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Old 6th Jun 2007, 10:07 PM #51
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Hey, aurora, totally unrelated question here: what time zone are you in? Just wondering so I know exactly when the deadlines are, etc....hey, wait....that's not unrelated...oh my gosh! I asked a relevant question! =0
Dangit...now I have to go wash my mouth out with soap...
Old 6th Jun 2007, 11:00 PM #52
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kiki24: Ahhh I understand. All the best with school kiki

PennyTheCorgi: Awww Sorry to see you leave Penny, there will be another 2 cycles of this contest before I possibly rotate it again from the original cycle 1, its only an idea in the works so far.

Spudjuice: As long as a male figure is in the story through out that is okay by me, you've only got about 4 hrs remaining though.

DontDieKThx: Awww I feel for Toni especially going through name changes, its never nice.

evlevnz92: I've added a countdown clock for everyone on the main page of the contest and will be updated with every round, I totally about that system thanks for reminding me

Everyone: 4 hrs remaining before closing time.

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Old 6th Jun 2007, 11:15 PM DefaultLeonard Dante - Application #53
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So it was getting late, and I'd just finished off my homework. Figured I'd go play on the Gamecube 'till I got told to go bed... but of course, Elliot had nabbed it. He had it turned way up, I could hear it from the landing. Stupid brother.

But that's not all I could hear. Mum was talking with someone in the kitchen - that man was here again!





Felix whatsisname... Mum's been going out with him for yonks, he reckons he can be my Dad or something. Always "Len, how's about you, me and Elliot go see a film?" or "Len! I spotted this game, I thought you might like it!"

I didn't wanna hear him and Mum talk mush, so I figured I might as well head back upstairs and raid the toybox or something.





Of course, that's when I caught something I didn't wanna hear. Can't remember what they said exactly, but Felix got a job somewhere in Riverblossom Heights - and he wants us to move with him! Even worse, Mum thinks it's a good idea! She can't wait to get out of the city.





When I got back to my room, I just threw myself on the bed. I don't wanna move anywhere, never mind Riverblossom Heights - that's miles and miles away! Everything I've ever known is in this city. I hate Felix, I hate him, I hate him.





I ended up with my face in the pillow for a few minutes. Ever since she met him, Mum's cared more about Felix than she does me or Elliot, always wanting to go out, or having him come over... now she wants to live with him! No!





The thoughts were dizzifying. I sat up and tried to get my head cleared up. I don't wanna move again, and this time it won't just be a house two streets away! And I definitely don't wanna live with him. I'm not gonna go, I'm not, not even if Mum nags and nags.

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((Wahey, got it in I hope there's not too much text... I counted sentences so I think it's okay!))
Old 7th Jun 2007, 12:20 AM DefaultRadley Burke's Entry #54
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Eep, wait for me! Change of plans, I was suppose to go somewhere but I couldn't so......


"Jesse, no! We've moved five times this year!" Addison whispered. "I know sweetie, but I got fired again and there's no way we can pay the bills." Jesse said, rubbing his temple. Radley bit her lip and moved closer to the doorway. They couldn't move again! She was just starting to make some friends and school was alot of fun. This always happened. Daddy would get a job for a few months and then he would get fired and they would have to move again.




Radley could feel the tears prickling at the corners of her eyes. She rubbed them away roughly. Mom was crying now, she didn't want to move either. Radley didn't blame her. This town had been one of the better ones. Good school, friends, nice house. Radley had finally been happy, and now it was all going to be taken away from her. Radley slunk a crossed the doorway, being careful not to be seen. Sliding her feet she wearily climbed the stairs to her room.




*Slam* Radley slammed the door, not caring who heard it. It was so unfair! No one ever cared if she wanted to move. No one ever cared if she was happy. Radley curled her small hands into fists, her fingernails making bloody half moons in her palms.




She glared around the room at everything she had grown to love. Radley knew what was coming, the same thing happened every time. Daddy would tell her to take anything she could fit in one box and leave the rest. She glanced sadly at the dollhouse she had gotten for her eighth birthday. It was much too big for the box, it would have to stay. Somehow this made Radley livid. It was daddies fault, he had bought her that dollhouse for her birthday. Hadn't he known they would have to move again? Without thinking Radley started kicking and punching the dollhouse until all that was left was a pile of painted wood.




Radley sat back on her heels, looking at the ruins of the dollhouse. Gone, just like everything else that mattered. With a heaving sob, she threw herself onto the floor near her bed and cried.


