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#1 Old 7th Oct 2011 at 6:19 PM Last edited by heaven : 19th Dec 2011 at 4:10 PM.
Default Story Time Contest - Round 5 Scores, Final Scores and BONUS!
Foreword

I have been viewing and participating in contests for about a year now. I have noticed that most contests deal with making sims and then there are the build contests. I wanted to do something a bit different that would still challenge the contestants while still being fun to participate in.

Qualifications
  • Participated through all rounds of MTS Official Foundations contest
  • Was judge for Lifelover’s Build to Plan contest
  • Was emergency judge for missroxor’s Make Me a Model contest



Introduction

Each contestant will create a main character (see rules below for guidelines) and write a story about them in 4-5 chapters. Sounds easy? There are some twists: each round will consist of certain events/things that need to take place in the story as well as incorporating a certain line/excerpt from a book that will have to be in the contestant’s entry. The story must flow from round to round, with the same main character, finally coming to a conclusion. It can be a happy ending, or tragic or a cliffhanger (maybe this will prompt people to continue in the Sims Stories forum) or somewhere between those.

The contest will be set up in 5 rounds; starting with your introduction and ending with your conclusion. Each round will be a week long. Extensions may be granted but are not likely so please use your time wisely!

Rules
Contest Rules:
1. Forum rules apply.
2. Sims 2 and 3 allowed.
3. One entry is allowed per person. Round 1 counts as your application round.
4. CC is allowed. However, please make sure to follow MTS rules for CC; no pay content. See below for scoring related to CC.
5. There will be no eliminations.
6. Photoshop is at the extreme minimal. By this, I mean that you can add a border to your pictures, but that is it. No words, no adding images, no changing backgrounds, lighting, etc.
7. No recycled or “borrowed stories”. All stories must be original and new. If you have a story in the Sims Stories forum you MAY NOT use it. If I find you have (or have borrowed a story from the forum or anywhere else) you will be disqualified.
8. There will be a photo limit per story as well as word limit per picture. This will be stated per round. Compliance to these limits is scored. To get your word count, either use Microsoft Word, if you have it, or Word Counter. After testing several of the Round 1 entries, this was the most accurate in terms of matching Word. Pictures should follow upload guidelines: minimum of 800x600 up to a maximum of 1280x1060.
9. Grammar and spelling will NOT be judged. Please try your best but it is more important that the story is understandable and flows.
Story Rules:
10. Stories may be whatever genre and setting each contestant desires: drama, romance, fantasy, etc but make sure it can flow throughout the rounds and that CC adherence is possible.
11. Likewise, characters may be any age or species. Remember, the story will come to a conclusion; young adult or adult sims may be easiest but selection is up to the contestant’s discretion.
12. All main characters must be made by the contestant and must fit your story.
13. Stories may be written in first or third person. Again, this is up to contestant discretion but be consistent throughout all rounds.
14. Events/things and excerpt must be included each round. Excerpts must be written exactly the way they appear. If you choose to change the tense or wording, that is up to you but you risk losing points.
15. Story must be PG-13. Also, please keep cursing to a minimum and RELEVANT to your story or character. I'm not saying you CAN'T use curse words but please be thoughtful in how/why the character would use those words.
Round Explanations:
Each round will be explained in detail below. Bonus Rounds may include introducing a character or incorporating a second line into the story. Bonus Rounds are done in conjunction with your entry, not as a separate one.
There is a list below that has a list of 20 events/objects/themes (5 rounds, 2 per round means that you will only use half) that you may choose from; 2 per chapter. Additionally, you may not reuse any idea in subsequent chapters; once YOU use it, it's gone. Previously used themes may be discussed in subsequent chapters as long as there are 2 new ones. Also, you may not use new addition to family and twins, betrayal and forbidden love or funeral and tomb in the same chapter. Anything else goes and you can work it in however you want. Everything should be base game compatible. (Tomb, graduation, etc, does not have to be the expansion versions, be creative).
  • Wedding
  • Twins
  • Funeral
  • Tomb
  • Adventure
  • Paranormal Character
  • Graduation
  • Ambrosia
  • Meteor Shower
  • Mysterious Gnome
  • New Addition to Family
  • Emperor of Evil
  • Dish best served cold
  • Chance meeting
  • Betrayal
  • Forbidden love
  • Hobo/homeless
  • Murder
  • Dog days
  • Financial Times
Please remember that not all events/objects/themes have to be taken literally and at face value. It's about creativity as long as it is clear what two things you chose for each entry. You should not have to list your choices for the judges.

