. Parker kissed his now elderly mother and father before dashing to the phone and calling up his girlfriend. Yes, Khai and Dagmar were certainly proud of their son.
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Parker waited outside for his girlfriend to come over. He was excited and nervous all at the same time because he didn't know what his family would think of her. But he knew that he loved her, and that was all that really mattered. Parker smiled as he saw Laci, and he quickly pulled her in for an excited kiss.
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beeps
13th Jun 2006, 05:52 AM
Chapter 8 - Continued

The first time Khai and Dagmar met Laci, they liked her immediately. Who couldn't? She was sweet and so very friendly, and she was absolutely darling. Parker knew that this was the girl that he was going to marry. Later that night, Parker dropped to one knee and asked Laci to be his wife.
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Laci accepted, of course, and later confessed to Parker that she had always known that she would marry him someday. Parker couldn't have been more happy than he was a that moment. Laci moved in promtly after Parker had proposed, and later that week they were married.
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The whole family was doing so well in everything that everyone was surprised to see the look on young Matthew's face as he stepped from the bus and looked over his report card.
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JUST KIDDING!
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Matthew was always trying to fool everyone! He had gotten his first A+ which he and the whole family was extremely proud of. The same day Matthew got his first A+ was also the day that Parker's helicopter flew into the street to pick him up for work. He was now the co-Mayor of Summerset!
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Khai was proud of the accomplishments Parker had made and was about to be proud of one of Dagmar's accomplishments as well. He stepped into the front yard to greet his wife as she got out of her carpool. She walked over to him, nodded and gave him a great big hug. She was promoted to Astronaut!
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They were so happy that they had finally risen out of poverty and were living a very steady life. To celebrate, Dagmar cooked a turkey dinner for everyone with sweet cherry pie for dessert. Parker and Laci retired to their bedroom to have a little "fun" before bed...
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When Laci woke up to feel her husband's arms tightly curled around her stomach, she smiled and snuggled into the pillow again. All she could think about was starting a family with Parker and loving him and their children forever. She tightened his grip around her waist, until her eyes popped open and her stomach flipped. Oops! Too tight! She jumped from the bed and ran to the bathroom.
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But why was she really throwing up???

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Tixi
13th Jun 2006, 06:59 AM
awh yay a baby ^_^
i really like Laci, and i love how you've worked so well on giving all the boys different personalities.

lethifold
13th Jun 2006, 06:59 AM
Oooh. I've been lurking in this thread for ages, and I really like this story. Keep up the great work!
I hope Laci and Parker's first born is a girl.

beeps
13th Jun 2006, 07:06 AM
Tixi... Thanks so much! Ive seen so many stories (espicially long challenges) where I cant tell any of the kids/grandkids apart because theyre SO much alike :doh But thank you for the lovely comments! Pssst Laci is a townie from University Academie Le Tour. Shes pretty, eh?

Bloochi... How honored do I feel knowing you came out of lurkdom for lil ole me? *blushies* Thanks so much for reading it! I heart comments, and it makes it SO much more fun to post chapters one after another when I know people are reading and liking my updates :)

Thanks for the comments mah peeps!!!

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lethifold
13th Jun 2006, 07:20 AM
Wow...I didn't know townies came that pretty. She's gorgeous.

P.S. Update soon...if you can.

richdude_SC
13th Jun 2006, 07:39 AM
Great update! Laci looks amazing!! ;)

beeps
13th Jun 2006, 07:41 AM
richdude... I know! Its amazing what a little make-up and custom hair will do to a regular ole townie!
Bloochi... Ill update as soon as I get some more lovin' on my story ;)

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msjasmine9113
13th Jun 2006, 01:23 PM
I love this story! You capture the feeling of the story with the pictures. Keep up the good work and I hope that Laci and Parker will break the boy chain with a beautiful girl. :)

~Squash-buddy-ven~
13th Jun 2006, 03:47 PM
WOW.. I love this story more and more... I, too, hope that Laci and Parker's first born is a girl.. *Hoping for an update real soon* :)

Jasmin_SC
13th Jun 2006, 03:50 PM
Woah, I adore this legacy ^.^ -lurks in thread-

Kalorii
13th Jun 2006, 07:12 PM
Awww... I'm so happy for Parker. Laci's a great girl (and good looking to boot!). Perfect way to bring in generation 3. :anime: Dagmar and Khai look awesome as elders. Still so young (even if it is at heart) and in love. :valentine Great chapter, BP. :yippee:

beeps
13th Jun 2006, 10:07 PM
Hey thanks for all the FB guys and gals! I would LOVE to update right this very second, BUT I have to get off to work again... Ill update in a few hours. Watch for it! :)

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lakepontchartrain
14th Jun 2006, 01:14 AM
Another mostly-lurker come out of lurkdom to say that your story is great! Keep it coming!

I hope Parker and Laci can have a boy to carry on the family name, but there were so many boys that they'l probably end up with all girls!

