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can't help feeling that the image was cropped a little short on the right.
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I needed to crop it, because I'm permanently playing with boolprop on and because of that there are those stupid numbers in the upper right corner.
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Seeing a little of what she's facing -even if it's just some road- I feel would give the viewer a sense of what she was facing by running out
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Yeah, I knew about it, but it was impossible for me to make such shot. My aim was to focus on her face expression. Without zooming in - impossible :]
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A more expressive facial expression could have been used, however.
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I wanted her face to stay more-less neutral. She was scared (her husband might wake up and she would be caught then) but at the same time she knew that if she succeed, she will be finally free and happy.
Thanks for feedback
And congrats to the winners!
To be honest I was thinking about making "That should be me" (I even had a nice story connected with it), but I realized that it would be too easy
And the scene of my "Breakout" is from the simstory I've been writing recently
Anyway, taking part in the contest was great fun for me and many thanks to the host, the judges and other contestants - good job! :D