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#1 Old 29th Jan 2015 at 8:43 AM Last edited by xPennyxTallyx : 29th Jan 2015 at 9:07 AM.
Default Midnight Sun Challenge World
So I made this little island, and unimaginatively called it Fir Island. Anyways I like it but does it look any good from an unbiased POV? I'm not really practiced in world building so any comments are appreciated.

Edit: There's four common ocean spawners and one seed spawner.
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"Fear is only in our minds. But it takes over all the time."
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#2 Old 29th Jan 2015 at 9:11 AM
Fir Island is fine as a name I would be tempted, if I were you, to use more terrain paint (dark earth or sand, and so on) on your rocks under the trees to indicate the ground they've sprung from and also the natural shade that would come with the trees. Also maybe a bit of shrubbery, boxwood or scrubby bushes to add to the wildness of the place, but all that's just me. I admire anyone who has a go at challenges, as I have the attention span of a dishcloth when it comes to challenges - Good luck!
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