Prizes

Currently there are no prizes available, it’s just for fun. Anyone wishing to donate a prize please PM me.

Contestants
ContesantRound 1 Link / ScoreRound 2 Link / ScoreRound 3 Link / ScoreRound 4 Link / ScoreRound 5 Link / Score
Shhh215 | Round 10 | No Entry0 | No Entry0 | No Entry0 | No Entry
ReyaD292 | Round 1290 | Round 2288 | Round 30 | No Entry0 | No Entry
waterjay282 | Round 1268 | Round 2282 | Round 30 | No Entry0 | No Entry
blackivy274 | Round 1282 | Round 2284 | Round 30 | No Entry0 | No Entry
Myshia208.5 | Round 1226.5 | Round 20 | No Entry0 | No Entry0 | No Entry
LadyAwesome292 | Round 1271 | Round 2301 | Round 3291 | Round 4302 | Round 5
Tamlyn300 | Round 1306 | Round 2319 | Round 3307 | Round 4315 | Round 5
Elexis271 | Round 1296 | Round 2309 | Round 3309 | Round 4311 | Round 5
whitewaterwood261 | Round 1286.5 | Round 2259 | Round 30 | No Entry0 | No Entry
Morphead200.5 | Round 1157 | Round 20 | No Entry0 | No Entry0 | No Entry
missroxor243.5 | Round 1289 | Round 2304 | Round 3306 | Round 4316 | Round 5
Buckley297 | Round 1300 | Round 20 | No Entry0 | No Entry0 | No Entry


Score Details
Round 1 Scores
Round 2 Scores
Round 3 Scores
Round 4 Scores
Round 5 Scores
Final Scores and Superlatives

Judges
1. GigaRevival
2. angiebeno
3. leesester

Emergency Judges
1. heaven_sent_8_18

Judging Parameters

1. CREATIVITY 40 points overall:
  • Originality of story 10 points: Is your story unique and interesting? If it is a specific archetype do you use an unexpected twist?
  • Use of excerpt 10 points: Is your excerpt expected? Does it blend in with the story or is it plopped randomly in?
  • Development of character 10 points: Are your characters flat, one sided sims or realistic and multi-faceted? Do they have believable reactions/dialogue? Are the extraneous characters fluff or do they add to the story?
  • Events 10 points: Do the events you choose work well with the overall plot? Are the two themes tied together well? Do they make sense to be used together?

2. SCENES 30 points overall:
  • # of pictures 10 points: Did you have the correct number of pictures for the round?
  • Mood, storyline 10 points: Did your words mentally set a stage for us? Did the use of descriptive words help us “feel” the scene?
  • Use of props/staging 10 points: Did you choose appropriate scenes/props for the mood you were going for? If you are doing medieval, did you have a TV in the background? Are your angles relevant to the specific scene they are portraying?

3. FLOW 20 points: Does the story flow cohesively from one point to the next? Are your rounds consistent with each other?

4. RULE ADHERENCE 5 points: Were the events and excerpt included in your entry? Did you use photoshop? Are your word limits in line with what is stated each round? Did you use pay content? Did you use the entry form? (It is up to each judge to determine how much to penalize if a contestant goes over the word max up to a max of 5 points)

5. CC 5 points: Exclusion of CC makes creators really think and be creative with what is in game. Therefore, contestants will receive 5 points if no CC is used and 0 points if any is used. You MUST state if you used CC at the bottom of your entry. If you do not, it will be assumed that it has been used. Note: Custom worlds, poses, and store content does not count as CC.
AMENDMENT to CC RULE: Skin/hair/eyes can be used without penalty but please be sure to let judges know that you used them. Other CC, including build/buy content or clothes/accessories will count towards the points. For contestants with TS2, recolors for Maxis objects are also allowed and will not be counted as CC.

6. BONUS 10 points: Did your use of the bonus content really help move your story along? If so, how well? Was it used in an expected way? (Judges may award between 0 for no use at all and 10 for well incorporated, creative use of bonus)

Constructive criticism from the judges is encouraged but not mandatory.

Helpful Links

1. How to Write a Good Story: Used for the Sims Stories Forum but useful here as well. Continuity and Picture chapters are particularly helpful.
2. Picture Taking Tutorial: Can be used in Conjunction with above to get great pictures.
3. Elements of a Short Story: May help you better plot things out and get a better of idea of how to navigate a short story.