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 02:04 AM
Another mostly-lurker come out of lurkdom to say that your story is great! Keep it coming!

I hope Parker and Laci can have a boy to carry on the family name, but there were so many boys that they'l probably end up with all girls!
Thanks so so much for reading! It will all be revealed in the next chapter ;)

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beeps
14th Jun 2006, 02:35 AM
Chapter 9

Congratulations Laci!
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Thats right, Laci was pregnant with her and Parker's first child. The bump in her stomach had suddenly popped out one sunny afternoon, and Laci was a little relieved that everything was alright with her - She was just pregnant! She called Parker while he was at work, and he was so excited that he cut his day short to congratulate his wife.
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Laci was the center of attention for the next couple of days, but she made sure that Parker was the first one to talk to their unborn baby. She smiled and watched as Parker leaned down to gently carress her stomach as he whispered hello to the little guy... or girl.
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Laci was a little moody for the next couple of days, but everyone in the house tried their best to make her life as stress-free as possible while she was still pregnant. Dagmar especially knew how important this was in order to give birth to a healthy baby boy... or girl. Matthew, who was now a teenager, loved to poke and sing and rub Laci's belly. He was a very gentle young man.
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It wasn't a day later that Laci felt her stomach tying up into knots... She knew it was time. Ironically, everyone but her and her husband, Parker, were away from the house, so the two had a private and rather quiet setting for the birth of their first son... or daughter.
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Parker ran over to Laci and stood right by her side, coaching her until the last of her pains were gone and the baby was about to arrive. Parker watched with a smile on his face as his first child was born, and Laci couldn't have been happier either. Everyone, meet little Nathan Kilo.
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It was ANOTHER boy! Parker was very pleased to have had a son, and he jumped up and hollered for joy as Nathan opened his eyes for the first time and looked at his father and mother. Laci smiled and handed baby Nathan over to his father so that Parker could cuddle with him.
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Dagmar was the first to arrive home after her shift, and she made a b-line for the beaming new parents. She finally had her first grandchild! She gave Parker a small kiss on the cheek, so as to not wake up sleeping Nathan, and congratulated Laci as well.
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Dagmar let Parker set baby Nathan in his crib so that he could sleep a little bit before everyone came home to see him. Khai and Dagmar talked to their children about baby Nathan, and said that they were so proud of the two young parents. Everything was just so wonderful!
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When Lucas got home from school, he didn't say much about the baby. Not that he wasn't happy by any means, but he was a little preoccupied with a certain someone... Yes his girlfriend Gretchen was over and was stealing away all his attention.

But when Matthew came in the house, he snuck into the baby's room and tucked his nephew under the soft blankets. He was so happy for his brother and Laci, and he literally coudn't stop talking about Nathan. When they heard the little baby, Dagmar and Matthew went into his room to steal some of his time away from his parents.
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It was getting rather late, so Matthew decided to retire to his room for the remainder of the night. He sat on his bed and thought about his upcoming basketball game. Everything Matthew ever talked about was sports, sports, and more sports. He was truly a sports fanatic!
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He would spend at least an hour every night trying to work his muscles. He even bought a brand new weight-lifting maching all by himself! He loved that machine.
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Matthew thought his arms were getting so huge that he wanted to go out and do something reballious... He got a tattoo! It was very similar to his father's but not exactly the same. He was so excited about it!
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Yes, Matthew certainly thought highly of himself...
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The night after baby Nathan was born, Lucas had decided that it was about time that he left for college. Although he really didn't want to go to college, he knew that his father would be very upset if he didn't. Lucas managed to scrape together about $2,000 in scholarships, and he was off to La Fiesta Tech.
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greenmtx
14th Jun 2006, 03:56 AM
I've been reading but haven't had time to comment. I love this story so much! I realllly can't wait to see what Nathan looks like as a toddler :) Keep up the awesome work...and they grow so fast don't they?

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 04:04 AM
greenmtx... They grow SO fast! Nathan turned out to be a very nice looking toddler :) Ill update tonite.

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greenmtx
14th Jun 2006, 04:18 AM
greenmtx... They grow SO fast! Nathan turned out to be a very nice looking toddler :) Ill update tonite.

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YAY tonight!

richdude_SC
14th Jun 2006, 04:32 AM
Great update. Matthew reminds me a lot of my cousin.

