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17th Apr 2011, 2:19 PM
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 4 CyberGoth Tops and 4 Gothic Blouses With Corsets. Need feedback!
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psych
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Any feedback is appreciated. 
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Cornix Blackshed. on GoS. |
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17th Apr 2011, 3:16 PM
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Johnny_Bravo
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Could you take pictures of it with your models in normal/neutral poses, please? Would even be better with a totally white background
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17th Apr 2011, 3:25 PM
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levini
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i dont know .. but the bras under the netting... would possibly be better on top ... |
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17th Apr 2011, 4:31 PM
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ShineShine
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The netting is a little bit blurry in some places, like over the knee, around the belly etc. Can you see it? And try to soften the shadows/ shines on the gloves. So that they're not so dark black, so light white. |
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17th Apr 2011, 4:33 PM
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That doesn't sound very comfortable I personally like these, but I think you should do something with the part on the gloves that is closest to the fingers. It seem a bit flat. | |
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17th Apr 2011, 4:42 PM
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psych
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So you seem to feedback only about the fishnet tops, and I guess everything is okay with the bodices then. )@Zandvoort: Sure! Will upload them later tho. Thanks. ^^@levini: I don't really know... it would be kinda wrong. But I think I have an idea how to do that.. Just cut the net parts between arms and bra edge, that'd look nice. @ShineShine: I only made the tops  so the bottoms don't matter at all. But yeah, i can se the blurriness on the belly. Should be able to fix that... And the glove shading too. Thanks. :D@malfoya: Yup, will fix the gloves. Ty. ^^ |
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Cornix Blackshed. on GoS. |
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17th Apr 2011, 5:16 PM
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psych
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Here are the screenshots with white bg. |
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Cornix Blackshed. on GoS. |
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29th Apr 2011, 8:23 PM
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Nestraya
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the netting on the top looks odd to me. the bigger holes make me think the fabric is stretching, but some of the biggest holes are over the narrowest part of the body. i think the change from small to big holes should be a bit more gradual too. |
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30th Apr 2011, 3:27 AM
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whitewaterwood
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The netting is stretched in one area, giving her a slightly tubby look around the belly. It may be UV-mapping or texture. Also, on the netted outfit, the choker looks very bland and flat-shaded. I think a little bit of defining texture would help it. Not tiny details, though. It's too small for that. Overall, though. These are really nice! The corset tops look especially fantastic. Can't wait to see it uploaded.
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30th Apr 2011, 1:16 PM
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simarillion
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The netting seems very blurred near the neck, rips and the edge of the leg. The glove has a black streak where the glove goes back to the arm and the wrinkles by the thumb seem over shaded? Taking pictures at your highest graphic settings may help to see more of the fine details. Overall though it is a really good outfit ^_^ |
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