Hiya!

I feel a bit nervous posting here seeing as what, this is my first post? But I was hoping to get some feedback on my new series, Innocence. It's a novel I've been working on for nearly 4 years, but when writer's block struck a week ago, I got hooked on my forgotten Sims games and rediscovered all the glory of custom content. I've never really tried to make any Sim movies before (okay, that's a lie. I did try. About 4 years ago. With the same story. It didn't go too well, but that's also because I hadn't discovered custom content). I have however been making movies for 8 years and I love it.

This is Chapter/Episode/Part 1. I just completed Part 2 today, but was hoping to get some views before I rush ahead and upload it. Chapter 1 is quite slow. It begins by introducing my main character, Damien, and his job, and the way he interacts with those around him. It also introduces a theme of mistakes *hint hint*. That said, everything is about to change for him, for the worst. I will be using custom content, which I'm going to try and give credits to in every video description though by the look of my Downloads folder, I may or may not be able to list everything. I'm also trying my hand at my first few object recolours - yay! Wouldn't be possible without the mods and hacks and lovely items and treasures I've found here and around the other websites.

Buuut, let me know what you think? I'd be appreciative.

This is a crime/action/thriller type series, and particularly as later episodes arrive I recommend mature audiences.

Update! I don't know why I didn't do this first...

Website: http://sims2innocence.wordpress.com/
Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QE7AQBa5JBg
Full Playlist: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLC95B6B266F8D7BDE

Chapters [posted below from now on]

1 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6yGY5MOquI
2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9_SCMw1VLM
3 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dctFtZtuzpU
4 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qDk-o-w10nQ
5 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPLO2yS4u_E
6 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ehvwbw8hZ1s
7 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6y8rp_kwzpU
8 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HRgS7lAtXSY
9 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH_8VI4x84c
10 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nLzUrvPHlD8
11 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CAPlx097n7c
12 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VKO8Ka94qVs
13 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ok1XwpTuKhk
14 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e9rhGL0qE0U
15 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hgNefPYg_pA
16 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fmyboZjaNFg
17 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_HtHwY_SZU
18 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHvKqm6IoGU

Last edited by kyliesmiley16 : 3rd Jan 2013 at 1:22 AM.

I have just uploaded Chapter 2 and finished Chapter 3. It's only short, as Chapter 3 is a little more dialogue heavy and the action begins!

http://youtu.be/u9_SCMw1VLM

What begins as a pleasant, after-school walk in the park ends quite differently...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dctFtZtuzpU

Chapter 3 I would really love some feedback if you have any!

Chapters 4-6 have been uploaded. See the first post

I'm watching chapter 5 right now and i have to say I'm impressed. You have a really great story line, you stay on topic, and your shots are very clean. I can't tell you how many movies I've seen where the maker moves the camera around like their playing sims instead of making a movie. Very nice work!

Thank youu I appreciate it! I haven't uploaded any videos for a while now but there will be more on the way.

Yay! :P

I'm watching the series now, I also commented on it . I love it! It's really interesting

Next chapter is up However I haven't yet filmed anything else so it's likely there may be another delay in uploads. For more photos of the prison, check out how I made it on my blog! It will be featured in a number of upcoming episodes.

Hi guys! I know it's been a while but letting you know Chapter 9 has just been uploaded! Go check it out:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH_8VI4x84c

Took a bit of procrastination and a lot of filming! Also, Chapter 10 is guaranteed to be uploaded next weekend.

Chapter 10 , as promised

I know I've been slow, but this series is definitely still going ahead.

Yay for Chapter 11! Quite pleased with how this one turned out

Chapters 12 and 13 have been added See the first post.

*Update*

Chapter 14 as well

Last edited by kyliesmiley16 : 31st Jul 2012 at 3:45 PM.

Chapter 15 at you service

Wow! You're really dedicated to this series! From the episodes that I've watched, I really enjoyed them. I hope you still are creating more! I'd hate to see this series be left in the dust.

Thank you so much Definitely more coming. I've continued to write, create characters and lots, just a bit behind on the filming at the moment. Hopefully next chapter/s up in the next 2-3 weeks!

Chapter 16 is now up Relatively short chapter so was done sooner than expected. Next chapter or two hopefully in the next 1-2 weeks!

I just watched chapter 1. You have done a wonderful job using the movie camera. I am just learning to make movies. LOL
But I really enjoyed your movie, I will come back to watch the rest. Well done.
Simcerely,
Tasia.

Sorry for the massive delay in uploads - my life got a bit distracting! Next chapter is right here , and there are still many more to come.. hopefully sooner rather than later!