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 05:05 AM
Ok Im updating tonite, so I expect lots of FB ;)

Chapter 10

Well, the days have sure flown by in the Kilo household... Khai and Dagmar were still working nearly every day, and Parker and Laci were busy raising their little boy. They decided that they were only going to have one child, so Nathan was their first and last. Matthew was practicing more and more for basketball, and he actually won a scholarship for playing basketball at Sim State University, which was Matthew's first choice of colleges. Baby Nathan was now a toddler, and was eager to learn everything new!
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Lucas was now home from college... Oh how the years go by. Khai and Dagmar were so proud that their second son had graduated from college with his 4 year degree. The thing that bothered Khai about Lucas' college career was that he had decided to major in Grilled Cheese! This to Khai was not a high accomplishment... I mean, how much could one really know about grilled cheese? So Lucas was back home for a couple of days until Khai was fed up with his laziness...
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So Khai kicked him out.
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Barely out of college, Lucas was unable to afford much. He did, however, find a home that he could afford PLUS it was fully furnished. He knew that his father and mother wouldn't like it, but it was all he could manage at the time.
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Lucas got to work on his first ever batch of grilled cheese. He prayed that he would be able to remember everything he had learned in college so that he wouldn't screw up his first batch. Mmm there was nothing like eating a steaming grilled cheese sandwitch at 8 o'clock in the morning.
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richdude_SC
14th Jun 2006, 05:22 AM
Grilled Ceese Major? That's so funny. Seriously, I'm gonna find out if I can Major in it too.

gazania
14th Jun 2006, 07:43 AM
Yes indeed, I DO love the Grilled Cheese Major, too! I think I majored in the wrong subject at college!

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 07:49 AM
Haha I know! My major is like WAY harder than grilled cheese major ;) Thanks for reading!

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Panique
14th Jun 2006, 07:56 AM
BEFORE READING CHAPTERS 9 & 10: Oooh, I reeeally hope for a girl... *cough*calledHannelore*cough*... anyone else read QC? ;)

Anyway, I really like Laci's hair! XM Sims mesh right? Who thought a townie could look so good... psst, are you ever going to get some custom eyes/skins in the gene pool there? You can't marry a playable Sim, right...but who says they gotta be married... eheheh. Just asking. :) Looking forward to next chapter!

AFTER READING CHAPTERS 9 & 10: GOSH DARN! Another boy?! You named it after my friend :lol: Hoowee, anyway, poor Lucas! Getting kicked out of home! (Tis Lucas, right? Not Matthew?) But ehehe grilled cheese major! Is that a downloaded one? I sooo want to make a sim go through college with a grilled cheese major!

Anyway, waiting impatiently for chapter 11 :D You sure do update fast!

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 07:59 AM
SimFreak... Nah Im not looking for any custom eyes or skins in the gene pool. I have never really been a huge fan of custom skin tones, so every story from me will most likely be with Maxis skins... Its just a personal preference. Anywho, thanks for reading and taking the time to FB!

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Panique
14th Jun 2006, 08:03 AM
Nah Im not looking for any custom eyes or skins in the gene pool. I have never really been a huge fan of custom skin tones, so every story from me will most likely be with Maxis skinsGah! I never could! I am in love with my custom content.

Tixi
14th Jun 2006, 08:18 AM
i think Khai and Dagmar were a little harsh on Lucas
grilled cheese can be very...useful (ish)
Nathan is such a cutie ^_^

Panique
14th Jun 2006, 08:39 AM
think Khai and Dagmar were a little harsh on LucasYeah, definitely.

lethifold
14th Jun 2006, 08:39 AM
Another boy? Even though Parker and Laci aren't going to have another child, I hope the next sim born in the challenge will be a girl.

Panique
14th Jun 2006, 08:50 AM
Aren't they going to have anymore kids?!?!?! :jaw: NOOOO!! They have awesome genes :cry:

greenmtx
14th Jun 2006, 04:39 PM
I can't wait to see Nathan grow up (is that him waving goodbye to Lucas?)
And I'm with you on the not liking custom skins...I don't like the shiny skins...just a preference though.

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 07:07 PM
Thanks so much for reading guys and gals! Im in a posting mood today, so look out for lots of chapters! ;) Keep reading... Its nearing an end!

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beeps
14th Jun 2006, 08:31 PM
AFTER READING CHAPTERS 9 & 10: GOSH DARN! Another boy?! You named it after my friend :lol: Hoowee, anyway, poor Lucas! Getting kicked out of home! (Tis Lucas, right? Not Matthew?) But ehehe grilled cheese major! Is that a downloaded one? I sooo want to make a sim go through college with a grilled cheese major!

Anyway, waiting impatiently for chapter 11 :D You sure do update fast!
Yep, Lucas was the one who was kicked out of his house... I didnt mean to make Khai and Dagmar so mean about this, but I thought it was time for him to move out and start a life of his own instead of mooching off his parents ;) Yes, the grilled cheese major is downloaded from MTS2. Check it out here (http://www.modthesims2.com/showthread.php?t=115515&highlight=grilled+cheese).

Thanks for reading... Ill be updating shortly!