Round 1 – Prologue Countdown
Guidelines: Round 1 should set the tone of your story. From here, readers should be able to get a general idea what genre you are going for. This can be set up through a prologue or just diving straight into your first chapter. Remember, each subsequent chapter will need to add to this one. This round will be a little longer than the rest, as stated above. Submit 10 pictures, approximately 100 words per picture (roughly 1 paragraph).

Excerpt: “It was times like these when I thought my father, who hated guns and had never been to any wars, was the bravest man who ever lived.” Harper Lee, To Kill a Mockingbird

Round 1: Bonus Worth 10 points: Include second excerpt: “By watching her, I began to think there was some skill involved in being a girl.” Harper Lee, To Kill a Mockingbird

Round 2 – Rising Action - Countdown
Round 2 should be where your audience can begin to see what the climax of the story will be. You should be building up to something whether it be struggle or joy but this chapter should help lead us there. Because you are building up more and possibly have more dialogue, you need a maximum of 15 pictures, minimum of 10 and a maximum of 2,000 words, minimum of 1,200.

Excerpt: Choose ONE of the following quotes.
“Burdens are for shoulders strong enough to carry them.” Margaret Mitchell, Gone With the Wind
“It was better to know the worst than to wonder.” Margaret Mitchell, Gone With the Wind

Round 2: Bonus Worth 10 points
Introduce Jude Campbell into your story. He should give your character a different version of events, help your character see things from another/his point of view. It’s not necessary for your character to agree with him and he does not have to appear after this chapter. He can if you want him to though. You may change his clothes and hair and give him different traits/personality but not his overall looks; he should still be recognizable as the sim you downloaded. You are NOT allowed to age him. He is an adult (not young adult) but if you would like to add make up to give him some wrinkles or scars or eyebags or anything else you may. You may also change his hair color to whatever you would like. Make sure to get the right version for your game Ts2/Ts3!

Please include a brief summary (around 100 words) before your entry. See Example

Also, please include information listed below your entry:
Current Events: What did you use this chapter?
Previous Events: Here you will keep a running list of what you have already used.
Word Count:
CC Used: Allowed ____, Penalized: ____ This can be as simple as a yes/no response


ForeverCamp is my TS2 creator for Jude Campbell so a huge thank you to her!

Round 3 - Climax - Countdown
This should be the center conflict and turning point in your story. Leave your readers hanging on the edge of their seat? What could happen? Will things be resolved or not? You need a maximum of 13 pictures, minimum of 10 and a maximum of 1,500 words, minimum of 1,000.

Excerpt: “I wished to be loved by another, but I desire no man's pity.” J.R.R Tolkien, The Return of the King

Round 3: Bonus Worth 10 points
Include second excerpt: “Time doesn't seem to pass here: it just is.” J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring OR include an extra 300 words and 3 pictures (in black and white) of a flashback to a time before your story began. (If you choose the second option, you need a maximum of 16 pictures, minimum of 13 and a maximum of 1,800 words, minimum of 1,300.

Please include a brief summary (around 100 words) before your entry.

Also, please include information listed below your entry:
Current Events: What did you use this chapter?
Previous Events: Here you will keep a running list of what you have already used.
Word Count:
CC Used: Allowed ____, Penalized: ____ This can be as simple as a yes/no response


Round 4 – Falling Action - Countdown
Your story should start coming together at this point. Will your conflict that has been introduced be resolved? Your readers should be able to tell where the story is going and if your character will be able to settle the issues. you need a maximum of 12 pictures, minimum of 9 and a maximum of 1,200 words, minimum of 1,000.

Excerpt: Choose ONE of the following quotes.
“Never take an oath unless you're sure you would rather die than break it” Ken Follett, Pillars of the Earth
“Hunger is the best seasoning.” Ken Follett, Pillars of the Earth

Round 4: Bonus Worth 10 points
Choose a third event/theme from the main list of 20 and incorporate it along with the 2 required ones.

Please include a brief summary (around 100 words) before your entry.

Also, please include information listed below your entry:
Current Events: What did you use this chapter?
Previous Events: Here you will keep a running list of what you have already used.
Word Count:
CC Used: Allowed ____, Penalized: ____ This can be as simple as a yes/no response

Round 5 – Conclusion - Countdown
This is the final series of events. Will your characters have a happy ending? Is everything all wrapped up in a neat bow? Whatever direction your story took, your readers should feel some sense of closure. If you choose to make it a cliffhanger, close out the direction your story took to begin with and make the cliffhanger a new twist. Maximum word allowance is 2000, maximum picture allowance is 15.

