Neurologhyst Career - Test

[monosagrado]

:new: Translator Found! THanks! :new:
:new: Spanish 100% File Attached :) :new:
:new: Uploaded in .txt for 100% compatibilty :D :new:

Hi! First of all, i'm cataln, so i don't know a lot of english. I'm making a "Neurologhyst" career... But i'm making the descriptions and the cards with the google translate. BUT i thing i know more that the translator...
So, is there any person who's interested in help me to translate the .doc of the "conceptual ideas" of the career?
I hope any person helps me... thanks!
PS:
:alarm: I will upload the .doc when i end it. I need fast atention, because until it isn't translated, i can't make the "SimPE" part... Well, it isn't a translation, it's a correction ;)
Thanks! :anime:

[levini]

Well Monosagrado .. What Language do you need it translated from and to ?? I can do from Spanish to english (and vice versa) and I can try from Italian (still learning) to english (and vice versa)

[monosagrado]

Oh, thanks!!! If that's possible, from spanish to english... I have got the .doc in "Google Translate" english, but i'm going to re-translate to spanish, and then i attach it to the post... When i upload it, i send you a PM ok???
Thanks!

[monosagrado]

Ok, there's the .doc! Please, please, please! Translate ALL to english and upload again to ModTHeSims... Thanks, thanks, thanks! I hope you can translate it and MTS Stuff publish the career :mod: . Thanks again!
:Pint:
:alarm: THE FILE IS ATTACHED AT THE MAIN THREAD! :alarm:

[monosagrado]

oooh myyyy!!!
Very good ;)

[levini]

Ok Dear .. after taking a lot of time .. I translated all the chance cards along with fix the Grammar and fix the spanish translation.
I am uploading the Rar with both the main one (which you already have ) and the chance cards

[monosagrado]

T-H-A-N-K-S!!!!
Who's the best?
Levini's the best!

[monosagrado]

:alarm: Atention! :alarm:
The career is ended... I hope it goes good, but i need to test it... if works... I upload it!

[monosagrado]

Hi! For the people who read my last thread, you know i'm developing a Neurologhyst Career. Now I ended it (i think) . I need testers because it worked for me, but i don't know how can it work in other computers, other configurations and other ep's and sp's.
Please, test it and upload your feedback :help:
(There aren't screenshots... that's a career ;) )
Ah, yes, some very important things:
1. There aren't work outfits. I'm going to put them that days that modthesims is down.
2. I only made it in english. I DON'T KNOW if in games in other languages it work. That's the thing for that i want to the people test it.
3. I wrote it in spanish, but Levini (http://www.modthesims.info/m/3410892) is the 100% translator to english. So, the text is semi-wrote by him. Please, think i didn't do the possible errors in the translation :faceslap:
Thanks, i hope today i get one feedback (pfff)
:mod:

[xNikki]

Eh wait..
Why don't you post this in your old thread?

;)

[HugeLunatic]

No reason to make two posts for the same thing, you can just edit the title if your looking for testers rather than translators.

Merged threads.

[monosagrado]

There are the file. Just copy it to the Downloads folder, enable TestingCheats and test the career. Put your feedback here (if you read this, because i think the people don't read old threads :( )
:deal:

[ShineShine]

It would be better to correct the "Translation" to "Test" in the title.
Anyway, I'm gonna test it now :)

[ShineShine]

I couldn't view any "Neurologhyst" in my job-overwiev. :(
Don't know why not...

[levini]

I think you forgot the Title and description of it ..
@shine shine .. Is there a blank thing in the job overview?? If so thats the problem ..

[Josepina]

Perhaps you could correct the spelling of neurologist.

[monosagrado]

I think you forgot the Title and description of it ..
@shine shine .. Is there a blank thing in the job overview?? If so thats the problem ..
How can i fix it? I followed a tutorial... there don't say where can i put the name :(

[ShineShine]

Soo...
Tried again. Game loaded fine.
Okay... it's strange in my Game, I'm sorry. I now found your career: It was one of mine "Police"-careers :faceslap: I don't know why I have some career names twice.
I have attached some pictures to make it easier to understand (translations in description)

So I will test the career now. Are there chance cards?