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beeps
14th Jun 2006, 08:54 PM
Chapter 11

Back home at the Kilo house, things were swinging along... But some things that were happening lately were definitely not good things. Khai had turned 68, and received a visit from the Grim Reaper.
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Dagmar was heart-broken. She stood in their room and watched through her tears as the Grim Reaper floated towards Khai and checked something on a dingy clipboard. Dagmar hung her head as Khai gently reached for the summery drink which the Grim Reaper was holding out for him.
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Dagmar stood in her empty room. Khai was gone, and she had to care for all three of her children AND grandchildren alone. She was comforted by the thought that they were getting older and getting jobs of their own. Dagmar sighed heavily and thought of what she would have to tell the children.
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On a lighter note, Matthew had now graduated from college! His scholarship he recieved for Sim State University carried him all the way through 4 years. He had origionally wanted to major in something having to do with sports, but after thinking about it thoroughly, he decided on an Economics major. It was his lifetime aspiration to become a business tycoon.

While Matthew was in college, he met someone as well. Her name was Tiffany Sampson, and she was a member of the Tri Var Sorority. She was the most beautiful girl on campus, in Matthew's opinion. They spent their entire senior year together. After graduation, they both moved into the Kilo home to start their life together.
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Dagmar welcomed Matthew and Tiffany back into the house with open arms, although her heart and head were somewhere completely different. She couldn't stop thinking about Khai. She would sit in her room and stare at their bed, thinking about all the good times they had together - intimate and other. She was definitely taking her husband's death hard.
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But Khai was certainly making the rounds around the house. Every night, his tiny urn would shake and sputter and out would pop the ghost of Khai! He would watch over Dagmar, but he was certainly not happy when he would see his children or little Nathan act out. He kept things clean even in his afterlife.
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Matthew and Tiffany were thriving in their careers. Matthew was now the CEO of a major company in Summerset while Tiffany was busy teaching 1st grader sims how to read and write. Yes, they were certainly a very happy couple, and Matthew made sure to tell his girlfriend every day how much he loved her.
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One sunny day in Summerset, Matthew returned home from a long visit to the Summerset Strip mall. He was busy picking out a gift for his girlfriend, and he hoped so badly that she would love it as much as he did. Tiffany greeted him outside. Matthew took a deep breath, got down on one knee and presented Tiffany her gift.
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~Squash-buddy-ven~
14th Jun 2006, 10:56 PM
Wow.. Great update.. I love this story... *Craving for more* :)

beeps
14th Jun 2006, 11:07 PM
Squash... Thanks so much! I will be updating throughout the day ;)

boolPropped

~Squash-buddy-ven~
14th Jun 2006, 11:16 PM
Oh cool.. Will be looking forward to read it later.. Have to go to bed, I'm beat.. Been up for 14 hours... Yiiks.. :D

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 03:49 AM
Chapter 12

Tiffany said yes! Matthew couldn't believe how happy he was as he heard Tiffany accept his proposal. She lept into Matthew's arms and they kissed through tears of joy. They grabbed each other's hand and ran into the house, busting to tell everyone the good news! Dagmar didn't say much, but she was all smiles and completely overjoyed that her son was getting married to such a wonderful woman. Little did everyone know that the reason Dagmar hadn't said much was because she was not feeling to well...
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Little Nathan didn't know what was happening as he saw the big, grey hooded man waft over the lawn and towards his grandmother. He knew that Dagmar was alright, because she was now going to be with Grandpa Khai forever. He ran his fingers through his hair and hugged his father's leg as everyone watched Dagmar dissappear into the mist.

Everyone in the house tried to keep their spirits high, especially for little Nathan. He didn't quite understand what all was going on, so they didn't want to confuse him any more than he already was. Dispite all the sadness, Matthew and Tiffany tried and tried for a little bundle of their own. And one day...
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Tiffany was pregnant! Matthew was surprised at how many times it took them until she finally became pregnant, but he was overjoyed as well. Laci was talking to Tiffany almost every day about having a baby and then raising it. It was definitely hard work. Therefore Tiffany thought it was best to put her career on hold for the moment until she had more free time to work after the baby was born.

Everyone in the house was buzzing about the gender of the baby. Since there was such a long line of boys in the Kilo family, everyone was wondering if the string would be broken or if they would in fact have another baby boy in their midst. Tiffany was not worried about the gender, but Matthew was hoping for a little girl.

The day that Tiffany's bump grew to its final stage was the day that both Parker and Laci grew into elders. Their transition went well, and the now elderly couple were happy that they were still together after so many years.
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Nathan was now a child and was on the very edge of becoming a teenager. In fact, he was only one day away from his birthday! He was a bright young boy, and he always did very well in school. He was interested in Art and actually won an Art Award for an outstanding painting of a family portrait. Parker and Laci were very proud of him.
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Laci was flourishing in her career, moving from the proud owner of her very own restaurant to a celebrity chef all in one afternoon! Parker had reached the top of his career some time ago, and he was very proud of his wife's accomplishments. Plus, Parker thought she looked so cute in her little shiney uniform!
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Matthew was SO excited that the birth of his first child was so near that he got to work building a small nook onto his and Tiffany's bedroom for the little baby. He still wanted a little girl badly. In fact, he was so excited about having a little girl that he built the nook and furnished it completely in pink and frills... just like a baby girl would want.
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It was time! Matthew ran through the house towards a screaming Tiffany. She was clutching her stomach as she let out another scream, and Matthew asked if he could do anything. Tiffany just shook her head and told him that the baby was almost here. With a whoosh and another tiny scream, Matthew and Tiffany became parents for the first time in their lives. Matthew took his little baby from his wife's arms and looked at her.