Old 7th Jun 2007, 12:30 AM #55
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woohoo last minute entries!! Very nice ones too! it's so cute to see all those kids
Old 7th Jun 2007, 09:23 AM #56
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Spudjuice: Awww I just want to go up and hug him, such a wonderful entry and nice staircase shots too Thankyou for joining.

PennyTheCorgi: YAH! Thankyou for joining, I really appreciate it Radley is such a sweet little thing, another sim that I just want to go up to and hug, hehe.

Liadan: Welcome Liadan and thanks for joining, yes, I really love hosting story contest, so you def won't be seeing the end of this, its always a different theme every time, so its never the same. Hoping Natalie's life is a little easier

Everyone: *Does a happy dance* :jig: Its so nice to see so many people entering, thankyou so much Spud, Penny and Liadan for joining. Round 1 is up everyone

New applicants are welcomed, but you will be doing double the load including application round and round 1, you are welcomed to do them in 2 parts but you will be eliminated if you do not have both application round and round 1 completed on the last day of round 1.

Thankyou

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Old 7th Jun 2007, 09:46 AM #57
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Awe! another New Chapter! Good luck everone! Hi Aurora!

I'd Enter, but I've got 3 RPs and a contest going on, lol...

It's all just a matter of time now!
Old 7th Jun 2007, 09:52 AM #58
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foolinthemoon: Hi, :wave: Nice to see you foolin Oh dear, it does sound like you have lots to do, well, there's always next cycle if you wish

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Old 7th Jun 2007, 09:00 PM DefaultLeonard Dante - Round 1, Option B #59
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By morning, I knew I was just being selfish - I'm only told off for it every five minutes. "The world doesn't revolve around you, Len!" my Mum says, over and over. It's not like she's gonna listen to me when I say I don't wanna go. I figured I'd spare myself a lecture and make a bit of an effort to sort my stuff out.





At some point Mum came in my room to call me down for breakfast. She had no idea what I was doing, but when I told her, she let out the hugest sigh ever. Told me yeah, we were gonna move, but not for a while, so I should unpack my stuff. Then she reminded me again how big a pain I am, and how she never had this trouble with Elliot.





But yeah, she's real excited. She was talking about it right through breakfast - how we're gonna stay here for a month or so while Felix gets the house sorted, how great Felix's new job is, how it's wonderful that we get to see new places and meet new people... She's not even asked me or Elliot what we think about it, though even Elliot's all happy about it.





I was the only one who didn't like the idea. Felix could tell, and in typical Felix style started going on about how awesome it'd be, and how we'd even have room for a dog. For a moment I thought about how long Mum's been wanting to get out of the city, and how Elliot'd finally get rid of those bullies. I could deal... I guess...





But then when Felix went off to the toilet or whatever, Mum comes over to and starts giving me this massive lecture! The usual rubbish, about how she knows how I must feel and how Felix isn't trying to replace anyone, and that I should try and be nice to him... 'cause it's all about Felix.





That's just stupid! I was making an effort, and now I'm getting a right telling off for doing nothing at all! I might get snapped at for being selfish, but I know I'm not the only selfish person in this house!

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((Ooh, I feel a bit iffy on this, being the first one at it and all! Had no idea how to tackle it for a bit, given that Len was all "WILL NOT GO!" on the application round... here's hoping it doesn't come off too bad! And that I've got it right, since I'm always nervous about these things...))
Old 7th Jun 2007, 10:08 PM #60
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Spudjuice: As long as you combine the first opening paragraph and option B together, then you've got a perfect entry, you've done exceptionally well considering this is for your time entering in this contest Spud, good work and a lovely set out as well

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Old 8th Jun 2007, 08:18 AM
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Old 8th Jun 2007, 08:19 AM DefaultGarron Pleasant, round 1, option C #61
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Garron woke up early that morning, vengeful. He checked to see that his parents weren't awake, and then began to throw clothes and toys into his backpack. May as well, they don't care what I think, may as well just pack... His thoughts were interrupted as he heard the door open behind him.



"Garron? What's going on, hon?" It was his mom, Lillith, rubbing sleep from her eyes.
"We're moving, right? You didn't want to tell me about it, but I know. Jeez, Mom, the least you could have done was tell me..." Garron was horrified to find himself close to tears. She knelt next to him, hugged him. "Garron, I'm sorry. We only decided last night, honey, we were going to tell you this morning."



She dried his eyes. That was what Garron loved most about his mother, her tenderness. Well, that was when she wasn't working or sleeping.
"We're going to go out to breakfast, okay? You, me, and your dad. And we're going to talk this move over. Come on, get dressed. We'll be waiting."
Garron wiped his face and obeyed as she left the room.



