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| Kitagawawolf16 |
CHANGED TO: "Rising Dawn"
![]() Dawn Shye had recently moved to Sunset Valley, pursuing to be the most illustrious author around town. As days passed by, she began to make friends and enemies, and even reluctantly falling in love with the charismatic schmoozer, Jericho Daring. Meanwhile, Vita Alto had recently and unbelievably won the campaign to be the town's mayor; it was a nightmare coming true for the citizens of the valley, especially the Landgraabs. Sunset Valley had became more mysterious and dangerous at night with strange meetings at night, involving Nick Alto. |
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Last edited by Kitagawawolf16 : 2nd Aug 2011 at 11:34 AM.
Reason: New Title
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LizaLizBethy
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Join Date: Jul 2005 |
I'm intrigued! I'd love to see more! |
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| Kitagawawolf16 |
Rising Dawn Unseen It was a cold night, the last night of winter and it was the worst of yet. The harsh wind blew against my tear-dried face and the sound of the horse-powered engine was soothing to my ear like music, keeping me focused on the road. My mind tend to sway though to that horrible news as I found myself mumbling, "Damn you...stupid father..." I could never comprehend the action he had taken, the length of it that he had to take. But then again, I would never understand what he had to go through, the reason why he did all of those things to our neighbors, to our beloved home, to Mom, and to me. ![]() I never came to call him as my father until a few weeks ago after I finally took over his mansion and took every single penny from him. He came to me with a new advance, an honorable pleasant man holding on to whatever dignity he had left. He did not ask for anything; he only spend his time with me then he walked out the door with his cane and tipping his hat and said, "Have a good day." ![]() He was nothing but a carcass now, buried beneath the grass and placed with a marble grave and golden plate, honoring the dead. Nothing could describe the awful despair inside of me plunging me into the darkness. I wanted to know him...I wanted to know who this man really was before sinful greed took over his mind. |
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nainai
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ooooh, intriguing! can't wait for more!
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Lady Gray to Winston Churchill: Sir, if I were your wife I would poison your drink!
Winston Churchill to Lady Gray: Lady, if I were your husband, I would drink it. ps. want to read some stuff? click here and I shall love you forever. maybe. |
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Myshia
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Join Date: Dec 2008 |
Interesting.. i'm intrigued. Storyline already seems and feels brilliant <3 Such short updates BUT... can't wait for more |
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