"It's a girl," she told him.

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Kayla Kilo
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greenmtx
15th Jun 2006, 03:52 AM
Awww YAY a girl finalllllllllly!!!! Good thing too...or else that room would have to be redone...

I can't believe Parker and Laci are elders already!!!!

ma._SC
15th Jun 2006, 03:53 AM
Yay! We finally have a girl!

Great story, boolPropped. This is really good and I love your storytelling.

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 03:56 AM
Yay I know, its a girl!!! *jumps up and down with greenmtx and ma.*

You know what the crazy thing is... I did NOT alter the genders of these babies in any way. Sometimes Ill exit w/o saving until I get the gender I want, but I totally didnt do this at any time in this challenge! So many boys!

ma... Thanks so much for commenting and reading my story. Im glad to hear that you like my writing style too *blushies*

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hockeystatqueen_SC
15th Jun 2006, 04:25 AM
Great job!
Parker took his little baby from his wife's arms and looked at her.

Don't you mean Matthew? :confused:

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 04:31 AM
Don't you mean Matthew? :confused:
Oops :doh *edits*

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hockeystatqueen_SC
15th Jun 2006, 05:00 AM
No problem. :)
It just confused me for a minute there.

ma._SC
15th Jun 2006, 05:13 AM
Great job!

Don't you mean Matthew? :confused:

Oops :doh *edits*

boolPropped

Haha! It's that stupid red hair. XD

At lesast Parker's got a different hair color now so you won't be confused. lol

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 05:19 AM
True dat ma.! *snaps fingers and bobs head*
Mkay... To update or not to update, thats the question.

boolPropped

Shawnee_SC
15th Jun 2006, 05:23 AM
I love your story so much and finally a girl! I cannot wait for more of your story!

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 05:24 AM
I love your story so much and finally a girl! I cannot wait for more of your story!
Hmmm... So is that a hint that I should update tonight???

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msjasmine9113
15th Jun 2006, 05:33 AM
It's a girl!!

ma._SC
15th Jun 2006, 05:34 AM
UPDATE!!! I wanna hear more about baby Kayla!

[heh. If I remember far enough back, I named one of my baby dolls Kayla. But I can't remember that well. ^^,, XD]

Shawnee_SC
15th Jun 2006, 05:48 AM
Hmmm... So is that a hint that I should update tonight???

boolPropped

I would not mind hearing more tonight!

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 05:59 AM
Here's the last chapter for the night... Its a "cheesey" one! ;)

Chapter 13

Well time was sure flying by in the Kilo household... Nathan was now a teenager and was loving every second of it! The day of his birthday, Parker let him take the car out to the Summerset Strip to pick up some new duds. He bought a few new things including a cell phone and handheld game. He was always on that thing! Yes, Nathan was growing up to be a fine looking young man.
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Baby Kayla was now a toddler! Matthew and Tiffany were so proud of their little girl... she already knew how to walk! Although she was walking and nearly speaking, Tiffany still stayed home days to teach her daughter new and exciting things, which Kayla always seemed to enjoy. But if Tiffany didn't keep a close eye on her, everytime she would turn around she would see Kayla reaching into her toybox and pulling out a new toy. Matthew came home every day with a new toy for her.
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Kayla was loved dearly by the women in the Kilo family. Not to say that the men didn't love her, but she got the most attention from the women who knew what a refreshing suprise she was when Tiffany gave birth to her (and not another boy). It seemed as though no one could get enough of her!
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Remember Lucas? Well, he was certainly dissappointed by the news of his parents passing away, but he was happy to hear about Matthew getting married and about having a new neice. Lucas' home was on the outskirts of Summerset, so he wasn't able to make it over to the house that much anymore. The family missed him of course, but he was trying to make a life of his own as well.

And especially after hearing the news about his parents, Lucas was driven into a deep depression... He went a little nutso! Because his love of grilled cheese had increased dramatically over the years following his college graduation, he couldn't seem to get any other part of his life in order - He was ALWAYS worried about perfecting each and every one of his grilled cheeses.

One bright and sunny day, Lucas met a young woman named Brandi. She was so baurtiful, and Lucas was immediately attracted to her. He knew that because she was still a teenager, he would have to be extremely careful getting to know her as to not upset her parents. It felt so good for Lucas to talk to someone else who was interested in the same things as he was.
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He promptly invited Brandi inside for an afternoon snack, and she kindly accepted. Lucas rushed into the kitchen and started his famous grilled cheese.