At the resteraunt, Garron ordered an omelette, the cheapest thing on the menu. His parents did too, and they all acted enthusiastic about their food. Garron had wanted pancakes, but why strain the budget even further?
"Okay, kid, here's what your mom and I decided." said Garron's father, Dirk. "We want to move to another town. There's an opening for a teacher's aide there that I've been offered, and it could turn into a full on teaching job. And we'll be away from your grandparents, which will be good for all of us."



Garron sighed, pushed at the remains of his eggs. They looked nasty.
"But," his mother continued where his father left off, "It's not set in stone yet. We're still looking for a house, and we don't want to make such a big decision without you." Her voice softened as she said, "We know we haven't always been there for you, honey. And we want to change that. But if we move, we might not be around for a little while longer."

"So...I get to decide?" Garron asked, incredulous. His parents nodded, and his dad added, "Well, you get a say in it. We're going to decide this as a family. Okay?" Garron gave a weak little grin. He was overcome for a moment, then recovered himself.
"Do I have to choose right now?" He asked. Lillith laughed.
"No, hon, we've got some time. Think about it, okay? We don't want to rush into anything."



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Old 8th Jun 2007, 06:24 PM #62
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I'll probabaly have mine up tonight, I've got 2 days off after tonight ^.^.
Old 8th Jun 2007, 09:04 PM #63
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Omg!! It's lillith and Dirk Dreamer!! loool!!
Old 8th Jun 2007, 09:48 PM #64
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Spudjuice: Yah! I really like your entry Spudjuice, I feel for the kid though, it seems Felix is the only one that is important to her :mean:

Julieth: Its always nice when the kids get to have their own say in something important but still its not like he can say that I don't want to leave

Kakashi_Hatake: Wonderful, thankyou Kakashi

.~*Iris*~.: May I borrow your eyes please Iris? I wouldn't have known that at all hehe.

Everyone: 1 day to go before closing! Make sure you have your entries in by the 10th, countdown clock is on the first main page

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Old 8th Jun 2007, 10:06 PM DefaultLindsay Tranton - Round 1 - Option C #65
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You know how people say "sleep on it"? Well... I slept on it. The next morning I was calmer, and thought that if they really wanted to move again, it meant that it was important. And Mom crying meant it was really really important. My parents are not the stupid type... well at least they're the less stupid I've ever seen. They wouldn't want to move if it wasn't for a good cause. I only wished they would be honest with me and explain to me why we had been living like migratory birds our whole lives. Well at least my whole life. Always aiming for the sun and always being deceived by winter. Thus, I wanted to prove to them that I was a big girl and that I could understand, so I started packing.




I had become a professionnal at folding clothes neatly and fixing up my suitcases in an organized way. I had gone through half my stuff when I felt a lump in my throat and decided to rest for a few minutes. I had started day-dreaming on my bed when I heard my parents walk in the room. I got up and looked at them. They looked quite surprised. Yeah, they didn't know I had heard them.
"I'm almost done! I still have some clothes to put away. But Daddy, I don't want to leave Pokey behind like we did with my teddy bear last year! Can't I take him? Please? I'll find some room for him I promise!"
They both looked at me with an affectionate expression on their faces




"Oh Lindsay... Come on, leave everything now, we're taking you to eat your favorite meal in the whole world.", Daddy said.
"We're going to Roadster???"
"Yes we are!", answered Mom
"To eat pancakes??????"
"Yes my darling, come on let's go!"

I screamed with delight. Roadster's diner had the best pancakes in the entire universe!




The smell of my chocolate pancakes soothed me for a while.
"Honey, we figured you know about us moving again..."
I didn't answer, just waited for explanations.
"Look... we think you've grown, and now there are things we can tell you that we couldn't before. You were too young to understand..."
"It's Mr. Romano isn't it? He has something to do with Daddy, doesn't he?"
"Don't call him Mr. Romano... he doesn't deserve any respect from anyone. Especially not you."
, Dad mumbled.




Mom put her hand on his and continued.
"Yes honey... he's a very very bad man, and has been very very mean to your dad. And we just want nothing to do with him, that's why we keep moving when he finds out where we are."
"But can't you call the police?"
"It's a little more complicated than that Lindsay, darling"
, said my dad, trying to smile, but his tone was full of sorrow.
"So we have to keep running away from him? But that means we can never decide of anything!"




