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9th Jul 2011 at 6:55 AM
9th Jul 2011 at 6:55 AM
ROUND 2 SCORES CONTESTANT – OVERALL R2 SCORE – R2 AVERAGE
Traelia - 285 - 95
ChloroformDreams - 282 - 94
Misanthrope - 277 - 92.3
happymintchocolate - 271 - 90.3
LadyAwesome/kaylarox - 270 - 90
laughingtoleave - 268 - 89.3
nhayes17 - 264 - 88
alissaya - 243 - 81
Astraea Nevermore - 240 - 80
Ngluvjj - 237 - 79
Sisaly - 233 - 77.67
picass0blue - 211 - 70.3
KieraLou - 192 - 64
Shadow_Girl - 185 - 61.67
Astraea Nevermore
1 – I was hoping to see him smile and we’re not quite there yet! First picture has an appropriate pose and suitable background for the ad.
It’s missing something though. Maybe more focus on the products being sold, even if just some posters. The second pic looks more professional despite being so much simpler. Love the idea but can’t see him as a beach holiday kind of guy (no points knocked off for that though lol).
2 – I loved your photoshoots! The DJ one was very impressive. The pose and clothing were chosen right, as well. The travel agency picture is great, too. Keep it up!
Picass0blue
1 – Another sim I’m desperately waiting to see smile! Without the description for the first one I’d have though they were selling pyjamas as I see too much focus on the models and can barely see the beds. Poses all suitable though and a nice picture overall. Second picture is suitable. She really looks depressed about her PC problems. Like the techie theme. A good advertisement.
2 – The creativity for your photoshoots is great, but the model's face looks a bit awkward. The rest of the pose is okay, but the face doesn't look like she's enjoying herself. Work on it, but other that that the creativity's awesome.
Ngluvjj
1 – Love the dancing images. Looks great as an advert. Model still just remains the focus but there is too much text in my opinion - the text bottom right was mostly unnecessary. The sushi restaurant pic is great, seems fine - I would suggest that there should have been some focus on sushi in the pic -perhaps on the counter for example.
2 - I really liked the idea of a geisha, however, real geishas dyed their teeth black (yuck! lol) and shaved their eyebrows and drew them up high. The make-up would be better reflecting that. The second one was very pretty, but your model wasn't actually performing anything. If it weren't for the people in the background, it wouldn't be obvious that it was a dance class. She does look gorgeous, though.
Sisaly
1 – Not sure you chose the best pose for Wonder Woman. I’d have rather seen a more feisty pose. A great concept though and a good advert for the business. The collage effect in the second picture really enhances the advert whilst keeping the model as the main focus. An excellent advert – great makeover too!
2 - The pictures are great, but I'm not sure if it seems more like a random photo taken by a bystander or an actual photoshoot. I guess a little bit of both, lol. It does look great, though. (Note from host: technically I didn't say it had to be a photoshoot though it was kind of implied I guess. Judge 2 has not deducted points for rule breaking)
Lady Awesome/Kaylarox
1 – I love the shop window dancing idea and the pose is perfect. This would make an excellent advert. I took a point off for ‘Rules’ for the second pic as although the technique was allowed I didn’t feel there was a focus to the images. I think it should have been the first or finished makeover image but not sure which and one or the other should have been more central. I love her ‘makeover’ nonetheless. and the theming worked well with the other images used.
2 – The first photoshoot looks awesome, I love how your model was the spotlight of the picture and not just complimenting other models instead. The second one does look a lot like an advertisement, which is excellent. You did a good job this round.
Happymintchocolate
1 – I love the first pic as it does represent a very non-glam, first modelling contract. Not sure if the clothes are being appreciated by the old folks though Really like the 007 style advert. Very professional looking. Maybe could have done with some lighting? but I’m probably just nit-picking.
2 – I absolutely loved your photos! The first looks great and you did a great job. The second is really awesome, although I think the gun might scare customers if the limo service was real, lol! I like how, despite your model looking as though he were ready for a serious job, he was smiling. Nicely done.
Nhayes17
1 – Both are great pictures which meet the themes intended. The backgrounds have been just as carefully thought out as the poses. I feel that if you were advertising an ice cream hut as a new business more emphasis would have gone into the product so people had an idea of the range of ice creams sold as well as other items such as drinks etc. Second picture is fine for its use but would have liked to have seen her getting her hands dirty!
2 – Many may say my score is too high for you, but personally I really liked your photographs. Nothing against them and they're great!
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