'Make sure the cheese is evenly distributed between the two pieces of bread so you get a taste of cheese and bread in every bite...'
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'Flip the sandwitch at least three times on each side so that there is not an abundance of burn marks on either side...'
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Perfection! Just like they were every time.
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Brandi smiled as Lucas handed her a plate of grilled cheese, and she complimented him on how tasty they were. Lucas was only about two bites into his first grilled cheese when he started to feel a strange little pain in his stomach. He never felt this way after eating grilled cheese... He LOVED grilled cheese! The pain intestified, and Lucas fell to his knees.
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Brandi, who was eating her grilled cheese outside on the patio, came into the house when she heard Lucas sputtering out something. She looked at the floor to see Lucas slumped on his knees, clutching his stomach. When he reached his hand up to her in an act of helplessness, Brandi was frozen. SHe didn't know what to do.
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After the cries of both Lucas and Brandi, there was nothing left in Lucas' apartment but a steaming plate of perfectly cooked grilled cheese.
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msjasmine9113
15th Jun 2006, 06:07 AM
Poor Lucas...:(

Tixi
15th Jun 2006, 09:38 AM
ah!! how did Lucas diE!!

finally a girl :) im so glad. they needed a born-female

Panique
15th Jun 2006, 09:54 AM
Blargh What How Did He Die?!?!!?

~Squash-buddy-ven~
15th Jun 2006, 10:26 AM
Yay a girl... I'm so excited.. And poor poor Lucas... How did he die..? I wanna know.. :) Can't wait for the next update..

lethifold
15th Jun 2006, 11:58 AM
Yay! Finally, a wittle girl!

Poor Lucas...he had a whole life of grilled cheese ahead of him. :P

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 05:55 PM
Ok everyone... Lucas had caught a cold from his house being so filthy all the time (stacks of old grilled cheese and whatnot), and all he wanted to do was eat grilled cheese! I tried to make him go to bed so that he could get some rest, but NO! he wanted grilled cheese. Literally halfway through a sandwitch, he got up, put his plate on the floor and keeled over. *tear* Sad I know... But I didnt cheat, it just happened.

Anywho, thanks everyone for reading! I will be updating this afternoon with the last chapters! Look out for it, will ya? ;)

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Kalorii
15th Jun 2006, 06:36 PM
Awww.... Poor Lucas. :( Sometimes Sims can be so stubborn even if you're doing it all for their own good. :eviltongu Khai and Dagmar are so sweet, too. They'll be missed. Great updates again, bP :D

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 11:01 PM
Thank you so much for reading everyone! Next update will be up shortly.

boolPropped

beeps
15th Jun 2006, 11:33 PM
Chapter 14

The news about Lucas' death was a shock to everyone in the Kilo house. Parker was most effected by the terrible accident, but he tried to stay as calm and collected around everyone as possible; he didn't want everyone to be more sad than they should. Plus there was still young children in the house who didn't completely comprehend what was going on. Parker would retire to an empty room and cry softly as he remembered his younger brother.
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Matthew never spent a whole lot of time with Lucas. When they were younger, he was always so involved with sports while Lucas was so involved in girls. Matthew remembered how much he loved Gretchen and wondered what ever happened to her... He was pretty torn apart by Lucas' death.
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Although things were hard, the Kilo family pressed on. Matthew was determined to help his daughter, Kayla, grow up well. He wanted his wife to know that everything was alright. That was one reason why Matthew didn't tell her that he was demoted to from co-Mayor of SUmmerset to the President of a major company in the neighborhood. He didn't want to upset her.
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As Matthew and Tiffany had some "fun" in their room that night, Kayla was busy thinking. She was now a child and had a very serious and mature outlook on life even at such a young age. She already knew that she wanted to attend college where her grandfather went, and she knew that she wanted to do something in the medical field when she was older.
Yep, she had her whole life planned out.
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As the long days dragged on, things were changing around the Kilo house. While Laci was still working hard as a celebrity chef, Parker had decided that he was too tired to work anymore (taking into consideration his old age and weak bones). Parker therefore decided to retire from a life of crime.
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Nathan bleached his hair and went off to college. He was attending La Fiesta Tech like Lucas had years ago, and he was loving every minute of it! The thing Nathan loved most about college is how loose college girls are. In fact, he never saw one of them drink more than two drinks and (most) were always ready to go! Nathan loved his life.

Things were also happening between Matthew and Tiffany. Matthew thought that everything was going alright with him and Tiffany, but she had been acting so strangely lately. Matthew would sometimes drive Kayla to school just so that he could spend a little time away from his wife, thinking that maybe she just needs some time alone. He hoped that nothing was wrong...
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hockeystatqueen_SC
16th Jun 2006, 12:24 AM
Ooh!
Drama! :)

Kalorii
16th Jun 2006, 03:25 AM
I feel bad for poor Parker and Matthew :cry: In many ways, I think that Tiffany's new baby is just the pep up that the family needs right now. :yippee:

beeps
16th Jun 2006, 03:38 AM
Kalorii... I have a feeling it is too! ;) Thanks for reading and taking the time to FB.

