Spicy Roll

[singing_Noel]

Tuna, wasabi sauce, and rice...all rolled up in a seaweed wrap. This recipe probably best explains this love story. However, if you're still confused, you can always see it for yourself too.

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[Lang_ea]

What? I can't believe nobody's commented on this yet~ I just read this before falling asleep and I really think it's a great start. The styling of the speech bubbles and wording is wonderfully funky, and the detail and the shots are really cool! So far the characters are really good as well, thanks for the upload, it was such a pleasure to read!

[Misanthrope]

Oh god, your pictures are adorable xD I love the comic-like style.

[Myshia]

Interesting beginnings.. the screenshots are so perfect~~
Lot of questions to ask ;) Looking forward to read more

[singing_Noel]

Waaawww! I'm so glad you all liked it so much!

Happy, happy, happy me!

<( ^ - ^ )>

Thank you!

[LovethMia]

This is great! Your pictures are beautiful and your sims are amazing! Keep up the good work, I love it. :)

[singing_Noel]

Thank you! ^ - ^ I will!

[singing_Noel]

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[Myshia]

Beautifully shot.. love the speech bubbles <3
Surprise.. surprise..

[addict12]

I love it! Good cliffhanger btw.

[singing_Noel]

Thank you both!

^ - ^

[singing_Noel]

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[Myshia]

Love the comic theme..
pictures are so beautiful and gorgeous <3

I loved it when they hugged.. so cute ;)

[singing_Noel]

I did too. : >

Thanks again, BTW!

[LadyAwesome]

OMG Zoel - you make the most fantabulous sims. and your comic . . . shesh it's amazing. I feel like giving up mine now.

PS awesome Graphics card lol

[addict12]

ZOMG! I love this chapter~! I be your zombie fan. Keep up the good work. Your shots are amazing.

[Ziva_David_Ncis]

Love this :D

[singing_Noel]

Thanks so much you guys. You're all so incredibly kind!

Still, I wouldn't give up your story kaylarox, I think it's great, and I'd be really disappointed if you did.

^ ^

I'll try to post the third chapter soon.

Thanks again!

[LadyAwesome]

Awwww thanks. I am awaiting the next chapter :)

[surfer85]

I'm impressed. The quality of your screenshots/images is superb, which is of the utmost importance with a graphic novel like this. And the story overall has a very professional feel to it.

One little bit of constructive criticism I can offer, though, is that you can make it a little more obvious who the speech bubbles are attached to. For the first few panels, I had a hard time figuring out which character was saying what lines.

[HystericalParoxysm]

This story is fantastic! I love it - especially the way you cut away to other stuff in the scenes like the bird. So artistic and cool and gives the whole thing a great feel. I'll be watching this one! :D

[Phoeberg]

I love the detail in the scenes, it makes it look so much more real, and really original too. And you've got some beautiful shots and angles!

[singing_Noel]

Thanks so much you guys! I'm really overwhelmed by all your comments!

kaylarox: You're welcome! ^ ^

surfer85: Sorry to hear this. The reason why I try not to use arrow bubbles too much is because my main influence for this story is Japanese Manga, and Korean Manhwa, which probably seems obvious already. So I try my hardest to distinct the differences in the each character's way of speech to make it more easily evident to the reader who is speaking. Thing is, I'm also a big fan of newspaper funnies, which probably explains the horizontal paneling, as opposed to traditional vertical paneling, so it really cuts down on size, and room to position the bubbles properly.

Still, I'll try to use them more in the future, if they help.

^ ^

[LovethMia]

This is amazing! Please keep up the great work! Your pictures are beautiful and I love your Sims. : )

[amora_selvagen]

I think is perfect the way it is... It does not hurt to use the brain a bit :)

[singing_Noel]

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[LadyAwesome]

lol hot stuff, she is.

[addict12]

Wow. XD I didn't see that coming.

[amora_selvagen]

I will just go like his sister:
"O MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!"
say no, say no!!!!!
think about Suoh!!!
Thanks for this story....I am in love with!!!
:)

[Myshia]

I wonder what she decides to do...
the brother is going to be so humiliated if she turns him down ;D

[singing_Noel]

I'm so glad you all like it so much. Especially since I was like half asleep the night I did it.

>.<

Thanks again everybody!

^ ^

[dark_jean]

I love the pictures and the storyline looks so simple yet classy!! I'll be watching out for this one...:D

[singing_Noel]

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[singing_Noel]

Thanks dark_jean! Thanks to everybody!

^ ^

I'm sorry it took me so long to get this chapter up. This month's been crazy. I'm going to be moving in a week or so, so I'm really gonna try to put up the fifth and final chapter sometime this weekend, or next week. Since I probably will be without internet for a while.

Well, anyway, hope you all enjoy it! 'Til next time!

[Misanthrope]

I just love your pictures. The colors are so vibrant! I haven't played TS2 in such a long time, but I don't remember my game ever looking nearly as nice.

[LovethMia]

Great update! Bummed to hear the next chapter is the last tho. Lol, Maki and Suoh are so cute! ^ ^ Hurry back! :D

[singing_Noel]

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[LovethMia]

Brilliant. I only wish there was more! Great characters, pictures. Great story! :)

[singing_Noel]

Thanks! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it so much! ^ ^

[MintyZoi]

I really like how everything is so bright, the detail in the images are really great, as is the story.

[singing_Noel]

Thank you!

Thanks to everybody that commented, and everyone who took the time to read my story.

Means a lot to me.

^ ^

[inuaddict]

OMFG ITS OVER!? NOOO!!! too short! MOARRR i need MOARR omg this is SUCH an amazingly done story. i absoutely LOVE it! i wish i had the time and talent to do something like this. beautiful story, beautiful artwork... just.. AMAZING!!!

[singing_Noel]

O . O

Thank you...^ ^

[opheliacx]

; A ; it's so beautiful!
And Dusk looks so cute after getting a haircut!
i was wondering where did you download Dusk's hair?

[singing_Noel]

Coolsims.net

[Miyali]

I must take a moment to say I LOVE how you presented this story in a comic book style fashion. It made my inner nerd go squee! I enjoyed the story itself as well. You have a great talent and make lovely sims.

[singing_Noel]

Thank you both so much. I'm still amazed at how this story still gets messages, even though it's over and done. Makes me feel really accomplished. ^ ^

Thanks.

[Miyali]

Giving credit where it is due tis all :3

[Tasia714]

I really am enjoying your story. I like how you have made it comic book style. Well done.