This is a Dragon Ball fanfic through the eyes of my o.c. (original character). two planets are at war, while one enemy tries to destroy the earth. here is the url:

http://77sparrow77.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d39iw63

please read it tell your friends about it too. please. thank you for your time. I'm open to creative criticism but not stuff like "you suck!" with no basis for your reasoning.