Excerpt: Choose ONE of the following quotes.
“You've got to be quick on your feet in this world if you want to survive. Though once you know the rules, it’s not too hard to play the game.” Bryce Courtenay, The Power of One
“I learned that in each of us there burns a flame of independence that must never be allowed to go out. That as long as it exists within us we cannot be destroyed.” Bryce Courtenay, The Power of One
“But I was still alive, and in my book, where there's life, there's hope.” Bryce Courtenay, The Power of One

Round 5: Bonus Worth 10 points
Pick a quote. Any quote. Yes, I mean any. Choose from a book that you like and use it.

Please include a brief summary (around 100 words) before your entry.

Also, please include information listed below your entry:
Current Events: What did you use this chapter?
Previous Events: Here you will keep a running list of what you have already used.
Word Count:
CC Used: Allowed ____, Penalized: ____ This can be as simple as a yes/no response
Bonus Quote: If used, state the quote, author, and book, like each excerpt has been formatted previously.
Attached files:
File Type: rar  Jude Campbell_TS2.rar (122.6 KB, 12 downloads) - View custom content
File Type: rar  TS3_JudeCampbell.rar (409.5 KB, 23 downloads) - View custom content

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#2 Old 7th Oct 2011 at 6:21 PM
Contest Approved

Do not post replies and/or contest applications before the contest host has checked in on this thread, or your post will be deleted.
DO NOT WRITE USELESS POSTS like "Hey cool contest, I think I might join." Reserve type posts and useless posts about coming back with an application will be deleted.
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#3 Old 7th Oct 2011 at 6:37 PM Last edited by heaven_sent_8_18 : 7th Oct 2011 at 6:53 PM.
Okay, I am checking in. As stated above, the first round will be a little longer than the rest. It will end on October 15 at approximately 7am, PST (to give all you procrastinators time to burn the midnight oil). For specific amount of time yet, see the countdown. Any entries entered or edited after that time will be disqualified. Feel free to start entering now!

Heaven Sims | Avendale Legacy
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The other one
#4 Old 7th Oct 2011 at 8:10 PM
Ooh, this looks like fun! I've never really written a full story before, certainly not with sims/pictures etc (not including your backstory/sim contest) but I think I wanna accept the challenge. I don't have any plans to be out the country in the next 5 weeks so should be here for the duration, lol.

Just wanted to clarify a quick Q: the events/items...do we just have to choose any 10 (but not the combinations you already mentioned) or does it have to be an even split of 5 events and 5 items, one each per chapter?

Also, I might've missed it but how is the bonus round scored? How much will it matter if we don't do them?

Eeeee...can't wait to get started!!

Guys, rules are good! Rules help control the fun. ~ Monica E. Geller
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#5 Old 7th Oct 2011 at 8:19 PM
The 12 items listed can be used however you want. If you want to choose 2 events or 2 items, either is fine. 1 of each is also perfectly acceptable as long as the two combinations I mentioned are not used in the same chapter.

Also, the bonus round is 10 points. It will be added to your final score (for a complete total of 110 points). It is entirely optional. However, if a contestant does the bonus round each time, this will add up to a possible 50 extra points so it canbe substantial, depending on the execution. As for scoring, it will follow similar parameters as the main round. For example, Bonus Round #1 asks that you include a second excerpt. Your ten points will be assigned based on how it is used in your story in regards to creativity/flow/etc. Overall 10 points, based on judge's discretion of your use of the second excerpt.

CC usage has been amended in the main post.

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#6 Old 8th Oct 2011 at 4:18 PM
Can I be a judge in the Sim contest even if I haven't participated in a contest before?

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#7 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 1:20 AM
PMed you.

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#8 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 3:29 AM
can I be a judge? I participated in missroxor make me a model contest till the very end :D
story making is not really my thing^^;
but I love to read

My girl was in MAKE ME A MODEL! contest by missroxor

check out my facebook rp account and my tumblr for pictures
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#9 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 3:42 AM
Oh my goodness! I have so many people asking to judge! I'm really going to have to give some consideration to a lot of this queries. Keep a watch out for PMs from me if you've not already received them.

Heaven Sims | Avendale Legacy
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The other one
#10 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 4:12 AM
Quote: Originally posted by ngluvjj
story making is not really my thing^^

Aww, Hi ng. I thought you were really good at setting the scene in my contest, reckon you would be good at story telling ...and we do need more contestants! lol

Guys, rules are good! Rules help control the fun. ~ Monica E. Geller
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#11 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 3:15 PM
@ ngluvjj: I followed the Make Me a Model Contest and I agree with missroxor. You are also a great Sim creater, so no worries there.

