Laura Branigan Sim

[MaryseDynasty121]

Hiya, so before Showtime came out, I decided to try my hand at a celebrity Sim, and chose my favorite artist, the late Laura Branigan. I've worked and tweaked on her for at least a week now, and am happy with the results, and am wondering if anyone can give me feedback. (I updated this 1st picture) http://thumbs2.modthesims.info/img/3/1/3/7/0/0/7/MTS_MaryseDynasty121-1280463-Laurabust2.jpghttp://www.sweetslyrics.com/images/img_gal/8437_Laura+Branigan+Laura.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1987/laurafull.png I tried to make her everyday look like what she wore on the cover of 'The Very Best Of Laura Branigan' http://www.israbox.com/uploads/posts/thumbs/1185721881_laura_branigan_the_very_best_offront.jpg Her hair is The Bridgette by The Sims Store (http://store.thesims3.com/productDetail.html?productId=OFB-SIM3:37477&categoryId=&scategoryId=11979&pcategoryId=&ppcategoryId=&gender=female&startAt=0) , her skintone is Shiny Skin by Goldeneyes (http://www.sexysims2.com/showthread.php?t=173599) , and her eyes are Eyes by Pavic (http://www.modthesims.info/download.php?t=460365) . Her top is from base, pants from Fast Lane Stuff, and Base shoes. She may need Johna's Sliders (http://www.modthesims.info/download.php?t=378416) although I don't believe I used them.
So, any feedback would be appreciated :)

[porkypine]

Hi,

It may just be sims poses and idiotic grinning but her eyebrows should point downwards toward her nose and slightly hook the arch past the outer edge of her corneas.

The septum of her nose doesn't protrude that much. I'd nip it just a little. Bring her nostrils down a little.

Her upper lip is very thin and bowed. I don't know if you could model that without a slider.

Her lower lip is also thin

Her eyes are a bit narrower and not so rounded. You need to move the apex a little or level it out.

Good job so far. It is difficult to model faces. :bunny:

[MaryseDynasty121]

Thanks for the advice, here's her new face. :bunny:

[SimmyRN]

Please bring a reference photo -- preferably with a neutral expression and looking straight ahead -- down with each revision. It makes it so much easier to compare! Good start!