"Well, we think we can... Lindsay, we don't want to scare you, but this man can harm us. But if you really want to stay here, maybe we could try to work something out."
"You're actually asking for my opinion?"
"Yes Lindsay. Even if you thought it didn't mean anything to us, your thoughts matter to us very much. And we've acted until now for your best interest, have no doubt about that. We just think you're big enough now to tell us what you have on your mind."

That's all I needed to know. That they cared about my feelings: "Whatever you think is best... but I'm sad of leaving. I am happy here..."I knew hearing this from me hurt them. But it was the truth.
Old 8th Jun 2007, 10:15 PM #66
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.~*Iris*~.: Awww what an update, I really enjoyed it Please remember to include your option in your subject title could you add that for me please Sweet entry

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Old 8th Jun 2007, 10:32 PM #67
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Wow, I'm loving these round 1 entries =) Lindsay's dad is very attractive Iris *drools*
Old 8th Jun 2007, 10:46 PM #68
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oooh sorry aurora, forgot about the option in the title! but I fixed it Is it too long? the text I mean... cause I tried to make it as short as possible but you know how I am when it comes to story writting...

FireAzor:yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyy!! you think he's hot too?? I'm like in love with him! thanks!
Old 8th Jun 2007, 11:13 PM #69
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Well, it's a little tough to get an unbiased perspective in first person :P

Oh, and Lindsay is still so awesome. Her dad is hot, too, so I also contribute to the drool-puddle.
Old 9th Jun 2007, 07:34 AM #70
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Mmm, yes...Iris, what is it with you and amazingly hot sim men?
Heh, you're right, it's Dirk and Lillith...they're my favorite family right now and I was like, if I'm going to be playing them anyway, why not make them a part of Aurora's contest?

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Old 9th Jun 2007, 08:09 AM #71
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... just poking in to say that the contest looks absolutely wonderful Aurora!! :thumb:
and all of these entries look AMAZING!!! I'll be watching from the sidelines for sure! Good luck everyone!! :D

Old 9th Jun 2007, 06:17 PM DefaultMae Thompson-Round 1-Option C #72
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I sat down in my room and glared at the door, waiting for my stupid parents to walk in. Everything was packed up, and I was ready to go. I heard them walk up the stairs, and I started to shake. No repeat performances, idiot, I told myself, blinking back the tears in my eyes. “Mae?” My mother stuck her head into my room and opened her mouth as if to say something, but stopped. Good. Now she knew what I felt like.




“...Mae? What is all of this?” She asked quietly, almost like she was trying not to cry. Good for her.
“Well, let’s get going. We’re moving again, aren’t we?” Even I could feel the holes I was burning into her with my stare. “Feels pretty good to know you’ve screwed me over once again, huh, mom?”
And then, before I could put in another word, she started to laugh. SHE STARTED TO LAUGH!





My dad must have heard her, because within moments, he was in my room, laughing it up as well. “I hate you both!” I screamed at them. “It’s real hilarious that your daughter’s life is over, right?! HAHA!” They tried to restrain their laughter.
“Mae, it’s just...” my mom started to say.
“Mae, go get dressed. We’re going to the diner,” my dad finished for her, acting a bit more serious now.





We had pancakes at the diner, and in between bites my parents tried to “explain the situation” to me like “mature adults.”
“Mae, you have to understand that we have no control over this. We’ve been a little...well, low on funds lately, and your grandmother has hooked me up with a really great job,” my dad said.
“Why couldn’t she get you a job here?” I snarled.
“Kid, it’s not that simple.”





“Look, Mae, it’s not all bad. The neighborhood there has tons of other families with kids your age. We went to check it out last month and I KNOW you’ll love it,” my mom said.
“Gimme a break. The other kids will probably just be a bunch of prissie girly-girls like the last time we moved. I’m happy HERE! PLEASE,” I pleaded.
My parents exchanged glances and sighed.





“What if we let YOU decide when to move?” my mom asked. My dad started to protest but she stopped him.
“Fine,” I said. They let out relieved sighs. “Never.”
“Mae!” my dad yelled. “You’re really being difficult! We’re trying to compromise here, but you’re acting like a spoiled brat!” I pushed away my plate of pancakes and ran out of there as fast as I could.
Old 9th Jun 2007, 07:36 PM #73
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I'm going to take pictures now. >3
Old 9th Jun 2007, 08:58 PM #74
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sadly I'm going to have to bow out, I've been ill lately and should be resting. Plus the fact that I can't figure out how to resize pictures so they fit within the rules . I've tried everything and the quality just keeps getting worse..I am sorry I really wanted to do this contest too...
Old 9th Jun 2007, 10:26 PM #75
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wait a minute... we still have 4 hours and only 5 people submitted round 1???
 


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