:here: Review

1.
http://thumbs2.modthesims.info/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211005_Numero_Uno.jpg
Picture: Make background (white) into transparent. What does it show? (Anything related to the career?)
I don't know if the payment is realistic, but what about adding a body skill as required? In my opinion you need to be strong for promotion.

2.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211015_Unbenannt_Dos.jpg
Prep is a short version of Preparer, isn't it? :) Change it.
Spelling correction: "You have to prepare scans...", "...and mechanic skills to handle disasters."
It would be nice, if "tidiness" would be required. Scans need to be cleaned. Maybe that.
Ideas for the text: Some happiness about the promotion, the better payment, the better worktimes, some description why "Scan Preparer" is so much better than the thing before and what you want to reach.

3.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211007_Numero_Tres.jpg
Spelling error: "..., haven't you?" or is it a "do you?" I'm not sure, English isn't my native language, sorry.
More text please. High requires from you are made... New, much stuff to learn, a lot of nice other students (gain some friends for promotion? Maybe gaining some creativity or charisma for being better accepted? For better performance? "Just the real beginning"... etc.

4.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211008_Numero_Cuatro.jpg
Title: Intern - what? (Internist? ...)
More text: You have chosen your specialization - happiest day ever! You're now so near your goal to be a Neurologyst (or however it's written, I'm sorry)
Do you have some person who teach you? Some charisma will do fine - some strength (fitness), too. And of course the logic skills, because you want to be pretty smart. That shining genie between the others. Etc. Be creative and be brave to try to put some story in it :anime:

5.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211017_Unbenannt_Five.jpg
Great idea for the text... but you're fixed too much on logic and mechanic. It's maybe okay here if the others are more varied.
Don't
do
to
much
spaces.
Don't
break
sentences.
Hope this showed what I meant. :lol:

6.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211010_Numero_Seis.jpg
Interns = another shortening. It's okay, when you say for what it stands. Like it's a nice "how-to-call" in the hospital :)
Same like 5: You're breaking the sentences with "enter".
Spelling error: "...and continue..."

7.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211011_Numero_Siete.jpg
Ph.D. stands for? :)
Some nice story here...

8.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211012_Numero_Ocho.jpg
"Be aware that there's no problem" - if there's one, you would need to be creative, to think of some quick solution. You're already clever (logic) enough. If there's no way out maybe you can save yourself with a lot of charisma. Better there's no problem, but you always need to be prepared.
(Collect some friends by the way?)

9.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211013_Numero_Nueve.jpg
You're talking as a professor? You need charisma! And maybe creativity to make your lessons sooo wonderful and beloved.
(It's a small "teaching" than "Teaching")

10.
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/2/5/8/2/6/4/6/MTS2_ShineShine_1211014_Numero_Diece.jpg
Great! Some happiness! You've reached your ultimative dream since childhood (or whatever)
Why are you working in the night?
But actually you have nice times for working: just three times. Wow. Some explanations why?
So and maybe you will have gained some more than only logic and mechanical skills.

Sorry if I missed something or said something wrong. Because of the pictures everyone can now make their own comments about your career. :D

[levini]

Thanks shine shine dear .. Microsoft word broke them like that .. I can fix the errors up as soon as this computer comes back on .. Hopefully tomorrow monosgrado i can sit down and fix it .-.

[monosagrado]

Thanks shine shine dear .. Microsoft word broke them like that .. I can fix the errors up as soon as this computer comes back on .. Hopefully tomorrow monosgrado i can sit down and fix it .-.
Ok, i hope you can fix the translation errors.Also, i need help from some experts, because i don't know how to change the icon and how to put a name for the job... In a week (if it's possible) i fix it :D

[ShineShine]

http://modthesims.info/showthread.php?t=433027
Don't know if the links over there are any help for the name, but there are some useful links collected about the icon.
:)

[monosagrado]

Ok, when Levini fix the translation i will upload with the new icon and the name (if i can change the name ) :D

[levini]

.. I'm a no go .. The computer is fried .. The lightning storms were too much for it

[monosagrado]

Well, we stop the process by the moment :(
Totally, now i play The Sims 3, (:new:) so... i don't need the career for more time (well, when your computer will be operative, try to fix it, please)