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Old 13th Jul 2011, 11:56 PM Sucker Punch's Baby Doll (Emily Browning) #1
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I had an odd, needy desire to create Baby Doll from the movie Sucker Punch on The Sims 3. So I did what every ambitious individual would do in a time of eagerness... I marched forth, mouse in hand (or mouse pad under finger, in my case), and took hold of the slider reins. I like the way the sim turned out, and now I want to know your opinion. Is she ready to upload? Anything I could do to improve her?

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Old 14th Jul 2011, 12:25 AM #2
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So far, I think the eyes need to be a big squintier - like doe eyed.
and the lips need to me taken in a bit - they are too wide. But good job, she is pretty.

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Old 14th Jul 2011, 12:38 AM
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Old 14th Jul 2011, 02:16 AM #3
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The jaw needs to move down and be wider. I think nose a bit wider, too, and possibly shorter. Great start!
Old 14th Jul 2011, 09:22 AM #4
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Yaaay Sucker Punch! Love that movie SO much!
I think she's almost perfect, maybe the lower lip is just a bit too thick. Also, the hairstyle is right, but you should look for a retexture of it: Babydoll has gorgeous platinum blond hair, but the dark texture of the hair don't give justice to it (even though I'm pretty sure you chose the lightest shade of blond).

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Old 15th Jul 2011, 02:58 PM #5
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I think she is pretty great, hurry and upload her!!!!!!
Old 15th Jul 2011, 03:14 PM #6
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^ Unnecessary post. The OP is looking for feedback, not comments which say hurry up.
It takes time to strive to perfection, so don't post things like that.

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Old 15th Jul 2011, 03:28 PM #7
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This is a mighty good start. What I'd suggest is to pull the jaw shape slider to the left, since her jaws are more angular than that. Then move the chin downwards and decrease the jaw width accordingly to achieve the correct placement. Her jaws also need to be wider than they are now. Her nose scale should be decreased and the nose should then be moved up a click or two. And finally it'd be best to take some in-game screenshots, under room lighting (not outdoors), since sims look different in the actual gameplay than in CAS.

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Old 15th Jul 2011, 03:52 PM #8
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Fantastic job! But cas pictures are pretty moot around here. She's going to look completely different in game.
Old 15th Jul 2011, 04:08 PM #9
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Thank you everyone for the encouraging feedback! I have attempted to improve the areas that were pointed out. I am working on, possibly, retexturing the hair. Thoughts?















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Old 15th Jul 2011, 08:11 PM #10
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Nice job on the hair...much bettr. You might want to try this lipstick that gives a more puckered? lookLemonleaf's lipstick and her skn tone is way to pale...may try another skin or going to a pinker shade.

Face front - side by side comparison shots will help get the finer details
Old 15th Jul 2011, 10:13 PM #11
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The hair looks like a Newsea hair - and Newsea hairs aren't allowed to be used on uploads in MTS. If that's not a Newsea hair then it's just fine, but if it is, you'd need to find another hair in order to upload this sim.

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Old 15th Jul 2011, 11:43 PM #12
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I apologize, I didn't think about it being a pay item.

So now I need to find a free hair that's similar... anyone know of any?
Old 20th May 2012, 08:38 PM #13
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Sorry to resurrect such an old thread but I really love Baby Doll and would love to download her. Is she available somewhere please?
Old 8th Jun 2012, 03:24 AM #14
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Sadly, my Sims 3 game crashed many months ago, and I lost Baby Doll. I'd love to recreate her again sometime soon, when I reinstall, but for now this thread should be closed to replies. Thank you everyone for your help and encouragement.
Old 8th Jun 2012, 02:07 PM #15
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Just edit and delete the thread on the first page. You can do it yourself.

I'm sorry to hear about your computer. Been there myself and it's not fun when loads of work's gone.. Hope you find some time in the future to redo her Or maybe take upon some other projects!

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Old 9th Jun 2012, 12:35 AM #16
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Aww, sorry Zenimaxx, you were so close, I hope you try and make her again

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Old 31st Oct 2012, 11:51 PM DefaultHair, dude! hair! #17
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Question: Did you make that hair yourself or did you download it because i have been searching for a certain hair style but i cant find it ( http://glamazonsblog.com/wp-content...ns-blog.jpg.jpg ), so i am willing to make it so my question is how do make hair?
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