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ma._SC
16th Jun 2006, 02:05 PM
It should. Unless Kayla's gonna get jealous. XD

Alaqua-Chiquita
16th Jun 2006, 06:34 PM
:lurk: The story is great.

beeps
16th Jun 2006, 08:04 PM
Hey thanks everyone for all the FB... I think I will be posting the last chapter of this story shortly! Look out for it and please let me know how you liked it! :)

boolPropped

beeps
17th Jun 2006, 03:23 AM
Chapter 15 - Final Chapter! Part 1

Matthew smiled from ear to ear as he heard his wife tell him that she was going to have another baby. Matthew reached for her and hugged the living daylights out of her, being careful of her tummy of course. The couple couldn't be happier!
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The next couple of days went by pretty quickly. The fast pace of the Kilo's lives had taken recently lead to Matthew slacking off slightly... He was late to work several times because Kayla was late for school. Every time Matthew would have to take her to school, he would be a little late for work. Therefore, Matthew was demoted.
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Tiffany reassured Matthew that everything would be alright. After all, they were still living with Parker and Laci both of whom had jobs. Matthew was determined to get his title back and worked extra hard. Tiffany, on the other hand, was working hard to stay healthy.
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When Tiffany's belly popped out, she and Matthew decided that they had better tell Kayla that she was going to have a new baby brother or sister. When the two sat down and talked to her, Kayla responded very well. She was actually very happy to have someone to spend her time with. Matthew gently rubbed his wife's stomach and smiled to her, knowing that this baby was just the thing to get the Kilo household back into the swing of things.
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In the meantime, Nathan was flying through college at an alarming pace. He was at the top of his class and never needed to study! He always had a Friday night party ot his dorm, and everyone on campus loved him and his free lifestyle. He was nicknamed "campus bigshot" shortly after his Junior year.

Nathan had always wanted to know more about his grandfather, Khai. He thought that majoring in Philosophy would be a great way to try and get a handle on how Grandpa Khai worked and saw different situations. He was always so carefree - Nathan loved that outlook.

While Nathan was away studying, Tiffany was taking care of the house and watching her daughter, Kayla, grow up so fast. It was soon less than a week until Kayla would grow into a teenager! But first, Tiffany decided to have her second child...
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Welcome Polly Kilo! It's a girl!
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The Kilo household was thrilled to have another baby girl in the house! There was always such an abundance of boys in the household that it was so nice to see a little baby girl looking up at you with those adorable little eyes. Baby Polly was adorable, and everyone in the house was so happy to be around her. She barely ever cried, and when she did it was so soft and only for a moment.

Even Kayla loved her. The family was a little concerned with the possibility of Kayla feeling a little sad because someone new was going to steal her attention, but the two sisters seemed to get along splendidly. Nathan was welcomed home from college with a degree in Philosphy. Parker and Laci were so proud of their little boy.
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When Nathan moved back home, they redecorated Khai and Dagmar's room for Nathan. So Nathan moved out of his room which Kayla then moved into with her little sister, Polly. Nathan was very happy with the spacious bed he was given...
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Most of the time, when Nathan was not working at the gas station, he would just lie around and think about things.
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And more times than not, he was not the only one on the bed...
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beeps
17th Jun 2006, 03:24 AM
Chapter 15 - Final Chapter! Part 2

The days and months and years flew by, and Polly was now in college with her older sister Kayla. They were having loads of fun being in college together, and they have grown to be best friends over the years. When Polly was merely a toddler, she was practically glued to her older sister Kayla.
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Over the years, the Kilo family lost both Parker and Laci within days. It was hard to cope with more death, but the family held on strongly and get through it. As mentioned before, Kayla and Polly were attending college at Academie Le Tour, where their grandpa Khai went as well. Kayla was majoring in Medical Biology while Polly majored in Philosophy.
Kayla
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Polly
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Throughout everything that had happened in their lives - promotions, pregnancies, deaths, graduations, and more - the Kilo family had always seemed to come out on top, defeating the odds and diving into every situation with strength and preseverence. They certainly were a blessed family.

The Kilo Family
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Peace. Joy. Love.
But mostly Peace ;)

THE END!!!

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hockeystatqueen_SC
17th Jun 2006, 03:41 AM
Bravo!

I love a happy ending. :)
Are you going to do another Poverty Challenge story in the future?
Or how about an Asylum one! :anime:

beeps
17th Jun 2006, 04:02 AM
Are you going to do another Poverty Challenge story in the future?
Or how about an Asylum one! :anime:
Well... I wouldnt say no to another Poverty Challenge ;) but whats an Asylum Challenge? Something you made or are there official rules???
Anywho, thanks so much for reading and FBing throughout the chapters. I really appreciate it! :)

boolPropped

hockeystatqueen_SC
17th Jun 2006, 04:12 AM
It can be found here:

http://www.sims2community.com/showthread.php?t=13587

And a bunch of others can be found here (http://forums.thesimsresource.com/archive/index.php/f-512-p-1.html). :)

Edit: And some more here (http://community.livejournal.com/thesims2/1816041.html).

pickagun
17th Jun 2006, 04:48 AM
Dilute the Ugly Gene how bout?