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#12 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 5:45 PM
Alright everyone. Judging spots have been filled. So start thinking of stories and get your feet wet with story-telling! I look forward to seeing what everyone can come up with!

Heaven Sims | Avendale Legacy
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Scholar
#13 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 5:54 PM
No paysites, means no Store content? OK...
Can you edit the list of events and objects required to be included in the stories? So I know clearly, which one is the events, and which one is the objects...
Can I use cheat/mod for the Meteor shower? Or twins? Or another things that is SO hard to do for me?
Thanks! ^_^

Hey there! :)
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#14 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 6:03 PM
Quote: Originally posted by haricots
No paysites, means no Store content? OK...
Can you edit the list of events and objects required to be included in the stories? So I know clearly, which one is the events, and which one is the objects...
Can I use cheat/mod for the Meteor shower? Or twins? Or another things that is SO hard to do for me?
Thanks! ^_^


Note: Custom worlds, poses, and store content does not count as CC.
AMENDMENT to CC RULE: Skin/hair/eyes can be used without penalty but please be sure to let judges know that you used them. Other CC, including build/buy content or clothes/accessories will count towards the points.

Store Content is counted as official content, much the same as an SP or EP. So you may use it freely.

Also, as I responded to missroxor, you can choose any of the events/objects in any combination except for those listed. So 2 events, 2 objects, or 1 of each. You don't really need to know which is which, just as long as you use 2 different ones and do not repeat them in upcoming rounds. Cheats are perfectly acceptable; MOO, CFE, as well as mods such as AM and MC to create events.

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#15 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 6:06 PM
Oh, that makes things a LOT easier. Hehehe thanks! I consider join this, but bcoz I will move to Singapore 3 weeks again, I don't sure I can play Sims for about 5 weeks there...

Hey there! :)
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#16 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 6:21 PM
Well, if you can join, we'd love to have you. Either way, good luck with the move!

Heaven Sims | Avendale Legacy
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Scholar
#17 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 6:23 PM
Well, if this contest is over, and you make another storytelling contest, I'd love to join that! ^_^

Hey there! :)
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#18 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 6:24 PM
We shall see how this one goes first!

Also, I would like to welcome our judges: GigaRevival, angiebeno, and leesester, with the lovely Elexis helping out as an emergency judge.

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#19 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 6:38 PM Last edited by Shhh : 9th Oct 2011 at 7:31 PM.
I'll join . EDIT:

We post in rounds, don't we?

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#20 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 9:30 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Shhh
I'll join . EDIT:

We post in rounds, don't we?


Yes, in rounds. The first round in the first chapter, the last round will be the conclusion. So, you should be able to take all the rounds and read them continuously at the end of the contest and have a comprehensive story.

Heaven Sims | Avendale Legacy
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#21 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 10:06 PM
When we post round 2 do we post our entry for round 1 on it? (Thinking ahead )

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#22 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 10:25 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Shhh
When we post round 2 do we post our entry for round 1 on it? (Thinking ahead )


No. Just post each entry by itself. Once I get the first round in, I will make a list of contestants and will link to each of the rounds individually so someone, namely judges, can follow your progress. If you would like to put a link at the beginning of each round for your previous chapters, that is fine, but just a link please.

Also, anyone that is thinking of entering and may be done with the entry, please hold off on posting it. I am actually working on the list of events to make it 20 things instead of just 12. So this may give you some more ideas.

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#23 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 10:26 PM
Welcome everyone!

@heaven_sent_8_18: do we have a comprehensive list of contestants? And does it officially start this week, or are we still waiting on a few more? *attempts to contain excitement*

I can't wait to read everyone's awesome-sauce stories! Good luck to those that are participating.

Edit: Ninja'd. You already answered my question, so nevermind.

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#24 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 10:45 PM
I'm looking forward to seeing what else you can come up with so my story isn't to random .

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#25 Old 9th Oct 2011 at 10:48 PM
Okay, the new items added to the list are below:
  • Dish best served cold
  • Chance meeting
  • Betrayal
  • Forbidden love
  • Hobo/homeless
  • Murder
  • Dog days
  • Financial Times

Also, birth of a child has been changed to new addition to family. It still cannot be used in conjunction with twins. Also, forbidden love and betrayal may not be used in the same chapter either.

Please remember that not all events/objects/themes have to be taken literally and at face value. It's about creativity as long as it is clear what two things you chose for each entry.

All of this has been added to the main post as well.

Thank you to all those who helped me with the updated list.

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