So Many Women, So Little Time Challenge sounds good too.

Kalorii
17th Jun 2006, 04:50 AM
:hippy: Peace, man!

haha... I just had to grin when I saw Nathan. To be truthful, I was smiling for the whole chapter though it was bittersweet. I loved the Kilo's and I can't thank you enough for sharing their story with us, bP :bow2:

I give you this: :1st for your great story! :clap:

beeps
17th Jun 2006, 04:52 AM
pickagun... I did the "Dilute the Ugly Gene" one. It turned out to be pretty fun :)
Kalorii... Thanks so much for the kinds words *blushies*

Ok guys, I already picked out what Im doing for my next story ;) Thanks for the ideas tho!

boolPropped

beeps
17th Jun 2006, 10:11 PM
No more comments? :shrug:

boolPropped

Jasmin_SC
17th Jun 2006, 10:18 PM
ooh, i love this story ^.^, it was such a good looking family and everyone had their own personalitys! Bravo! Maybe make it into a legacy ;D heheh, The furthest i got with a legacy was 3rd generation ahah! anyway, loved this story ^.^ (Excuse me if I have tupos, my light ahs gone out and im zttypeing in the dxark and my dazzds notyt home till latzer)

beeps
17th Jun 2006, 10:26 PM
Thank ya Jasmin! Im glad to hear that you enjoyed it :)

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Tixi
17th Jun 2006, 11:06 PM
awh!!
*massive thundering applause*
that was fantastic boolPropped!!!
pitty it was the end, but im glad that it was such a nice ending

beeps
17th Jun 2006, 11:18 PM
Thank you Tixi, and I really appreciate all the FB :)

boolPropped

lethifold
18th Jun 2006, 01:51 AM
Yay! Happy ending. I loved this story, but I wish it hadn't finished...

beeps
18th Jun 2006, 02:29 AM
Hehe thank you Bloochie :) I had loads of fun writing it as well.

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janey83_SC
18th Jun 2006, 06:42 PM
I really enjoyed that story, great job.

jenny
18th Jun 2006, 07:30 PM
what a great story! I loved it:D

beeps
18th Jun 2006, 07:42 PM
janey... Thanks so much for reading it and taking the time to comment :)

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~Squash-buddy-ven~
18th Jun 2006, 09:21 PM
I love this story so much, it's sad that it ended, but I'm glad it was a happy ending.. I love those.. Hope that you're gonna do more stories in the future... You're really good at it.. :)

greenmtx
18th Jun 2006, 10:01 PM
This was an amazingly well written story. I can't wait to see more from you!

hockeystatqueen_SC
19th Jun 2006, 05:17 PM
This story has inspired me to write my own Poverty Challenge story. :)

beeps
19th Jun 2006, 09:49 PM
This story has inspired me to write my own Poverty Challenge story. :)
Omg, that makes me feel AWESOME! Im so happy that you will be writing a story of your own, and count on my FB whe its posted ;) Thanks again for reading!

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beeps
22nd Jun 2006, 03:42 AM
After-Challenge Extras!

Family: Kilo
Founder: Khai Kilo
NPC Founder: Dagmar (mail carrier)
Total Family Members: 10
Total Family Funds: $371,201

Ghost Scares:
Khai scares Laci - 2
Khai scares Matthew - 1
Khai scares Tiffany - 2
Khai scares Nathan - 1
Khai scares Polly - 4



Ghostly Photos!

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g221/Simbols/Kilo%20Family/88.jpg
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hockeystatqueen_SC
22nd Jun 2006, 03:57 AM
:laugh:

Those pics are so funny!

Sashamerosha
6th Jul 2006, 05:55 AM
Aww!! I loved this story, although Im a little.. ok a lot late. I like Lucas and Matthew. They rock.

Im off to read your third. *runs away*

beeps
6th Jul 2006, 06:22 AM
Hey, its better late than never ;) Im really happy you enjoyed it!

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SofieAmalieN
25th Jul 2006, 09:36 AM
What a great story and such wonderful pictures!
I just found the story this morning (it's 10 am here). It's very very very good!

beeps
25th Jul 2006, 07:41 PM
Thank you so much Sofie! Its so fun to see members dig up one of my past stories and leave FB on it. I like to know they are still being appreciated! :D

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discordkitty
26th Jul 2006, 02:30 AM
Ack, how did I miss this story by you?! I read the first post and it sounds great, now to finish it. Hopefully it will tide me over until the next update of unborn dreams!

beeps
26th Jul 2006, 05:06 AM
Awww thanks discord! I love that people are reading my old stories... :giggler:

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